【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 d! F. r2 V7 Y% H6 m, D% V  E0 MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* f0 G- ~8 D3 JThe sky is happy down to its soul
. ~2 ^3 D' C, O& E4 e9 C' n3 MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ M; Z: G. L$ S: Z& ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ R& A% F1 T# m2 H( fYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 t" M+ p8 m6 @/ C" |$ t: r4 d8 WI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- e; N9 ?6 x8 r+ W  SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 n) P' |$ x  t8 v8 f2 B, ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& i% k7 e6 L" v; w: Y3 ]- IWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 g# O, X, \4 `* w3 R2 r* n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" V7 x) P( C  ^) O8 T  M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- ^, k/ r+ l8 I  Q# \. [& O+ e; G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 w2 g# x! s: ^3 |: P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& ^+ t, y  o6 J7 n7 b2 V( P' i3 ?4 b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 k- Q6 p5 b* `! P" J: G2 [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ W# r! r" `6 {% P% V; |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 c9 h8 z  P, l3 `& \/ X8 z: E<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( `7 P/ x0 X+ q+ i) X/ {# L<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- F4 [- X+ n+ e) u  {$ ]9 Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! v( Q' s8 p1 U6 _<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 [4 d/ W- F" m4 S$ o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  b& M. f( e% ]7 L5 B) ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  `) t9 T! X$ G) Q: Y" \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 p% W8 q5 [  a# Q! W% v# M" I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# C) R7 d) |" `8 q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 z! ~* T. a0 P2 b% b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, ~# t9 O% O# j8 Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 A2 a, k8 t! y0 v, W/ E0 j# X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; Y3 e: K& v9 L9 y  Q$ b* [' Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% L0 X# i0 T0 q2 l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: p! @9 o7 v: m% [1 ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. H' r9 i) o2 t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: c7 K1 s# l, E4 f. X<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; s/ T, J; N' N/ K我请你剖开它

# J5 Y. t- }! I. v) O9 V4 T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) F, r8 ~" g; u, T/ x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>