【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ d: [0 r, Y- i* z2 Q歌词我附在后面。
0 ?0 ~* e: Q8 n9 yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" b, V' p$ ?" x. UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 B* x% w2 t: t; FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ U$ Y% y6 C+ c8 ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
( P5 \% {1 D+ L4 {9 h$ W* n4 N" OWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 \+ u( c8 A& x; e( O1 PNothing can compare to my love
$ q* n0 C/ o' D0 M1 OCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 _) W0 v0 p- N0 ~0 j) d5 bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. Q: X- u  H% u& V3 XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( `7 z5 x$ ^! D+ \: a) V  B7 |Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 \& R+ A7 E, F2 m2 M+ ?$ E: eWith such a tongue as yours,
; A( r$ i* x/ S1 t2 lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- J! e8 ?. V8 O# r! h9 qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 L' O8 I4 e! ~5 {; V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 B) S2 z8 V4 t: S- S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 R. H) C4 {& E; y  K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  G* g3 \; }" N/ R' p2 X& f3 w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: x1 f& Z1 p& {, G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 Y( V" f3 l% v, @& m; Z0 J# d* e) g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- v/ f+ k$ x$ v  A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 l1 l/ F6 I% W! F, v" M4 Y$ t4 h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; e# A# L) L& ~& ?; @" O, @<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  V* L/ F/ D8 D( d- b<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 E4 ?4 k1 i8 b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# n/ ?2 h) D6 u" v% E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* \1 b. _) j1 S/ L  |# g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 o& U. n7 E& |0 e+ o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. ~! f8 `- \- `3 ?  C# p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# e. w2 k/ @' y! ?2 Y" y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 i4 _9 U) G6 t! z7 y& k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 ?1 Q3 j6 s" K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! F- y( Q( _! N! U0 N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 B# w0 @$ a8 z" x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 G5 m' h( O* ~' V. D" W<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ L6 A( l' @* b* e7 ?, M4 i  h$ g& _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ R" G; [! V2 Q7 R1 Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ K6 i/ [" F) V* I5 v5 I+ V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 L- {" c5 E3 U- C0 [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 r8 V6 F/ p6 U3 y7 F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! q8 M" Q) n, L+ W4 s, X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; P* Q! E  _7 y7 C# X2 F/ g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" j! Q7 j6 L- N" D5 w; ]; b4 P4 F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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3 l( w" r# S6 r5 p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! d7 z. t9 L. e9 j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>