【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: X4 Y/ {9 Z5 H) K" E, P$ VThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ b( Z: I: k; h% M. z% ]% fWith the moon kissing it every night
0 l& I1 a3 f, }" ISeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. t% T2 N2 K" {You needn’t fear anything
) I$ o' o' t9 {# u' j/ \1 ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. d( m- E1 r5 ^, v. K# k9 `Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; H* _" G& T  Q0 i9 Q9 aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! n8 w# N2 K6 y+ F" UI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- n# |1 O* L& j- |+ {I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% D" ?- U6 E! ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' H- T) p! ^! d; |: `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ O& Y$ `& y0 c3 I' t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! u$ i# m: y1 I/ z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ [9 Y# b8 P3 R& o$ y4 G! n$ m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  l/ l. T! E8 e( ~( ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ `/ [9 J3 B- B. r* |9 \& s/ I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% Y% ^  d* E% y& V9 o9 `; n- c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 c+ i2 c  t3 X8 R) ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% f" T$ n3 o* N. U; }+ y! O<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! L3 L( w. K0 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 a, z# o" o, ?( Z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 U& l: y) A: N6 E* Y4 T5 I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- q8 H6 G7 B0 e/ t, Y; n$ A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, k0 {3 r. |* }2 @<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( D% {3 \$ I- U9 w; V6 }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- X  U6 }6 n7 s1 {5 F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: |. _4 Y0 c% J( n# I. C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) F2 d3 T: Z/ B; z0 B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ g. |% G4 t% q& f# |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& I( y0 H9 d( K/ c# ]# G0 v% g: X2 z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" ^1 x+ u3 L* M4 @9 J$ D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 k: ?# X3 R9 _  g. M  q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! G: R! a, C+ L: g7 @% n<P>I regret not dying</P>
% B% S6 ^1 E* S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: A" V& W" {4 t+ V$ n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# D# Y6 P* j/ D8 v$ a. {8 w; E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ Z  h& E; `- G. ], @/ U. R4 }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: O; F( T7 x9 u1 h% S& Z3 k+ P, k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ i, y- Q8 }6 ?+ t, M<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

+ ]0 `0 Z3 J! K2 q. p2 p' `. _1 Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>