【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ y& {' y$ ?9 ~; K; ?) T, K; p- E) A: Q" }歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* ^8 j% j( u& k) i2 i: {" }" RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 h( f2 K. R0 G  d% f% L( nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' g% N+ I0 J1 ?* g3 X% ^4 FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 ~% j" \# l' {* v( f+ Q3 F4 ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- s) `8 c( @8 Q$ _' e" lYou needn’t fear anything
6 _; D6 C% i+ F2 pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
! l5 u( }- r) n" `6 CI love you I love you with all my heart
3 U5 h1 ?$ d) K. t- V; cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 F1 L+ A1 P" B6 g: _$ `6 k$ LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 H$ f9 A! x! m6 p; N; E& yI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! p& f2 m. A/ NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% v; A1 v( {- G: T( S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- _  B; I' D: y( F0 j+ s$ H/ ^, _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 q( n3 q# t# o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; ~/ u! l4 z; I- G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! T5 X9 W% Y% U0 ?+ i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ X5 ?7 b+ V  ?& B( K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 o& M$ S- o$ Y: A" a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 @1 |! m8 e# p" U- K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ n0 }4 {' H% |7 p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 k+ N+ d/ H7 ]2 v6 D, h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( ], D4 E/ G. Z5 v<P>你无需担心</P>
+ r5 P9 |3 z  U! J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' U6 X' M2 l" O+ n4 X! n# k) S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; i5 F6 H5 A# m, U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 o, `0 x% x- \: I4 i! t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ H3 V; p8 x( P1 B' g7 I. j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" H2 W3 Y4 \( D# L<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; F1 E( T; p. e$ f. s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' ]) S7 r; w; ~% n6 L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: A& E9 z4 R( v" ]- @6 ~/ A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 {$ E0 A9 K# e5 l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: n+ O* |9 a" i- Y( w3 ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 Q9 i9 Y4 Q1 v( S* ]+ x& h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ D0 B3 h9 r0 p( p! \$ J, t( m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  ^/ j$ j2 b& c" d<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ M; ~' ?' D8 \' e) T, g5 l<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; Y3 L, q* T6 |4 P3 t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, A1 s) m9 ?+ g. m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 t2 ], r: J7 `! i1 j6 }1 s<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% ?2 i% v# ]5 J' a$ J" t" ]我请你剖开它
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. {! p% |9 g* Z& }9 r* |2 { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>