【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
1 G, }6 r$ O. u3 s8 u: FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ }" j. e, `# [* p6 _& u. {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ \( I) F: E: P% P; W' {! HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, R2 X1 M2 e" i* o! CSeeing the sky content with its love
' t1 o8 I6 J3 s/ s6 M8 pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) w6 E; i) f7 s# b: ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& [! A* z- q: L- R, Y# v* vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) b8 J0 X- c7 o1 QWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; a4 N, @. P2 aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 E% t# o# d) Z2 H& [! ?6 V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( R# n  z: A# B7 e* i& ]4 U/ F# ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 u6 l9 J! a1 l9 K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: ]" c( ]) X9 `4 r% R) `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 l9 L, C* R$ G# J: @1 P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* {8 [. i+ u3 l/ n+ b4 A2 f" x" i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# z; x4 C' M3 [) D; T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! z( r+ T! G4 [/ n. r2 Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 A8 X8 _4 C+ Z<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& `# g$ x* z( x; W4 j: W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, x- N* t9 T# B* S/ Z, }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( j0 P, K* v' C# U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  m/ B) A! P& b/ l* \  {! V' ^! w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 l8 e8 a: j7 c. u<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  }9 C! o/ h- ^' q" ~, u) d' W6 |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 H9 E& c! p0 B) s2 O$ x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ F6 ]6 c4 W8 S6 }6 O7 Y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' C" y& C2 t$ c# P7 d9 M7 d- O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' M1 N5 ?0 f9 c. E2 ]! ~4 Z; `2 U* p5 L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( X) P& w9 Z  J: m0 ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ x8 \" Q5 I( J<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 F9 d0 m1 u8 U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ m$ o0 g$ x& Q. s1 ~- p0 L8 H, ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% d" G5 Z6 f; S$ P0 b3 R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 S: j1 `8 d+ b' f4 S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- z# p7 [2 {0 n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 W1 _" ^8 P2 l! t# i9 S5 {. G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& H$ w3 i- X" ?/ _4 ~7 P3 r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>