【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 b8 s2 ]7 k# o歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  @% [6 W1 h5 r4 y! j; K9 o) J' KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% ^' m$ D% h% O) t8 GThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 ^* V* r8 P' iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  N6 p: L2 K" t- d9 |# XYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* |: x5 J. F# g, W1 uI really want to know just how much you love me
; j- ]+ P3 l! v, a% o- _I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( G2 ]: P4 C. C/ `  H) f! BI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& s9 h* h1 c- \) {& M# n3 T% vI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 b4 H8 h+ Z5 P+ {  `- hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 M3 y# t4 j1 ]2 g! i( f& [7 HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 d! Z: w! }3 Y' UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 K$ K/ w, g( O( z1 u7 y+ F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ [1 ^5 C3 R- x0 ]. M3 H1 \6 z8 ^<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" S& f/ B0 i3 V3 u; x' ]; P$ E$ A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 P& z* [+ f, \. }, p9 p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" W4 X* o) j1 N4 z, M0 ?9 S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% f- A9 \9 u# a0 `8 H9 D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 d# g/ ], c# n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ o  ~! C. T/ Q" c: |+ H3 P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: v, y1 [( d- i1 N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" r  y+ i( O2 f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; k% r: V* c/ Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- s4 {$ n1 g, K/ s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; U) Q0 o" Z4 b8 r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& `8 f# r0 k$ O3 ]( Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 {+ D1 D2 C( }; t! f<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 S* g7 j% r+ \! E# ?# k0 D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 F" f- P3 D$ K0 L! }/ |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! P$ Z. e8 k/ n( Y  F<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# V8 i3 A! l+ c: P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" q) J8 I$ l9 P% U$ V- J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 l& X6 q( L4 i2 q# E5 w' U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: O( P" ~' X. [  {: G$ H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! R. H9 N8 u* f8 A( K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 I5 P! S6 _% e' r4 `  n0 D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 r9 _% b# r, m<P>I regret not dying</P>
. N! J- A) B3 Y9 [: n- m) [- _) r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: m: y0 s$ T! [# I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. A  j3 B$ ?- \, Y! v$ Y# q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 m9 p) J" y5 c5 \& t: N' a$ Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 b% U! F4 |9 `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 u, L) _. o) R& y6 |! _) g我请你剖开它

# Z- v  q9 u7 X1 x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 u3 h7 a$ w8 V4 k: V" k! c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>