【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; C- L, G1 H+ D" l歌词我附在后面。
  \$ |! j% I. M- D7 `' f7 _+ U+ K4 TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 Z. Y$ o* F: W: _) z* tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
7 O  x2 V; o% M( CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 q8 c. r' P1 I! ~2 q  PThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 O  D7 V$ j7 o% f9 M1 _My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ z( b. ]# m5 M+ B$ U1 S, N1 hI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 y7 }- V' d- I; u5 yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. I9 f4 K% t: h% fThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 w& Y0 s6 {- C8 YI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! M% ?4 ?+ `2 L8 f# ~8 h. ZI’m still filled with fear
8 u; |; p" ~- E! [. mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) v  v1 ~! h7 t+ s  i) X+ u- xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' i# T! Y* |" j2 s( h) ]$ ~% YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; J6 {9 D* `( Q& c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. B8 M) h4 A* N+ I* {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' x6 F& k/ y- Y( f* Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. S, P& L9 K! R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 g. u1 V, o, T. _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% W& j9 j" g: M7 D6 y3 G" W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* `$ W0 q5 a8 y8 S<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 o( g$ ]) N) H2 V) _: H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- e5 u7 ]" k9 W& L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. b0 _- p+ U  K2 D: s* D5 o6 u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ w5 O0 f% y3 w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" }0 ^1 a; |1 m- U/ i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: d" U, w+ o2 J/ n& s6 C  x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ z4 M+ A$ i6 s6 I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: R% P" ]5 J9 G* ]& d7 P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; F( X9 F/ G# g, D, S7 q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# A( ]0 V0 D, K- \9 G6 F; e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ C5 d  P: b/ v2 C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- K  }# z0 k8 V2 O& a- W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 Y! S& `4 \1 G, Z$ A/ n5 X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 B8 |4 ~8 K) d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 l; }6 `' P7 u1 e, n8 w6 L' f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" ~1 O% k  q. g* m' P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; Q$ {3 B8 F: o2 D( B9 M+ v* `1 n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 g- ~4 k' f9 e5 }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 V. o6 M* }5 L; h1 v1 x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% F3 t; |: j" }# }7 P6 Q$ |我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>