【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
$ F# X4 f  Q' Z( b5 A/ H  z! ixxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 G; E% T5 }# l5 c7 W皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
- F; Q% H" t7 t: rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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8 K# A5 ?  C) uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
- y) S1 [" c) T! n; R1 `. g7 cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
$ i" z& v" u+ YThe sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空
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% ~# c$ F! h/ y! x# vWith the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
2 J3 Z6 E+ e* z  S8 V, [% eSeeing the sky content with its love
" w* g) ^) q6 g  C夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
) V; z4 o; u+ E( _* s3 z" e  T# Q我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
2 n/ r; X$ D7 [1 V. p3 f1 WYou needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 Q. T1 @# m: [我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
2 ], K+ S7 }7 X0 ^Every other word you utter is love
( I  T" V2 M9 g2 G$ [1 V$ O2 P口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
; v+ ~) c! W5 l. L真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
, u3 l% G! {; `# }) V" M, x世间万物  皆不能比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
: M7 c- Y% b) G2 P' B0 f/ n6 I5 S: L8 BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ Y3 G4 Q1 z0 N整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
; Y3 X# [& F3 n; W* NI want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
8 p1 X0 |% y3 i+ B% n- A- PI invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
8 \4 m4 H6 \$ p/ g: j2 XTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
4 @; l# K; g/ Z2 s" MI’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 H7 }  I2 _9 v9 ~/ M# h8 S你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
" `% Z  z+ R$ @5 x( h+ QI regret not dying
/ Y8 U0 o. @, [5 E  M0 G  W真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
5 E$ j5 [: r8 J3 E) nIt’s nothing close to 100,000
4 q' |% `* C  a# L  o) v; A9 v也恨不得  多如千万
# Q+ a+ [) p; z' Z" Z( L7 i/ _$ EWith such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. i. q0 N" X5 i. x3 K: a8 @3 n) ?若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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' P$ \7 c/ H5 F- BThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' Q% K8 L0 X. ]8 D. Q9 ~爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
6 d' h' ]1 B/ q3 s& QFrom the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
! l  k+ z3 Y* H! w4 P3 cI already loved you with all my heart
/ p% G' x9 I1 I  L. i* ?1 l从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
! D" L8 w4 \' O' L! Q. O你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
: a9 ?/ P/ R2 p! k- k奈何从未谈及内心
3 Z5 P& G' S& wIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
; n" @2 r: w1 @/ i* ?* RI would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
2 F$ V! T4 k, [2 j8 x7 z+ }& gLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
; G0 j% V/ W  D; R& m) rWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 a5 H# P! N% T7 S8 l. V# c为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
1 {8 g  S8 z& l却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
3 @1 ^6 [+ T4 k+ I+ G, J+ jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( {2 C: ~1 o- N6 c, g不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

! f1 ?1 q! Q% {Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
, \) B% N: [2 N( C6 c: m+ J为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
  i/ j4 r$ y, M* [我多想向你表白
! p  A0 @! }! C6 B& H" o4 uBut I never did
! {! Q- M1 |, u+ z1 y! c却始终未曾出口
6 V# V' T1 u. t0 ^0 X/ ~0 F8 DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 X2 k' ?: o& E, j) E只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
5 `3 D/ @5 F. U5 {% L: I& t, \( hIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
- I3 f' a1 ~1 r" w$ q& Y# w: QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, U7 a1 G8 k  `$ c$ ~不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
( M3 q" F* r) u% `8 TEntrust my love within your heart
# S; D3 v6 J- y" L' X9 c从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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( I+ w" ~" I6 d3 f# GCan I entrust it to you?
* K5 h* X9 o, Y9 F% C7 c7 {: y可否将它托付于你？
$ E; g% \7 l4 ?% pEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
- H$ y' ~1 \. l3 y) U老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
: N5 D8 @3 A1 E3 Z! q% P( z% n' D刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。