【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' C0 u/ t7 G: \/ V& ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& i* F) |  }2 a9 \- g: |. |3 @% CWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 j+ S5 p- c: zYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
0 c7 ]4 z$ T3 D  c) U" `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 }  M2 a2 O  t/ k# R, ]3 YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ N8 i- g0 r" Z4 J/ ]# sI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* s  {# A, y% X5 zI’m still filled with fear
9 k3 f6 b/ b- Q; x& w: r' J. pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 l0 ?% w) [5 X% R/ ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ u/ _1 o* }; p. H3 Q* i. p- Y; t7 ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 B$ [3 C2 @2 a/ e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- k4 C% {# j5 y8 n4 g7 A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# K7 g  `: q/ s1 B  G: ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. i# C) j, i# I1 Z% J. p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ Q& q! Y# x4 Q( e* o5 c- O4 [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' s+ ?' n/ R  Z5 v' ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 ?* k' _8 y8 u! j" o- I! X/ A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, p; x% h6 v: o( n% h# B0 @5 C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 P7 Y' Y% P# `5 j' X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ ]# T. T4 v9 w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 R# Z* Q8 @5 D3 J- e$ n5 l<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 B4 S- S! h8 m; D( V) D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 V' V$ j9 D1 R, s( E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 \/ l; F; Q: w2 S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) S+ j' P0 I% ]2 k/ Q* r! G6 e/ \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 K$ E9 Y4 A6 [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ U% g6 @- h& Y$ X9 S, T$ j% c<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% U7 ], B. n2 H; O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! _5 y1 i8 [. y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! n# g+ ^9 m% K& n) b1 [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ J; r- q; h1 d5 W% s( s, |9 z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 z* ~* Y' z- a# S7 X" ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& R$ [7 h4 Z* K. k5 ^1 p# F6 j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. d5 e8 i& G0 h6 z( J" P6 s$ L- y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: C! {; a& _# N! Y" z& V<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& G  r6 G6 f* R* z! t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  p8 D- a5 L5 g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' u! Q5 _& e5 C, I: D' A3 w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- h+ {- U$ E) o  `  t' K1 ^7 _6 `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( I2 k1 j1 o/ V# m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! r! @9 e& y1 E, g# M5 G% K我请你剖开它

- B6 k! `4 _$ H1 J, F1 N' ]* Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>