【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 A7 K5 m' {" D- ?歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
2 ]1 i3 y  P: X8 g6 E( f2 M7 f. yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ X# L4 O% ^- v) k* R2 \0 kThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 p3 K- r  Q& g+ ?With the moon kissing it every night
7 t+ K: {/ l4 u9 k% S# M) |' M0 VSeeing the sky content with its love
. H6 r4 u) a1 d5 ]( |" sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ v  J( P' Z+ R( ~9 dYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% ~5 n! H; f" WI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
$ d" R# C8 W) ^/ q0 n. _6 t( YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; A( H& T: T/ U7 q5 |+ DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 B, F* [9 o' Z" {I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) R* T6 Z1 I! zI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! r' N. G) r) p4 hI regret not dying
  `" e8 X% ]( Y, r/ z/ BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 k  n' x% s- }# hYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 Q, U! T1 t+ S3 Z' eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! F, N6 I3 d* X5 V5 z7 `<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ ]  ~; z: K. p/ M" [: I! a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" f( ~& T3 V; C; L' `, @9 c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, \. t# C' E% e) g. |" j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  a5 \2 F* X# K# P2 U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 }9 z7 F3 w" R* @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 U* {) Q. ~& v& X% a$ y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 T& I, U8 S. b& L' Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: M$ }+ P+ W# v; ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ M2 R, z* ^8 q+ ^- L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, z- c# \; e- s6 T( x% s2 a. }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& G/ Z4 |* ?3 W6 R/ b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ S' y4 j7 J( V9 J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- q5 K. k1 ^' W: Z% e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' U$ ~' w. B4 V$ V/ A* @! k1 |8 r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 c8 M8 n4 j; g5 n# N- x. E, w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% k% S0 G) g1 r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( v+ a7 q6 x0 r( T* g<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 {* u4 f% d& F; J3 q$ K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: O7 y1 V/ {5 g2 I# v- L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, v9 ]+ T: X; q6 V' ]  ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! ], y& S: J2 L0 ~* S9 [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' C  ~7 z1 v2 p& A6 z) T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. P* L6 v5 U7 ~  _& A3 g, }" J我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 F( q5 u! H' G9 n) _# L9 Z. M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>