【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' Y+ m# q7 @# C; o' YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- F8 d) M# a- T; o: o- HYou needn’t fear anything
  @' o! h7 Z, p! NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ l' f# X" ^" z( REvery other word you utter is love
0 U( N' W5 I5 C5 D) [+ xI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- q8 z+ N3 D( i' xNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 X( L& x2 |; e% ^& V7 d  EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. c; \+ b4 r! h( J' }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! v( \5 F7 P) y0 E- D8 \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- F# n; b- g5 ]7 T' Z; k& b! OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& d  T/ N" y7 s- O4 d$ S4 WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" @; w! ~- T* g* k) n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 {2 A( o2 `2 h: S: f- V& d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 ]- j+ ~- K; Z* C" d' r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 h- C& ]2 W. H2 O( q3 Q" c% S$ P5 ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 j" M  H& c* o/ ^, S: @& R; k  x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( t. o- x3 `2 r0 q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 ^: D% j9 q. v; \6 a4 u4 h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: a7 q& N( }: M  D9 V5 W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 I  Q9 ^( B) a6 A. \$ {<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 r3 e' C( x, W, N8 K( u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  t9 }5 g) M5 i8 d0 w' y7 r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 d* X' ]5 c: F* g* i/ u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% [- X& [6 O, o$ v) w<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, `" m6 V8 Y1 ?" q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: o4 a- y. w* S5 E% K: F7 K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 J& d; a4 g5 J7 t+ G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) I. ?8 M( E2 d8 S0 B) J" m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* K5 H- t- x4 L, @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 F! u5 k' u9 _  S! A3 j<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ Q; D0 c/ O! F, F9 L* K/ C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: C  x: F: \; N/ `0 S; q7 B  t<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- w' G& b/ |# W. e6 x4 [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# n- C7 O% h3 P+ W: x* s<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( A4 h+ r" V  A1 `/ ?# o5 l& M<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 s7 V" }8 A; C; ^2 L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 B4 {( I. L0 K) b8 H5 u' s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# P! K0 k' `( k- k1 }: e4 \+ e( h我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' J1 F; u- @! {% n+ v, h% e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>