【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
& z( @( A. u. x8 C: {: ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
  y9 o( t% I9 {6 Y+ ^/ L5 NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 U& b3 j: u  aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, ~- u9 Y# b: r  Q% r( dThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 m% z7 U0 c' D/ f; GWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
+ \; W0 x+ L; t( }$ k4 q9 m2 cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; p& H) M* C" C! W$ KEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
2 l+ A6 _6 T' }# M3 }8 HI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' j$ S( C* e$ u8 P, Z+ i5 fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( A+ D8 ^3 `# L$ W. QI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 `% x+ `8 C7 k3 L, b" `) B8 X9 \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  `+ B0 W% i- ]* N% w# V7 R/ ?I regret not dying
8 {! ~. U0 p& t7 }# h" M0 ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- @: S8 R/ p# k4 t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# [8 D3 A8 P/ z) s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 E0 j* X; N; }& X4 u- R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" @. B& ]/ x0 r$ }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" q# |( d- v, t' Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) O; C. C. V- m( G( n+ W8 P/ a8 [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 r% |5 {5 W% `' Y' z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& i  B- `) p) {- X. x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' m2 [! p# _1 m9 F% O" R1 h9 s) g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 H# V  C4 |* w$ H  O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& B% t/ x* H# x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) S4 A! z7 V: G, p% n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 \1 n, d5 A# Z) V! w& y& t5 I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ X4 f; |$ z2 `+ o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) D3 @4 {- R' c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: U+ `1 a' v6 ?! a' B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 @. H8 z2 o! P. n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ Y. C% G0 }8 `- P! i, {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ x/ H, A; }6 B& A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# b2 M4 V8 H1 f2 k; v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" o# A/ e: h) ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 k/ s- k, G  M7 A1 S0 X/ p. g<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! I# u0 @# J+ q% L0 W8 Z; z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' h8 ]% l$ v+ ^1 M, U) ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! {: t5 W+ ^9 v$ M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& q0 l' C# {% h" o: y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" J1 ~% I5 M& A$ g# C" P, ^3 U5 i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 |, x- v9 |! U% h$ ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 F" E3 y4 e6 v  I0 a  G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ e7 p  s/ f# U; O2 _, T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 x0 W& K; x" G2 z; V0 `<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

) Y- B- A( P" c# g& v 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& s0 Z4 Z6 w: x6 L# P  w8 F7 C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>