【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
# x3 r) A, @$ E) o% ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' T3 d$ w: _# Z) WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ L. n2 q* q1 r4 `% p3 tThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 m6 ]. J! w& ~9 b$ ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ f6 d- t' J' v. B, B5 aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: B( j- D  b. m% J9 n: BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( p) M" B. f  v# P0 rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 J$ q) C. `9 I9 j9 kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; j4 r! U) x5 C  Y0 i, ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 X7 b2 _, s- W4 r; U* mI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! u' z  K# ?% e. QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 o6 N1 P9 A. Q: VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 T& L  E7 S# B+ g, c9 ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) X7 ]- c( c  I, v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) `! b& \7 g5 Y% C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 }6 U, s# L. `1 Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 Z' d& H' ?0 V/ \% b" X! c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& }& ^5 I! G( f1 r' W: [) p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& r$ b1 g2 W% W8 V4 C+ x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 C% P7 I0 ?/ M7 }' ~4 c0 m<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- P, S& s# Z5 Y# o7 H* s0 D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( b- M! z4 ~: M9 j4 \5 P2 I<P>你无需担心</P>
: E3 c  g" i  O6 ?& `9 J1 B6 ^: H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& k- G: M) H0 H% E<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 F- g+ y) u4 `/ a" T<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( X: R+ F+ Q) r; }; F% u. U<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- }5 L, X( _& b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" ~- p/ u3 X1 G2 {& A+ \5 M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* w' }# B, |, z! A4 {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 ]* y" r% h( h" R; U# o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* |0 V, ^) `! ?+ n# V, u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: ]8 d: M; X) H4 n' D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# O) t# ?1 z, N$ y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' {! K# T+ ]# r- w/ f& s; Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 J/ `; h' X  `$ e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 I8 [, l6 H% R5 L' N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 e% r# `% z* \8 R' \+ y<P>I regret not dying</P>
( l' g. N: A- p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* P8 \0 S" p7 U( u$ ]+ }3 l- L<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) H( L: T( b0 P2 U% u<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, R1 m) o1 e% t, Z- u2 p) G! T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' l9 v. H  R2 {6 l8 y1 d$ M7 F* A  {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  O$ T& G; g3 k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: {! H/ ^. g7 {# \9 B; ?( h9 I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: ]7 S6 T& j& `$ B' Z3 V7 j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% a4 S% Z. R3 v* Z+ E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 ?& W( H3 |! h) F& K我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% u0 x4 p2 S0 P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>