【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% V3 ?/ F( S2 r0 qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  j% U( h. d# r; u6 e, e( NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: Y$ ]' D7 H3 B. BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; }2 e4 ]7 D7 _+ WThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& V- H( c! h; |- `# uYou needn’t fear anything
# W* m6 G$ g# M6 ]  ~8 N0 lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 G6 t+ q5 @# L9 T- c% _) @2 LI love you I love you with all my heart
" S' ?/ ~( S' B0 C8 D5 YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! n% K& d# f0 n% w6 L! w- FI’m still filled with fear
7 W/ R. W  X% i' A8 a& E; j4 H3 eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 W5 c4 N* B$ [% i* ]3 e) Y3 XI regret not dying
% v5 X/ L$ V! N; hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% T) F! k2 K: [6 ]* fWith such a tongue as yours,
, s( B! T! h% WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. k# ~6 k9 D/ y, f+ VIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' `/ _3 D8 a" E, C1 P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 ?& C9 {- d+ ^5 b' l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 g' A9 F* e; `+ A' E3 S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ N  b! Y5 G* u/ }' z, ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 A2 H7 M- Y$ ?  B$ k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& A5 k; L, n: O<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! X9 }; h9 u4 _- h7 `, H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; l, j& ~: I  k* }- A% }$ @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; V0 s3 `/ H+ N0 `8 h! O& n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 z8 F6 [% v5 @1 d8 d, p) |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 Z0 `/ y$ x* u7 e9 r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( |2 m( \9 P9 O, V. A( x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; r0 }4 L4 B$ _& g<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 ]' C$ p! L" I5 q4 Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) G7 B7 ?: F* g% P6 @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 v- l( X6 n$ j% ?) F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# B( p) I) D: A$ j8 c5 i$ q" B<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 c  @3 m  u! {0 H" j9 m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" C) ^3 l9 g: D" D. k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# n- c* s- y" G# f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. F) l6 m) A+ W8 ~( u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& g4 k: f! G7 g4 ^( C3 V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" X( k( ?' e+ ^- d! o<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! s7 G8 A% f0 _" S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 x8 m3 E4 H/ H0 A! B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% |! ?2 A: f* h% C8 C- X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( M" S$ T7 M7 A6 [0 Y/ n$ [<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>