【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 B6 i0 h; U0 |0 @; k歌词我附在后面。
3 Y% o  g$ f0 D9 hThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" P, J1 S+ ^$ m$ EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 k: s. j1 ]8 ^$ F6 Y( ^9 y: ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& M6 |2 ]- _5 v% Z& l" aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
; Q4 b1 P4 [$ iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% F; m% R1 ^9 ]0 J+ ?6 MYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 O; l, k' g& bNothing can compare to my love
' y9 t$ B4 w( I$ `8 j6 s, x4 y3 U/ u! W4 pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ [- K* \! @8 [2 \& v: iI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. z( d" ?) N& fI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 [5 w, Z1 z; H2 J5 N6 dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: m4 V7 S: y1 D4 B" N0 u: ~0 QWith such a tongue as yours,
1 u4 |8 [6 X5 R/ JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; [2 q4 m' S! o6 i0 D, gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 F7 e+ f/ x# f9 q' O& Q% L
<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! B# r& P  T7 w/ ~- x  E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* Y" ~9 y" C+ J( C, L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 j8 Y" V! x5 L6 q) [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% T1 w1 B4 Y6 y& O/ q6 K5 A8 B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ J2 o& M  \+ w0 i# r3 N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) d; l' q2 R1 s. M<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 _8 g' ]% V& G  o4 E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ }4 X; A5 r* [; v: ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' m; r5 Z3 N0 l* C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! ]. M; d# Z) j* O! h<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 r3 ]8 ]2 U0 J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 y- ]( [, H) H3 h( _* p1 P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 U4 n2 X) B# Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 |; q; T+ u4 U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 W/ o8 ]* |$ }" V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; a' i7 S  S) ]7 z7 s- L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* s4 i1 h# L0 ~2 T0 P9 m<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ r% s$ {, b2 }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- H* \2 G7 r6 O7 w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- _5 o% \. g- R5 K! E3 @# x<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( Z' R5 H1 H5 l  L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& E! X# g& d" d: j  S<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ f  o1 T5 Q% c) T/ [' x' S3 {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& o2 A1 n, l; F- k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( F8 B! B+ X! ~8 e0 r' w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% i. f2 E4 X0 F9 o% x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: _( D6 S8 v* V5 Y2 R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 s4 V6 E" \8 k5 m' m<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
2 G0 r5 v+ p2 V  m8 C: @9 ~7 L/ \
$ u' W( \6 s9 t* {9 c4 S我请你剖开它
& P, o5 |- Q; G; A, c
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ |5 K9 m! u4 c$ f0 x( B0 I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>