【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ M7 ~7 q1 q& v. F; H, oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 r6 L$ T% Z8 b0 e6 w0 N3 GWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 Z8 i9 k$ @, L, ]& GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  o6 y8 U8 p: g4 u4 f7 W. K7 C8 `You needn’t fear anything
. k% ~/ w1 ?5 V! I  _1 D$ r( YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 Y- n3 H4 o; M* T1 G: pI love you I love you with all my heart
: |+ m: ^8 U8 U+ K2 d, d4 x4 O4 `Nothing can compare to my love
( ?9 J/ \0 n& y- n1 u' t6 k; g! eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& n  y3 V! s8 A6 CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ J! }% o, v5 W0 LI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# d( r& I9 J& FRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 Y- @( q' X1 r) |) z2 E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 O6 X8 P& Z; W) c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, D# s1 h" [7 h. W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 r- K- W3 G7 }3 {9 \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ d' ]7 Y4 |3 A$ e9 ?" l7 y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ ?& A7 J+ @6 s; W7 X4 X) y3 z- |3 o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 Y# D: r8 m" ~* R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* W* M1 b; v* O- w4 D6 `8 i0 s' R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' w. d7 e* k/ l( F$ A$ C3 k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 L8 C8 G0 M$ U: A# T4 i1 H2 i# d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 _: ^9 |3 j/ r4 l, V<P>你无需担心</P>
) T" e  ^! u2 E% z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" V2 W8 R, ^2 I<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ m' ^1 t# ~4 g2 a& v<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ d/ k" u% `- {9 g% J8 [<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 G  D7 ^, V/ ^5 [. z, z7 y8 J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. j% u# G- m6 _1 m7 z$ h" Y  H/ I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- m/ I9 w6 J# f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 b8 M9 h' A3 `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! k3 `) b. L* j7 K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ l% w) Z! w; l<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 U! M6 ?% \$ Z2 R8 A. @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ d( i, p1 @. L3 Y2 ^$ @- a8 t2 I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ s6 l8 C% s8 @! y1 m# M/ [8 j<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. P" ]  t: C% h6 k) H) y7 u* L3 A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: F* O5 ]# u, \5 T, z2 f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# O4 q1 [7 Z+ l<P>I regret not dying</P>
  u' }3 b& c" o: V) n; b6 w  {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) F) W3 o$ Z6 Z. b$ P! f( ]  M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 q  Q0 E; T! X9 W2 f8 d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* T9 M% U' h" l1 C0 ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! N! F$ [9 v' |6 P) i/ S" I# }" ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 H5 E: c' y% V2 R$ T) \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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