【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
! s9 |" N2 V0 k* y* u: Y4 sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ s" r! T9 M; K, L, kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 `& \/ M4 i2 l0 f6 k/ MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 b2 ^7 K5 H, `3 j: o/ Y. JIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 }1 q5 i) f$ @6 X/ n. S$ sEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 |/ `' r: k$ B; k, ~; bI love you I love you with all my heart
6 l7 w) k! H7 g3 e* NNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
; h; w* c; V" c7 P9 pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 O) }9 f+ l/ M" ^- S. ^* FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: \) z9 ?$ ?& ]1 h% n8 V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ d& j9 g" x. I- [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' [0 J7 _# n4 W9 D% ?$ N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 q; t& A- N9 r4 a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) c' ~! V9 `# T' n* G4 g1 v( A, d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 B7 G$ J8 k5 X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. \8 e7 \* l' p' `/ D/ V8 D- X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" x6 D% q8 I" h' ?9 h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 u. ~7 z7 W- q& x3 M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" ~9 x3 ?, m1 y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! [5 h+ r, y! l8 Z9 Y( x  c4 v<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 B/ L( s9 d$ b- ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. G  V& y7 e2 c, }- ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- x9 _$ C1 X9 [$ F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 m3 k6 s9 p+ F, p, W8 t8 n4 ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 T! f+ N, l( c4 {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& U( M' t! j& N9 a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  I. T7 R0 @& q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 f3 K$ }0 r: N/ Z9 b5 Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 o/ }! R  N7 h2 Z; S- \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- x* J! `2 d% p; O1 Y, P) y  g  R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% w5 ^* d5 N; `/ ~& e- F5 s) q3 D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. d) t* |, A1 K) z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, p' d0 `) \, h5 O1 K% O( J( a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 a% B8 z: s. e8 l* j+ g- {6 K<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; S9 X; \+ G$ a- Y% o) M7 ^# x) q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 T) r8 @- o, W) V. x& p) y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* [; g5 H* r. |6 Z8 j/ W1 T) @( ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% U/ q5 M* B/ p" ~: N- ~我请你剖开它

, x1 D" i" s  J5 k* g4 \( S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>