【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
3 p  ~% {4 y1 o  ?  F7 q+ q$ IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  q$ @) _* `3 y9 ~" e3 BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ }- {9 J; ]7 C; C* M. uWith the moon kissing it every night
. P" e/ a0 r0 K$ d: W+ ~Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 b( q1 C& n7 g  Z8 |; iYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 c8 n+ |6 Y! T2 FEvery other word you utter is love
- u. S2 d1 \9 B6 n3 d% rI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% }$ K  Q  M" {# ZNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" G7 L: K% Z, h: u4 o1 RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) R2 j/ o% D( E$ h/ L. o, qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- Z: b9 E# s/ E- X" i/ tWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 O. O- @* n8 q9 r  e1 m# z0 vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ y1 k! m5 f* }' ]* |9 U1 y" e! ]<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 e; @0 z; c% p+ a1 ]: r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ P( C- Z" _' u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! z2 Q) T! ~8 W6 M<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  m6 g$ V( M" R. Q/ i4 H  y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ O( ^# \( W9 i$ f; f5 v; q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' i3 Z) ~; h" r- M3 H4 g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 g1 R) v% v: S; I! G) ?5 K( D9 f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 O" }/ E. z$ g3 `! c+ t<P>你无需担心</P>
, N$ W2 N1 y7 [) Y' C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  E: [6 ~7 ]' z' B+ t. O6 r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. R" K- }" H' V+ @) N: n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* }+ h9 U2 j6 |- W( i. G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; q5 O1 f0 ]2 x% q( O! v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. o7 Y: v( h% p& i4 n& @& v! _% b8 t<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& V" X  \* a6 U3 A<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! h$ `2 i+ r+ o6 F4 y4 B# }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  O+ e0 Q( {" ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& j$ h% n3 `1 N% S3 b/ L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- m) D7 ~+ _. X7 D7 E8 `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ n/ d9 Q% k% j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% `( A- y# s5 L7 Q" w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! c/ f1 H, q; A" y1 V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 h2 @0 k! T4 r8 S0 n<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 g) `4 V4 C4 G* h# r" a9 g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>