【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
/ k- U  x( n5 [( Z9 evichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

+ o2 l: e; h' p+ M4 B- i/ _: Z再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
3 h3 W) i& @4 y& r% \3 E6 d, k! S
/ [/ c$ K. r/ h! ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
. D1 w2 c; Q0 j7 s' f" q* m皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
7 k/ e! z& F# b5 w7 |Making the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

0 B; S$ s, D" @# i# iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 ?( U7 L% N: d8 Z/ P凝视明月 我心欢畅
. k0 g. [% S" O, [/ V0 EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空
) E8 U# R* h, L; B# @
With the moon kissing it every night
$ d! R* p) j! g看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
0 G) x/ Y, [0 v; l1 s+ VSeeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
8 D8 e, g; z4 E3 v7 KYou needn’t fear anything
怕这怕那 又是何苦
. R: ~( ]) b& dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
6 [- _2 r9 O5 n9 {% Y- }Every other word you utter is love
2 z) X* a  _* c1 C口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 ~. b+ W" E- A5 |* h爱你爱你 全心全意
' \% i5 L, Z3 P' @( k& gNothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
, m3 l' o; [: u% k7 r: tI want so much to see inside your heart
! q5 t3 l7 z( c; N& ?我真想看透你的心
* a+ j7 ~) r0 D, _I invite you to rip it out
" W/ f/ P  n, p! ]; d* D你尽管把它掏去
5 `" q9 P' ~) w6 NTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
  t3 P3 }& Q( oI’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
  F* _, _) E$ x4 gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
/ Q! ^6 b) C# G& x3 D! k$ a$ U* dI only have one tongue
( d2 m' b4 p  N我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
/ f8 K2 \2 s6 s7 {7 W: f& t$ YIt’s nothing close to 100,000
" c7 @; ]4 V' g& D  V; N也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
& t: H# b% ]% `: X你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% q3 o, S! F3 [9 i  I能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 A3 y- C6 }5 I6 B若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
3 q  x& t! j. q- g- A: RRambling on about a thousand words of love
( J7 @6 C) n" |9 K, l: c8 y向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
4 d. Z' ?  [, e# f" B$ `7 v+ V3 G从未向你吐露衷情
% A* Y2 I- @0 k7 I* \2 U2 _2 |That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 R$ |. h& B6 s7 I; m爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
) U. }6 Y* `" |4 q6 M* lFrom the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
! j  P9 H1 ?- ^( A8 _I already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
- ]$ p5 `  \  E7 F8 u+ O0 |; d. h你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- t( T+ j4 h& G) a奈何从未谈及内心
4 |! ^( y. `0 Q' nIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! `9 V7 Z6 y: J& f+ c" T6 p; w: p6 D若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
3 T' q& M8 }% n# [爱呀，爱就一个字
% d) z8 x2 A6 U" D, i1 qWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
3 N+ Z. B7 z* dI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
0 `8 ~2 t# U+ N$ yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! e' K4 y  i* I7 Y今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
* n2 e5 E: d- z- D$ h  b# X0 F4 wI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ n/ v; M6 e4 J3 K% G2 v不愿这份爱 逝如流水
* X5 a. C" j9 L' c8 B) R3 jCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
. ^: [- C  z5 R2 NEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

Love… just the word love
/ X1 W' ]8 e+ u' Y爱呀，爱就一个字
# ^9 b& f  O  {+ h% \  H! ~" AWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
  T% x" I4 z  u& K6 P* qI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
6 I" z# J. t& n, M) }But I never did
, o9 L  s! @/ e  c& T却始终未曾出口
  y0 S0 V2 U0 O% l7 n  `1 KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
/ b- }! W8 T! C  ?- x% g7 JIf today isn’t too late,
8 e& o' m' T( u' I% b# W假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- A6 }' t0 s5 I, S6 k3 K! s; Z) \- S今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
# d" y0 s/ G& `" d6 OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
$ A+ V* }; v6 \- @可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
' H& A. e" _  a' {2 u! v从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
: s. i5 g8 s5 y  J# r
: f% b+ Q3 N; K5 `Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
* a4 L) N) Z; S: U, C0 x1 GEntrust my love within your heart
1 _3 D; n. Z' B- L从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
9 h6 b0 R* u1 B刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
0 x* O6 u3 p, d. S( o老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
4 S! }' R2 k. O2 s2 p刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。