【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# o6 V7 J+ `" U& g* M! u5 X歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% M4 Y* g; o" H3 e. O. AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& c! j4 z$ L! AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 t: O1 R) x  C  v" ~5 uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' C5 C) F5 _. s, c0 E8 }; O$ O/ m* ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: ?0 n1 G  S7 F4 {$ q$ GEvery other word you utter is love
  T% t8 V; _9 R6 H% P# T& dI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 [! k" D3 V1 f8 }6 A- g' o( w' JNothing can compare to my love
8 P9 V+ Q% R5 LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: T) B5 y' B  w' ]I regret not dying
* [* }' S( V, mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- s+ D# V/ ?6 \/ }  vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# m+ A3 n! T1 b4 y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% w: C' z9 b  u! {1 f% O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 o2 g/ H$ @! M+ z. ?, W1 Y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* ?$ V, C" L# H6 N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 ~" N# Y" I! n( A3 [& `7 X; G! R4 W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" @3 u1 |/ O% M1 z3 `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* C0 F  ~8 _" X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" _( P, x0 n/ u% M6 `$ v' ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ k6 x5 j, ?* B. x<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' C2 ~, [& Q5 M  [& x6 b! G) D& [% [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- O, Z# C4 X2 E. C6 `9 `6 P' h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 \( s- x( |& N0 U4 k5 A: }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# x! i& P# a5 ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 H# X- i* J. [9 w% v. W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# U2 c% S4 f9 R6 b) E* c# `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. `# U" w- U6 C& F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 a  Y6 y5 n4 }& }; f8 Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 L  b2 r; Z/ R* W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ E# R# K5 K' |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% K" l" g& Y3 X! n* \8 L$ S9 }! t* U4 ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* }0 R- v8 b* s: o8 i7 Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 f) B; Z1 [2 W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 w3 `6 \6 [' }/ {8 b# c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ h; ^; _; m; j<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 r% r) P* V. w8 z7 K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 g. M6 s* M$ M  _& _! P5 _/ R- C! G6 M: Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; R( g$ V4 ^8 c% L5 z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 b/ ?  e9 a$ k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 k* |! e+ C6 w3 R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 k. q# ?4 p/ h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" }+ T& @0 p; k9 C8 ^我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( Q' A! X+ T& H  h; I9 S, W; d8 X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>