【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
) d$ ?5 P1 }  e( M. wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 V( T9 c% ]& Y0 C( n9 w- dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 p" P1 X: d  M& yWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. o1 t# S4 B/ B) d+ j& IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ Y. g/ ~: i, @9 xSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 I& {: i! R' u, |1 BYou needn’t fear anything
; j" l* E; x! K9 }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- D3 N( p: {+ ^$ G9 PI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 i* l( o' m& d$ o+ |! eNothing can compare to my love
$ l% ~2 ?! |6 w1 r; {, p' W1 MCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 ^8 d! U, R6 AI want so much to see inside your heart
8 ?- [8 D: l& N& q. f+ bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* U$ k& B$ x+ c( kI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 u/ o" Z/ G3 bI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 v) l& t/ O) nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 \) u$ N8 \# K3 }- j$ u" `) @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# n7 }" C3 X" ^* m, ~6 [3 H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ Y% E( |1 f  a6 M! c* p, v* U9 j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 g5 J% @& w6 J% W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ n6 ?- X  N; @5 e5 I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ W* x6 E9 v' ~( _( Y# k0 W3 e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 m( b" y$ C0 S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  O1 {6 c6 d: B/ S9 c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! Q: H: j: ?5 l1 F0 Q4 `: h0 q; ?<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 F( o! c; i2 n' y/ b. K<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ s% J* ^" p% R% m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" a% {  S5 |. I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& M5 @2 e! V" ~/ A: D( ?0 I% u<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 e: @5 v  `$ H7 v- V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" z% k0 s. \  w6 x+ R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* ?  l4 P  q" d$ S( g( u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 e; h6 V4 v7 n+ m8 f: P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( ]1 [8 `+ T  h5 J( N! S6 x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 x: v8 ~) m9 Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' G7 ?: W$ V! K& ^/ t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 T: w! ?4 h' Q8 D/ M' V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 W0 L4 d: S( J<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! A. S: {- J# o' _4 h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 n# h1 q/ ^& I7 g" F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  e3 T2 t( m9 Q9 D! t& x' A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 _, r* J3 l2 m4 }( p: Q/ c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- X! h8 P( k: G# }5 P: R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) T: N, N) Y4 |7 o<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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5 E! B' X8 |; X/ A4 G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>