【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
2 Y7 ]& `* k8 V" C( H# _. u7 w袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

8 D# ]8 v, c7 L; ?8 H9 rThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
: |1 `1 j3 `# X) L我愛你  

: s; I* S/ E0 f- IFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart

1 u2 T0 i0 v5 W6 n在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
' q6 c$ E  L' j! U+ \我的心

* I5 \2 N8 R* K/ a# {We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

縱然朝夕相處
還是不能肯定你的心意

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! @' j& N- Q1 t! Z$ DI would probably know how you feel
: J( ]7 \$ z5 ~/ s$ m; B凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
你的心情
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1 j. q$ @  u& b# D' C. r+ tLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
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+ V3 E# o& ]9 E7 SI want to confess that I love you,
; A) y' c$ w) H: d1 SBut I never did
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# j; ?* r% _0 u$ a5 T& _1 y3 a愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
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9 k! p4 G  T, e, @1 ^: JIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
9 I2 B7 x0 w( ]) z; `- M9 ]' k  r讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密

I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

- B5 Q9 O. `+ K5 ^' |不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

# b# [  E9 u1 t/ ?. @& Z) lCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
4 P  a* L& X' c( e1 ]托付我的愛
+ Z: G4 }+ r5 @9 j" C收在你心裡

, a; b8 p8 s0 I8 pLove… just the word love
  c  ?9 G, X- w# c; N5 r7 x5 r: qWhy is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?
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& ~8 p& _  A! y& pI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did

愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來
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5 E1 U- n$ u0 c) p$ P- m3 hOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers

* O7 I6 ^  u, N1 c也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

' u/ Q. z3 _( w6 gIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

" }4 z: ?. w5 V! r: Y+ T8 K6 q希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
& x* K- \2 s/ L  s: Z& q  M我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡
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/ S! \: P6 ^* l4 Y2 Z* [8 qCan I entrust it to you?
3 g6 U, P+ K# h4 LEntrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡

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: e. S* v! f' d5 L0 c8 }. v- [对唱曲参赛译稿
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  C( Y9 H$ @! _2 [5 WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) `- O. F' u7 ^! d8 }Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 f2 [' A; {/ `6 Q" q  f" `. iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

- g) a2 b2 W' d4 q( ?4 Y7 E( L皎潔月光下
天空金銀閃爍
凝視著星空
我心充滿快樂

The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ z$ L1 y9 W3 x- [# a' wThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ P8 _3 J9 [% j' d; aWith the moon kissing it every night
0 T* H5 O  q( ~. g& ESeeing the sky content with its love
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0 K: `5 o( g7 f6 _" Y- P8 b- t月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂
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It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

) ]9 p. B3 A% [/ p/ L# v& Y2 t我心卻充斥著憂鬱
3 ?! S! ^) G, I0 C: W害怕我們的愛
8 L- [) o4 S0 E) q3 }終將逝去

You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

& |# R; [; [0 V你勿須擔心憂鬱
( k# o) {3 `0 x( i8 L0 |/ S6 H我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
4 ~$ V) k' k- J: W0 ?  r堅定不渝
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Every other word you utter is love
( x- L! V4 x7 JI really want to know just how much you love me

. q" j; a0 i- i2 _你的一言一語都是愛
+ d% @$ k/ x0 i* x. C我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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I love you I love you with all my heart
" p5 _! l: v, P3 w$ T, E, ANothing can compare to my love

: Q% {# O2 t% ^7 \1 `! k$ [我的愛 全心全意
1 U1 W6 D+ _$ ]" k# q你要知道 我的愛無與倫比
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3 T  i% j& w  B" `# i8 n% A& WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?

( N5 H4 Q4 L9 G能覆蓋半個天空嗎?

' y! G* p5 m  q: K/ e- BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% Q2 H) E1 |4 m$ o: q$ l: x, \整個天空 也不及我一半的愛

I want so much to see inside your heart

, y$ e& a7 E& {- G' A# T  k我想看透你的心
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# ?7 T  X( Q1 A  Y" A+ EI invite you to rip it out
; E2 N* {" {. X1 I% G0 ^) B1 Z3 kTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
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我歡迎你將它打開
我願意用生命
4 R( N# Z/ Z; X" L! r來證明我的愛
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I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

我依然滿心憂鬱
$ D1 Z" r% L/ k你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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I regret not dying
I only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000

6 I1 g0 X6 l( T) Z8 \可惜我未能以死證明
+ I: r: t5 J0 k, y我只有一張口
1 x" j1 r- r- `( o% y遠遠不及千萬
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With such a tongue as yours,
( l6 T* g. ~( l, `, Q0 _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
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* p% K; W% Z- K這樣一張巧舌
你的言語都跟不上

* l! [0 h' [; U) ^" k/ |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
. R- J9 ~( S* R" S/ p我將對你訴說
千萬個心思
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* x! s. K' Y' w( v+ s+ `Rambling on about a thousand words of love
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訴說千萬個
愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
3 h$ n. q# w" H3 P8 j' _xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

+ J. L; F, a9 e6 D7 ?7 M# i是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒