【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 O6 V- P  X* J$ H4 }, R6 c歌词我附在后面。
# |1 B- X) v- S/ ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 ^* K- W3 Y3 [: o/ q9 ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! y' P7 j( N  s1 }: WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 [  y1 p$ a% i, ]% _% D# [' l6 b/ LThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. y# s3 z& @/ y. N( [4 UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  y# Z1 h. @9 a  w: F$ J9 n$ ]9 _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 l+ h5 Y) f6 s2 A! RI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ E8 m, r" i# `0 l* k2 }4 ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  J2 V0 @4 U' ?  f8 L& JI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, @/ `3 c* P! ~5 ?' ?$ _4 |7 F- ^I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ K0 S4 \1 D  o- dWith such a tongue as yours,
8 a) n8 g2 P9 f# J  \$ `/ ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 {" |3 I* x! h2 J8 k) K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% T- B  H+ y* P/ M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  u$ i- ?2 ~3 a- O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% k) q! g1 L; Y/ U/ Z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, }/ t1 p, N% @) O( H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, `: M, J! M* l+ D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 }0 |6 w* k4 Y. x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 d0 f  w8 o0 Q- q( j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 S$ t/ j8 O/ {  F! a/ E<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 V$ S" _2 v* f7 [' t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- t9 B' i& u. q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. ^7 i6 R* j2 Q2 i0 y/ P3 e. z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, f# k- ?- _* w% e6 Y" z  K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 l4 \% @. R+ S9 {. P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  o$ o% ?: _( S( r8 ^$ A+ ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 K6 ~% ]) Q! W$ t2 l7 r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( g. a: V9 u+ U  t3 \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 ~  q) G% \3 X* g  u3 x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ A2 p3 Z$ D2 o1 K* U$ y& A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 d9 a& o6 N# y6 d' r9 T  D% j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 C0 ^' l6 K# c: p6 P5 c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" Q. J1 V6 ?  W  R  S6 g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 r) Q- r6 P4 K5 Y我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>