【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% [3 }3 l( Z- n' y- e" \The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) e+ a( Y( O9 R3 }& r2 B, \& pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 j9 x! b4 s% \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 X* \1 M' e+ S2 k8 ?  QYou needn’t fear anything
* y! p8 x& Z$ l5 `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! Y& w/ `% R2 u' nEvery other word you utter is love
6 c; ?- I, Q0 W" @I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 \8 n# Z2 W6 d+ s% P2 ^5 c& ]Nothing can compare to my love
9 ]5 ?7 w1 o  O! S! U8 y" k) DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 K$ N- x  S! P0 w, L* l/ M* qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! V5 W+ f7 t8 S. m; RI want so much to see inside your heart
' E. v) {/ B2 K! XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  e1 X  U7 h. O4 z) W/ A2 mI’m still filled with fear
3 B6 b# {8 x, _* @) |. J' qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ [" f  J( y2 Y2 dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* j  w' o& g1 O8 Q9 w% E; r2 M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 R. V& ?; u3 x( P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' e* M: ^9 G/ W7 ]- T* Z# p<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 \& z& a7 T* n) [4 |3 ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- f( y5 M: C$ _* g4 [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 H! D$ e) m6 h6 u5 R  i& Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) r/ h7 e, g5 ]/ f% h<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: h8 i; L2 e, o" l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. T1 n9 R* x- V/ b. V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( h' s$ V- g8 j1 u4 b- R6 m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! w9 x7 L8 b4 Q: z( U# r, M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. v/ f2 t( W( n  x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( k8 N$ }+ i$ S# }6 P2 @* v$ V6 |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( {& W5 F4 a: ^- @9 s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 P1 j& U% a* _0 P2 o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ b, Z: w5 R" k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& O. q- I8 i4 p. p& N& n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# H5 E" @% ^8 y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* E/ w# u/ d4 l& U- j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ D$ z% u' }9 M( C7 e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, y8 j; `; ]! G5 y0 L) J1 l<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; G1 a8 f2 I" R+ E3 ?* {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ Y( J3 j& a% \% z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>