【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
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9 o  e( P* ^  N- XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' E/ q( s" D7 c! o  M6 t8 K0 `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 l9 y2 n  L7 @! wWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# c) |1 K/ R4 `: }# e7 k& a- w& c" ]You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# [; e) N$ ]6 VThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: W' k/ G9 h2 [) C" o# rI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- s" b; N& j$ a9 @# dI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 }7 f" H3 k" `I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 b8 X3 m2 A2 e6 q2 |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 N1 y7 |) h- @0 b+ s<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ S; H+ E' c' T& q% Q+ }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, d- G6 G* ^. _4 F9 c  U! P" e2 c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 V, m. W) M$ k+ q7 k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! T; F) F+ c5 O9 r: I: r, @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: b1 O8 i' Q, i: w4 M0 t<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( d) B" C3 A; _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 _- `( N5 k. j/ O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. b. I+ K7 i  U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, T# `2 S% R4 t' D+ L% V( D, A' m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  A9 I% A. T5 ^1 j8 e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* h* v# O  `  @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* }" C/ y; z& L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 ]& O* n- H6 _9 l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. g8 K/ J# a7 a3 T3 Q! N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* Z! B. I$ R# ]% m- s+ F' L; i& D4 U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" V& U8 I; E) M3 |2 C% W, e6 p' G) S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' P8 _* Y* T' v( O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ n: ~+ Q0 N7 ~/ a$ y/ x0 f# u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% `! ?# ?# Q9 h3 {* f6 i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ g( P0 U2 a6 p3 n5 @7 q4 Q7 o' {- C4 a<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 z  G, D/ I8 ^3 \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& F, b& H( F6 H7 r( H2 s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 S+ M# `, S5 X7 v, ~" L! M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  i  c4 E6 \; h% H4 Q! j0 n* k7 z3 C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 P) y; J6 @7 a5 ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; B# E% x5 `" W" e$ j/ P/ M4 Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 R' x4 b7 _( G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) I* r% Z- [+ S, e: {& ]* t7 C<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>