【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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& G- K* ^6 H  k歌词我附在后面。
8 e( R1 m5 s( E* f( _; AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; a1 t6 ~9 B, V  u+ H* O( ]6 rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 W/ g8 R2 M6 L0 ~; `8 \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' r/ J$ m6 k, @, \5 s$ b( f: YThe sky is happy down to its soul
" L( @' E/ X. r1 mWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 d2 R* B8 c' k2 N" S0 s5 O6 N' hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* Y( L6 j) n7 A. iYou needn’t fear anything
, s3 @* Z# l, p2 V8 ]" f* GMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" l( Z6 Z4 e& j- k1 n5 AI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 j) h& c  J( B: w  L6 F! q( [+ [I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 y# {* U3 c1 T- VI’m still filled with fear
2 @' o/ u, J# I, F+ [" n. hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 `2 `6 _" X3 F) Z3 s; C+ _2 r" nI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 ?" O$ \/ T9 C  {1 X, EWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( |- V; }7 B( ~0 R$ R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' C, Q9 |0 P2 _8 L1 `" Q# Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; ?: ?$ k  c9 w, Y7 G( N5 K+ f0 R4 _: i<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 M& B' {, S  `( S0 }9 X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) W5 w' f& b1 n! i4 ~<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 t+ K; l: {9 r) L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  w% B) P" C, p  b: U- }$ `1 u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# X" C  c3 M' C; y+ V5 i4 n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ R0 B; ~- Y) B$ d  h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' P  i. @7 S+ K/ y# I' l, ~, A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# A7 h8 o+ p) J( c( F4 |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( B3 T% E! `. ~<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 Z5 M$ b1 B5 f2 k0 S* }; M) X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ B+ a+ e& U. `" ^$ I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, t: k4 N# B% O+ l0 Q! S$ N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" a& y- v/ ^7 c, C, F4 `+ }) z9 ]<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ E& `) M. e! i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: z" _$ a7 ?- A5 `: l; u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ V/ T. f3 t" x/ e! e/ u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 w$ v5 [8 c- \0 P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 q. R2 _0 e; F2 w( z' ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- a: ]$ V% K* O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 h/ A# u) A3 ?6 G' x$ {7 b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ v0 B0 q1 L+ y' K6 {1 p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ A% I& o4 o( N. K0 p& }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

+ w  e+ E0 a2 g6 L( J- L( q# V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>