【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 r7 n6 Z  w, ?( I' G4 Z7 zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: ~$ ?5 `% l  vThe sky is happy down to its soul
  j4 M! ]. E' b1 T+ j$ L8 FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& |4 B% |( h( `2 E( TEvery other word you utter is love
1 s+ w: V6 P6 M6 z2 q4 H6 r" sI really want to know just how much you love me
/ X: p1 w" G; ?I love you I love you with all my heart
: N/ B# J* E. \! ?+ u- d7 p0 ?2 PNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- L1 X) }" ^$ O2 WI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- z5 @, d2 C0 x( q- R! QI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ Z0 }; D; m& NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 p  h3 V! b1 J4 v) N+ N<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ ?4 R' g( [9 r+ H! t; X$ y7 \8 F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 n1 o8 e+ D. [* A0 g; L8 P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 q& Z) g/ K* v9 R7 T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, g9 c7 o6 x/ }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, c1 W  g* Q( F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  z1 R4 f5 L: B- ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( b2 i+ w. R6 v. ~( E) H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 h. f! h+ \" W' i: q/ t9 M0 E$ q/ G4 D<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) \$ m) l4 |8 Y# h7 Z2 @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 ^2 L6 |  G$ H' b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 m' Y* K9 B' z# R5 o. i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' [: u3 I" e0 o$ p: p8 X<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) F0 L- s- e" C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
0 O* v* C0 i8 Y+ k+ r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 q0 L+ t8 p$ K# |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& A2 y6 y2 R4 t1 H: B* F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 e" u2 `" c+ X, q, M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 a6 n4 c5 ?6 R& |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 z* v1 \$ E# O- ~: c' z) c' @5 _6 `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 g# c& P( `" n1 y% k  M5 e" d! \<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 L( {. D5 z, I+ Y8 n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ n. Q4 a% B, z4 T6 \) |$ h, y: s/ Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! r5 K* {6 k4 ^# Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: [7 _2 A) z/ _' O  J' ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. q5 j( a  R3 R# e% q8 J4 U8 Y9 K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ A, M' U0 C, @% F6 b<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) @3 D- h& }, s) i: v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 ]$ `7 E1 I$ c% c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% g0 @5 d5 H, x0 C/ V: u: W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 A: g; p; n; f. ^. B' U+ d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>