【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ Q$ t! A0 \0 TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 {5 a0 z; x6 k! F% BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 c2 f8 p$ G# w8 u' T* N2 ^With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. W' A7 X. H; I5 qYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
2 Z% j( b5 f; q: q* o" N% \I really want to know just how much you love me
  E$ {+ w1 L3 P3 _2 h: i8 Q( @I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 U# p  B$ S/ e& T9 v4 PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% \, J' v3 b8 J7 \& m+ g5 ~- FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 Y8 s( I$ A/ D! l8 c  p) M# Z; SI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 d6 a( `6 d/ L3 e' C" ARambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 n0 A$ J$ [# S6 ~5 J% q$ F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. h" N  K3 ?$ ~/ i6 R: @! E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ S# |  P( B6 _7 T8 A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" C2 r0 D$ K8 t" q4 F. T! u/ Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 b& @0 |* m5 C" @& c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 D& b9 _: M  v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' [( q2 K$ a' G2 @: k& F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! q. m  z7 r& _3 F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 _  _5 ^. j8 `9 J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( S. M- g; r8 N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; V- @1 t3 M! k0 N  \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" @: ]! Q/ o7 p3 w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' i- X2 \: w4 s! H% W: I3 T7 W8 ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ b2 n+ z/ c" G& ]7 s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 u8 j1 c* I6 X; Y3 ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 }9 p$ w/ P- @) B. i) P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 X( V( t5 v0 e7 R: O  t* x: k3 {. V5 l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" X7 I; A2 _4 `/ x9 k4 H  b- v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" u/ r2 m) M+ S* k# D9 j0 ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: }2 ?' e6 j& _% r  h6 K" G1 j( M7 n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 I3 r/ c3 [! ]) A3 K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, M) b/ V- N; z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# P8 _! z. [6 y  V; N( B. _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  c9 w( |2 n1 @; ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, I4 Y7 Z$ J9 a) U4 E" f我请你剖开它
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8 G5 f1 M. |; M. |8 K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>