【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 T# y# P4 i3 \" c; L7 _! hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 C& ]6 K3 z: U1 a# \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: u8 P0 G  d  G: S4 q9 AThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- A( U7 O" G6 q: B  m( P, |' KSeeing the sky content with its love
& E1 y; g4 ~+ d- {- P0 AIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  a( M) _) k7 G: F& ~* ?You needn’t fear anything
0 u' v# T0 ]. S+ Q6 e: M2 F# {- }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 N9 D1 @! J9 ?8 q# D! \4 v7 k. [0 V5 ?I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; B$ c" j& z8 o4 H/ _: NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& q: y( _6 J$ g" }' H5 WI want so much to see inside your heart
/ `& N/ Z3 u8 i1 w  L# PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) g5 ^+ t" _. p3 j- B# e  ZI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% {$ x" {- ?+ K; qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  h: Z- _6 T1 K, ]# lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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5 G6 |7 o) H5 x. B4 x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ T+ C! G  K7 W# y, m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* _2 A7 B* y2 O# x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ E: N& i* o; q<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. q# b2 }# d4 v3 p<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# O9 C- }0 y( c4 R& {* k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" p; L# v) O, x! ^% \0 Y/ Z6 |& v: ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- @: _) R  g$ w# l  h: L( j7 S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ A: l) o( P# i) \" e% [" e% @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 Y  I, C6 X! W6 D<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' S; h' t8 m& R. w9 \7 V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; \) W) H5 ?+ Z- D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) h! f/ W! h* h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ h+ }/ ]8 v7 Q; ^4 n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: G- r- Q+ J. \1 Z& q$ @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 ]4 @/ K( ~: C% r; x1 @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" x" m1 N5 K! w4 k/ E# q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 f! C5 Y, q* v' c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 A4 u/ G8 N9 s* i; T- [5 n: ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, l* P9 E; ?$ m: {/ J5 g; H7 a( X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- \4 A  ~7 p4 x. c/ l, a- I' q. Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" @& p. G/ E" A2 G. a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  j" ?) K/ ?1 H9 D- ]2 c( i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ U8 p: N/ Z- L6 ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; P4 |7 B7 q. m# P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& a) R" A4 t( I/ q2 x8 f! i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% h6 ]; V9 G  ~- h4 }9 [* `0 Y9 F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ L1 }. |* f3 @1 N( O# ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 j8 W) `( S% J( U- h& i7 E* h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 V" q! S4 [" K- y<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& L' @0 V, v5 G  H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' M+ b( d2 `' A2 t" E! q# x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 L) V7 m  c/ A我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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