【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. Y1 \& I, `% O, W( S( N! VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 k- P1 ~7 s) d* R4 `6 sWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) g  U( I1 ?) W- KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 {+ t% I# Q& L! x9 d5 E/ G8 GYou needn’t fear anything
. D, z+ B& w* f! @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* ^* w' I) P1 u4 e0 G3 U- GEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. G; ]7 u5 P! z( M" y1 e) n& rI love you I love you with all my heart
# S4 q4 p: Q% ^" w0 m7 BNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 m' F5 m. O2 Q' G& ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 ~1 Z  h) v/ b2 BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. y0 F2 w! Y: ?7 z8 T! C( ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
: a# @5 E: O5 ?+ h" _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' E2 r+ s4 |! p0 A( j1 E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; S; |1 M3 V) B) _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& D7 {9 c- l9 a; U+ k" \3 s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 y7 u. O, V, y  ^8 w1 q. k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. y1 q' K% [8 [0 a8 Q+ Z$ [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; g! x% j/ f" G1 W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ Z/ |3 n' y3 `& f" h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 T, w: ~1 k/ i0 s% H: L6 ~0 Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# v1 o( ?4 {, O/ S$ q  Y/ }<P>你无需担心</P>
1 n3 L1 U" U% `" `<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ [& ^7 v: m  m4 k$ N0 L2 Q" b$ V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# M. t' b* ~' P% y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 o9 V$ ~! N* j  k9 M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 m7 M$ @' V0 t( Z, d7 t# k0 D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- B: z5 C: U" g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* i* C6 s( K, X$ g: E9 ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 g9 W' J' m% Z* K; ?/ Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! I# i9 `; u# m0 `- J" B  d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: y5 `& U8 N' R) H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 P  F0 h5 f& t1 H; N7 \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 o7 z9 E/ T/ E2 s<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  M' ]" t* D; N/ ]& y% K) B<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* t- b* E' i4 g) _7 q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- W! G& K- q! G, _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. |0 h* E# d' |, m+ l' R0 H) R/ n/ `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( y1 w* d$ [0 ~+ O" {/ e" e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, O% q: c2 y) V4 {7 s5 P<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
+ @  t$ V- _" ~& j( v/ O& P4 R( U
( _! x/ B& s2 P- D* U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>