【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 u* Z7 K4 c/ V/ w3 K9 X4 yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ P9 K' ]; Q6 q! c  sThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, X) H6 N3 q, D( J) ^! ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
% s0 O- N9 p4 NI really want to know just how much you love me
% l, J7 n" U# U6 U. l( g' J* aI love you I love you with all my heart
/ K" c6 a6 e7 S+ D* Z# i! T: I; D) P3 YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 u6 V6 y9 \* g$ mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 |3 U4 @# u1 N% vI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% ]% g" T3 {! U0 I; j# B0 W* YI regret not dying
* [# F. {# a% Q" J: u% K' A2 iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
3 I; s; u+ F6 CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 K6 f' w" m2 a5 F0 v, s5 R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ n6 U/ h1 K. y. M$ v1 R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% K  G4 p+ B, S4 p1 ^7 f7 s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ K+ M5 t* r0 h0 I5 E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 b9 O' U) n  t' Y; V1 T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: ~3 t9 v5 x( U+ ?6 d6 z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ p0 T: j. s: v! v% x" F9 }# n$ y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 s  U# m# L' S( y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 m0 p$ k2 ^( j+ j$ h<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ ]9 h; V: ^; X* o6 y  v5 M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 P) c8 u3 O* p. E+ j: Z; O# O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: R2 x# J0 k* B) b<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( M0 o% B8 }, U% `! b1 n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" V; Y& T5 y  {6 |5 @2 V3 L! i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 a. ?6 a+ b) ~6 R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 o' h* @. }. k8 U- o/ G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 E' K% R: Q4 m0 U  W  t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 }' p. p6 t2 c9 W4 ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! w& E$ y: J5 K6 X  r  m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, p, _. p- v3 g. V7 [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- i: V! o. M( `1 G7 Z, i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 t/ n. w; w0 f; g. t! V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" r6 x: b. C! X1 _8 D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! ~6 Z$ x) {7 _! V# |<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 k4 a2 b5 G! B0 V/ z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% u- ~( K9 B# G8 `! k4 m/ A) G% F+ B<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 Q. Z- C) d! o/ y" X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% B3 D# s1 a2 _& _4 Z+ T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: d; I) C1 D/ S. i% A+ E) Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 ^8 G5 ~; p: [% S, @- v3 J) O% ^5 k<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ ~; q% S1 I( t5 o. t' m4 [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 O3 R! O; K! |: J& t3 \7 f8 U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 t" L4 o7 F6 Z! `' `/ y) i" l0 A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( I2 y# b& y  f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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