【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
2 _! Z: O0 K; S; n$ Q; OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! m7 g3 x7 o6 s! EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: u6 @0 x0 W$ C1 V% P' ]+ }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- {( D% K9 k! ^& B8 qSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# o# b7 Q& G$ W# h5 A" nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- x8 ?$ Z* ~+ w  w9 mEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 \6 H' W8 ^3 \; b! n% i, @I love you I love you with all my heart
7 P* p1 T4 m7 V# q) n3 ENothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ a* H' b4 h! EI want so much to see inside your heart
* h+ u) i% x, _8 |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* y, K5 _. \# x1 f# x! DI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. S! U* a* J5 D8 X: GI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: ^& F8 J! A& L# [; g1 v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 ?  J2 F1 K9 j; d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, G& {* [5 Y, N4 q5 Y9 \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ q, }# p; ~0 ?$ t! d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& ~+ b( L+ K% O) A% D<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 G; [8 J+ l  e; J: j9 k/ s6 O' u<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 ~2 f4 ~9 M" A; K) u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' @- H7 j0 }5 Y  Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 U" E) x1 N6 i6 Y; M<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& o5 g4 K5 H4 y2 }" x- u' M" P( L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 H1 F+ i* @2 \! _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: x  }1 F6 v& E# W3 ?3 _; A' }<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 Z3 V, @- D' ]) N7 f/ A! [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, E: G- b' M9 p( l: d1 r+ ^( W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 \- \. H+ B3 v4 n  S# c* b8 y4 [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# h( s  Z' \7 O  [3 p0 f0 b, N# w" J* E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* h" |9 K! C; }) ~8 h. R( ^4 E& n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( x5 y$ i- C, ?/ Q" d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' I" P* C9 E& P+ `3 q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, j: z5 L7 p* {<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 t( D! h3 j/ R- l0 o3 e- z' v+ j+ R# _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: E" {) g& g; t" _' w6 ^<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( S- Q* @- U, m: e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( [" s! r+ u( g+ B+ {* ]5 v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- h% O, I3 l* u7 @5 h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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9 v7 M; s2 T7 J/ z$ M7 ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>