【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 f, x# {& v$ ?+ |/ P& o1 }歌词我附在后面。
8 y" I' O' G  o! I! FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 t& N# M: K( t0 K2 _' \) @$ XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 U/ H+ r& M9 j  l/ rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 ]% A5 b! W" ]. l( XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: Y. L6 a; V4 KSeeing the sky content with its love
: T! E- o9 l- ?( MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( q  V7 G+ x( P8 zYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& a3 _# v8 B5 w+ f. x* G0 d" tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 a3 ^+ F" \0 r3 n- jI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 v) @* l( x" z& DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
7 W2 H( {+ R9 _. j: NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 N8 g" v$ u# p) l4 }& ^! W. ^- PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 E) q  [: ?+ V# h5 e. uWith such a tongue as yours,
& O  J6 K+ E3 vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; h$ |3 Y" a, Y3 d* p$ f, C8 P: v4 T# z2 RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" l: y6 _# ?6 d- L+ F2 r1 d) j4 j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 N  |4 E* E) K( e- t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
9 ~7 @6 k; @5 h2 A) J+ h% ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) e  z- [4 \! S0 k4 b6 D5 m5 m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! @' O# P2 P* o/ q$ _5 u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ s3 T3 l8 J* R, Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( S' C3 o/ B8 \" \0 o! Q1 L* S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 Z# D  l2 P: i% m! t4 M' k1 L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 M4 o- M2 ~5 V7 h" @5 b) D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! }8 o" m; q2 v6 {  x% u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- E+ q* x, x' `1 J; n7 w1 q$ z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  H. Q1 y" T( r" v* \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( ^; J/ q! a/ B6 v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( ?* z' t* @5 w9 Q3 `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 e5 ]- A: f2 U( f% R5 Z& M7 E( J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& `: _; j" D) c# o: Q2 @9 v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* b  H3 i7 T8 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ Q5 ^1 d2 h$ |# a* G! x# J4 L! {/ E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; _" A1 Q" ]5 F. Q/ F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ r3 u1 t& L) T' T2 E6 g( ^2 d* f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ q% ^* g0 R6 Z; Y% o# h0 U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 M- _+ E/ a" a: g* S<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  f, b; R! B4 y/ O1 K5 K! H6 M/ b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; k8 x5 G# V1 w2 D<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 M) {# C% O& t% N% P7 ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; B' @; n6 {. x7 ?" O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 X3 ~) c' ^  k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% w- N5 O+ G: ], _% U# n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 }0 r- A- ?( f<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
* x  y* n( }( j. r  U2 b- U: q: F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' r0 b) f. Q5 M. |# U& x/ O<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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- W) N+ f; ^, F* N" t- x4 @4 j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>