【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
) X- L0 B% d% b4 p! R4 A' EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 k" T  ^0 Y+ n& MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, I" S2 Y6 X3 a! h( D8 FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- Y( o$ H" n! T3 o4 x" T6 `With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 T) }1 @5 Z# h) Z8 ^4 [2 s2 c* R. OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* L! {+ L/ X2 s& H- F! SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( J7 s; S4 U* m4 kNothing can compare to my love
; B! h0 O; {! f  WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 x3 ?( {* J; sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% M4 G$ k1 g: N6 F5 @2 tI want so much to see inside your heart
* S0 ?9 g6 @( P) Q' m7 |  cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* A% c. B* A7 XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ \* t; {: R4 X! c( w1 lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. O8 |* N( M- h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 ^6 C- [) [3 Y" ]  I' W! V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& S5 u+ u$ q1 L' c4 y+ h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- \5 T4 e6 Y: n7 q) J  F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" T2 K1 z. v  D% i4 @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# G+ r: a* l6 L& N4 k2 U/ {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 u$ d" z. m# g5 j2 |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 F6 o* h% V* J* y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 t% ~' w8 \4 X2 B/ o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ X" u8 w% u/ K+ A' C+ P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( b0 [4 J1 I) N8 W' E# I6 w" |" w# Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* A  A4 G, Q2 }, O1 e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& `' c& k- {' [3 O6 w# U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( ?6 T+ u! {+ l  P  M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" J& D! L3 t3 g<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 a$ z: n, x' n' ~: V$ r- _' n! t7 j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ f& H5 e$ ?7 b/ [8 {5 i0 h<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  ?2 ^& C' g" j8 t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% m$ A  U, M, G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. o7 k' A0 Z9 Y9 A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% c- t: }/ N' v$ I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 a1 L2 B  y" X4 \- ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) L% }3 I9 ]3 }0 S5 K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ t6 Z' u- y5 r2 f" D$ t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 C. U. m. k% w" x# k! m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  s) h! X4 d+ u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 W  ~* _  J4 s7 j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 ?4 {' P( {( S  ]1 l8 F4 e% u% Y* V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) a8 ^2 Y2 {$ a1 C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  M' V" v* f2 l# ]<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( F# m5 h- c, M! h5 l4 S我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>