【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  ?, C0 C0 m1 q9 V5 H- }- q4 sWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 D6 y0 j9 O2 G2 XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, T! c. q( b7 q1 UThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- V0 n" C! F1 l( Y: H6 O0 H$ jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ v7 h/ _+ \/ t* fI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' |5 s8 F+ x; m* s: u( e3 NNothing can compare to my love
& Y: d! E% u5 s* g% H# ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& s% R5 Y' I9 T7 SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! q/ F! @& S; r* l, u# LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: r# `! |1 _! o) |3 N- x- uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' ?+ c+ j' Z4 Y8 PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 n( N  w7 T! Q& ^3 kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 R& Y. A( N% i0 k/ ?& a5 w+ U<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  F, v6 O( [: D  b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 {! `$ _4 H$ N$ [# q- q8 X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ h6 |/ [9 X# N+ b$ l* g9 i  R; r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, e9 z& y( E$ u. g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' U* o/ h8 h# ^+ m5 T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 ]1 z& [3 A% S( R& o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 e  j" s  t* k) {6 ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 ]4 k8 I' f' A' g8 g8 P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( I6 o% G6 G1 w3 D1 D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" `/ h& W' \. i- g0 v( o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' d0 Z6 g) Q1 G% T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 @2 {" \5 k( A( Z  y' j& T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 [3 ^, `9 k" T" ^6 V9 ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 S) d. d% d) c& z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  L6 u5 P' l0 t" q* b& ^9 [- \<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- i$ q# l5 Z$ X: P6 I9 l) {1 h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 F, v: L, C# q" |9 n) {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 T, v' A' n  n9 N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- I7 C& [. y, h( F<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ h' a; g5 m" W) K4 {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) O+ x! r' {9 `6 K* o# C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" Y) Q, N7 d8 T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>