【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 a2 ]& q2 `. ^7 {: D8 G1 ]歌词我附在后面。
  s8 J( J  @3 m6 fThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 H2 n+ |. ~0 Z7 r$ N3 ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
* E4 z$ v8 M$ r' n+ [0 T3 f. \1 x0 I9 BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" }9 p% D5 l2 M" n+ ]  H# R. w4 XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 I" l' t* q9 R9 N& p% b6 x3 `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' w: W6 g. W' I1 R: O1 xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 |% f4 o' D- d7 u; a% PNothing can compare to my love
0 Z. I$ w, O8 e# {1 u9 h6 B% A& QCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 O! }: f, I$ [) k  f! K2 I& S) dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) a3 X3 S  D6 b7 BI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  P+ F5 b3 e4 m( CI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 }8 s1 |8 k0 Z4 @, tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 I( [4 [6 i& R& c/ N# g/ h4 zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ ?; B# R+ |  t0 u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% }  X( T' P+ M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( l6 p2 {( G8 U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" M) j3 K) R' S* M: H& {& g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' G9 n+ Y. @' F7 c6 o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 {% Z7 P' g+ p( L2 Q% S- V% Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; t9 K+ }  ?2 q/ p" b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 |. Y/ t% X, H6 r<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 S6 H) {8 k  B9 P0 n$ F$ _0 x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% U4 v1 R5 s7 v! a# ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  T5 j# y& q: t5 b0 u2 J2 |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 N- O/ w& }/ X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# Q! R0 \/ W7 m+ Y% D$ S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& O; Z3 Q# x- P. w  J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* w/ L5 ~! j! W' {9 ?- s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& m; R: c& H4 `" n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! u3 |2 K" ?. t& a4 h<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' W9 A& [  n0 f: F" z4 J9 @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( f2 J; i1 N: O" p7 c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" H! i' n1 D) k+ Y2 W1 ?- x! e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; y' s) O) p) |5 A( d9 s; J6 o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 {4 W' e2 ^! X2 O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ g; ]; f& v5 l. I2 M5 G5 K, H8 x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ n! e7 v6 i/ A; D9 j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 H; C, b  y0 t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" L8 e' t$ t- {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; X0 f6 s; |& j) g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>