【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 Q- ^1 l6 J# E' O: a* I& t- |: RThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 R2 B% B0 b! y4 @8 }4 ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 E# S4 V4 k# e* YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& |4 R. O3 _: `. lYou needn’t fear anything
" x( M/ N7 [: ~- o( g8 XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 ~# n1 g# x( x( YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 l0 W& X5 n* lI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 Z5 W/ J+ h: @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( T* S+ {4 i# V0 z3 yI want so much to see inside your heart
( F4 H3 d! y( P" p9 @% ^8 ~/ HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 S7 v6 t6 A+ s9 b  KI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  a! }$ d( o, V9 Y1 ?$ f) M& o  ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 m9 F0 i8 w9 e' @8 w8 ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 B# S$ k$ _; R2 B/ {  c5 W+ L& g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 i! X, @! D! j- |" m% l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; W- g( e" ^9 F0 a) M1 O- ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: ~; L+ r$ B3 }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' u" P/ O( K- n7 E<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  O' r" u3 a9 _6 |. h/ |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 ^8 r8 N7 z) u9 y  w, a& Y( \5 N# O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 k  f6 s4 c1 K0 L<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 r0 w  |/ l4 a* k; C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 S% y+ L. _9 ~) R+ p6 @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. r& S4 K# U8 K+ Y9 c- j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ U% ^1 l7 i2 e( o<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% _8 W, }( V4 D! D, x% l* x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  F1 J3 O8 `' q( _7 a" F* Y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ q2 S; N/ i+ V2 h$ Q) j<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! a; J' k1 E/ x7 P9 F1 q4 B6 X: i! S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; [8 g% Y1 B- n; ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: x& Q) W5 R: [! g5 M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ P& B8 N: }# K) R9 F  y7 O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" Y* z5 P6 U8 q9 }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. g& p5 v/ U+ x7 N. y; J$ B<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 L6 K7 o6 n9 N我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 W+ ~" U- v; S9 p<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>