【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ X; H5 X0 U$ L! J; bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  d7 A; W- m' t# C6 S" s5 M2 {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- J- p# T8 E6 b& r& C" X. _5 aThe sky is happy down to its soul
  \  R0 B  p& ~( R1 C! Z9 _7 T2 wWith the moon kissing it every night
9 _" i& W, ?. D# a8 pSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 x# _8 s$ p; N, H; n7 {# fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 R1 ~, Q: H# tEvery other word you utter is love
" O# e0 g2 X7 a" k- I. qI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
+ p: o: q0 {$ i" n% bNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( a1 a) U; G/ {6 S2 uI want so much to see inside your heart
6 f, m  o' `3 J& }' c  ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) V% l8 J$ O5 Y7 D* _I regret not dying
3 Z. G2 T/ T/ J% ^! v: W& MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ R; _* G/ e6 K& K" e$ W; p! d- OWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 ~; {1 ]2 W6 ]3 x( TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 ~; \, l: Y6 a" Z- k& G8 _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 O& U, _8 W' s0 p# r/ I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 `  \; k. f) t& E' p3 f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 C  W  V7 j% v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( w4 O2 o: |' G& y2 P, @<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# p5 q( k$ Y- J1 {- i, e% k& P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 J+ A5 b0 y5 \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 F4 r8 {  @. Y2 n9 D5 W<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 x, ^' ?. p: t6 y, @; W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: ~, d6 A: j$ q) l* U- y5 h<P>你无需担心</P>
# t3 t' j8 M; \2 ^1 Y/ b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! t7 B& V6 ]/ U* J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- F7 T3 ]4 W8 W, \! e$ K. |& X1 O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; [' t; r+ H. U3 ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: d1 u* ^- C3 r$ c+ U# D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# {3 m8 r6 G, ?0 [* d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ L7 F) ~( p  X( H0 `  U$ k- v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 H3 b0 ]9 E* v- x: J! \% z0 \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) K. f/ V% W  q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  C/ H. c0 I$ `) c" N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 ]1 M/ R% f* Y1 \<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" i6 P8 F. r4 A% |( ]+ Z$ g* I1 r<P>I regret not dying</P>
& a5 D5 v' y  A4 }( d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; _5 h# }  r$ Q* b4 Z1 |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- a$ _, }9 a& e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! [( @  J9 j7 _& X" p$ ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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! T: p3 G3 c7 w2 V我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' M, K# G  ~1 b  J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>