【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
1 x- |) [* A& Z3 r2 i. IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
3 j7 F! f0 x  H# ?7 l1 I7 OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: K9 a$ |/ j0 s8 O3 w5 LThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 r9 y4 {0 m* L- s% p& m0 U5 DWith the moon kissing it every night
& T: s- ^9 O: D0 P; e3 eSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 h) c& i. w: J4 o1 m: DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% T9 x/ z8 g6 ~/ z& JEvery other word you utter is love
  f7 V# x4 e. I& f( P$ [4 RI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  Z( U$ x4 ?0 C% O9 p! c9 {I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 ^# f* s- k# u5 NI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  l4 F( f* k" P6 FWith such a tongue as yours,
5 s, V! N0 d. P( ?! `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, o& e1 M# B9 c, i& a+ ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" S9 ?7 j' y" S3 [# F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# B, m3 n8 c9 S  x# s! J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' S* J' E, e8 _* J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# p- X& u0 r# c- c, G) z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 v, O: V& j. j0 m  F8 _- N0 v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 C7 t8 N. Q1 w& W: l8 K* W" P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 e* Y4 Y7 d) Q% Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( V& K* Y" E9 @<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 Z0 [* e8 L- U" D' p6 V4 k3 L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 Y8 ~6 ?/ l+ }3 x8 P6 m<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' r) V: _/ {2 j+ V7 ?# Q& p<P>你无需担心</P>
( c  [6 N+ @% I" u: F' z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& V6 L8 c4 }5 i! l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# w7 ^1 P  q* p5 L1 J( u# d* A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: K0 ^  h; o+ Z7 H8 q# ]5 o<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 `* s$ H( z8 Q8 R  z3 @3 A; i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  s% B! l, E0 X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 J. b' q" m2 j5 }$ ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 u9 N: N8 J2 Y( m' ~<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 p2 d" O4 _" T. A# n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 b, Y9 X3 C- m4 `<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 R: G" ]: r! Y3 i$ P1 p, a3 e( ]6 j<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ Z/ O: Q; t, k. B# L4 h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, D; y! K8 x+ L/ a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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