【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

9 E% X* `$ d) e7 O9 R% ?一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

1 V% u  V: z! _再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

4 {' s0 s; o7 W/ PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 C8 u/ J2 [1 A5 H夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂
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" m( U# X- g1 s% v* {( y( Z/ W) {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 C& b7 l' J1 T+ U' K/ ]& |凝视明月 我心欢畅
4 U6 K) i0 D- SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ g3 E2 r& ?7 N- K8 B! t' b月光闪烁 在我眼中
$ t- Z9 H1 |$ g- r1 k) e* OThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ j7 n6 k  b- q% G一片丹心 照耀夜空
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With the moon kissing it every night
% W8 `! D7 N, a# S( p4 h看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 l% p5 W+ O9 z; J$ B7 d夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
9 H/ R, k, e; x, h2 HIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
' S: i& K5 a( x* ?' ]You needn’t fear anything
3 Q/ g1 g- \. M; W5 D怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
% {; a, g  u2 EEvery other word you utter is love
0 P; ]' V( D. e口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
; g, N0 N1 [0 C% c+ N真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
5 I0 f3 y- U. G  h2 z# SI love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
1 p! G, O% w# Y% ~- V4 U. Z0 J世间万物  皆不能比

) L; p: p$ l& x! z" i9 m. ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
: c" {5 {! L$ t% [8 o我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
/ g8 e2 H, p. QTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
% `- ]  F  M5 g# @5 R: tI’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
+ z. G' M, i2 M# P! TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ b5 p" @9 l* N0 P( H/ i' R你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
2 j* Q- G7 K' B6 hI only have one tongue
4 K5 K; }# k% o5 S  G8 p0 E6 K我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
6 I. c  I) d! v5 L# x5 tIt’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
3 P% {3 m3 u+ YWith such a tongue as yours,
* |! y  u- m9 ~, ^6 Y你这张嘴 真真厉害
6 Q6 q# n9 r3 E3 MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) o5 J: b2 p: Z能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

# S0 |+ _. e6 R7 E- s  QThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 ?3 l$ d  r9 J7 i" P6 u从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 |0 Q: s0 O- o* Q/ z爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
8 P$ x$ |: y' F! p% \# J) PI already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
$ |0 a0 |# F! `" s  @8 EWe meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
0 U) e7 _- @& }0 d$ HBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
$ ?  G3 e. U4 CIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
/ a9 f# e; i; |I would probably know how you feel
" Y( Z; f) l' s# t& F8 ?3 S或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
* n4 y, z0 B/ e4 _2 zWhy is it so difficult to express?
- n( S7 v2 q' s; c) @为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
( V; N1 t4 B* J) z3 e& CIf today isn’t too late,
6 {; S$ B1 i' x7 H- S假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 {# `+ O" P- O不愿这份爱 逝如流水
3 M" |3 i% k2 _) ~9 bCan I entrust it to you?
# @& Y6 |8 r( `  B" }可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

Love… just the word love
3 O3 s+ c$ m& y爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
$ R9 |- s8 a( EI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
  B  p8 g$ q- l! {5 t2 WBut I never did
3 {) ^7 l( `" R1 {1 S7 I却始终未曾出口
3 _+ l$ b+ x  \( l: G" t6 mOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! [5 i' M$ e7 B  H只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
8 T4 q0 a5 b0 g& jIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
5 C$ r6 ]6 x$ z7 _1 NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 {# U3 P7 M: C( K5 s  f' Q今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
0 d1 D( v+ p$ @Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
$ U5 M8 s0 [6 P" r4 j' o从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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6 g. W' ?% i+ Z# f6 }Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
& z% @5 |7 d  E) C) e% o1 ?* j从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
. V0 }/ E6 J$ e8 u1 v老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
6 j( F8 D" K9 O9 }' ?老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
# i4 j" d$ s2 a+ Q9 rvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

0 @# w4 D2 \* `不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。