【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
; ]4 U& M6 E  B7 g袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

0 V4 m4 X; k( w5 QThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) b- O. Y# o6 O1 u- M" iThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you

我想我從未表露出
深藏在我心底的那句
- ?3 r% q% t8 o6 L我愛你  
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From the first moment we met,
0 U9 z8 n$ D+ X+ _% ?8 C, H) dI already loved you with all my heart

在遇見你的第一刻
/ u3 \/ n) {; x# Y' J* w你已經深深的佔領了
我的心

We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

縱然朝夕相處
9 H* K$ {* `- f3 D0 r8 M- H% \還是不能肯定你的心意

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& C5 P+ C6 S5 II would probably know how you feel
凝視著你的眼
搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
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Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

+ m4 U- S0 @  ~& v% y愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
0 P# }5 U$ ^5 P- q( \如此難以表白?
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9 p. S6 _0 J  w4 r* D: v5 X0 D' CI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

" q. H/ p  v5 F6 gIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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# ?( q0 [- p# q; P0 ]/ f希望今天還不會太晚
: \5 I& H9 M- x8 x* I, c3 x0 D讓我向你表白
5 L; b1 s6 V* d我心底的秘密

7 i" X6 C4 p' nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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9 ~% q' V6 [6 |! y" O7 d不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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+ q" x, V* ~( U; l9 r+ MCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
6 C, @( G* Y3 W6 j托付我的愛
" {1 q4 O* v7 |9 j- j0 x1 [- {收在你心裡

Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

! g+ _) x; A& }4 ~/ S愛  簡單一句愛
為什麼如此難以表白?

' G. D- ?5 }' _& U; YI want to confess that I love you,
1 @9 g, K5 \9 e" U  DBut I never did

" U; N5 a$ m6 I: k8 ^: \愛你 我想要告訴你
% S% t' m9 m- `, j+ ~' y卻還是說不出來
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5 P  u# h5 f$ J2 x) i2 l; q) Q! [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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也許有一天
" l( ]' G9 `; Z! S6 w" r! ~. [你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
7 t+ p$ G$ l; jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

6 m/ T6 ^, u* R' j1 ?7 Y; H' G希望今天還不會太晚
, D+ u9 t, c( w5 r6 V7 S讓我向你表白
( f: b- Z+ y( u# E我心底的秘密

$ l& G  Y' b$ r- c0 x5 x& GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

4 E7 h. W4 M# I; S, tCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

& A' ?6 X7 S& m- w& C1 U8 j可否讓我托付給你?
( v; `8 G3 o4 w9 g$ _托付我的愛
/ H# Y- X# D, g  _收在你心裡
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+ s. ]- E4 @% u/ D! ]Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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! W' N( T  Q: c, p4 u; P可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡



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& m3 J6 I' ~) v* I对唱曲参赛译稿

The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
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皎潔月光下
# u2 T7 D9 _. ~; C3 U6 n/ j天空金銀閃爍
凝視著星空
% ?* _1 v; t2 {+ a- q, `* f4 U- t我心充滿快樂
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, z4 G7 T1 M, xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love

* H  W/ Z, [; `- d* o6 D月光映在我的眼底
+ ?$ \8 X2 G) C& ^9 [, s- G! d% _月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂

" M# J& _3 V# l' h1 UIt fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

3 l8 I1 N# n4 d7 `  y我心卻充斥著憂鬱
, [" x) M; ~. m4 u7 z害怕我們的愛
終將逝去

% W1 x( w9 N" ?% T' q6 h9 O+ aYou needn’t fear anything
8 D. \( H, U7 ]# J  pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
0 ?% E. d% V- K  K' y愛你
堅定不渝
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0 Z/ x# ], K& b5 `" eEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
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你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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I love you I love you with all my heart
+ {7 C( V# A" K) P0 zNothing can compare to my love

我的愛 全心全意
! H* C/ h# O$ L. T你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?

能覆蓋半個天空嗎?
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The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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/ K% [6 S0 C& @I want so much to see inside your heart

我想看透你的心
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I invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
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4 {( V" ]) }, S" n$ n0 f我歡迎你將它打開
; u2 e  j: m* e3 ]我願意用生命
來證明我的愛
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7 [, e8 A$ N8 H! K8 RI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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我依然滿心憂鬱
# v3 z& E9 P! T5 t3 D3 a你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
% h1 X9 I9 y6 ^$ J8 g; D( t
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue
6 i' p2 ~- n9 {  D6 dIt’s nothing close to 100,000
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可惜我未能以死證明
+ C$ i+ u) C9 [& ?% }我只有一張口
+ V( P2 J: F0 q) f遠遠不及千萬

  j9 x9 @2 m7 O' d# J0 jWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
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! m$ V: a+ |$ R6 a9 }+ R這樣一張巧舌
% e4 w) a4 l) b. H7 ?/ g" B& u/ A你的言語都跟不上

If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
0 `4 M8 X9 d3 x1 I我將對你訴說
% g# h- i4 r1 o. p7 F6 R千萬個心思

9 K; s. |' J# F% }$ DRambling on about a thousand words of love

訴說千萬個
3 ^3 D/ h7 a* l* S8 q4 G愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒