【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' G1 g$ n# v  A- s& b7 DMaking the sky glitter like gold,
; O# X" `. v0 ]$ k0 Q0 AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ R6 F* \% I, `" R" G) HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 x7 R; u3 X" u0 h! dThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 B! O. a% [3 V9 eWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( a) @) Q$ H* e6 h( E' ^; u: ~. ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) K1 a8 N+ K! B  `: UMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 P& l, K" n  b4 o2 g7 R  gEvery other word you utter is love
& P# ^7 Y  s. c: MI really want to know just how much you love me
2 z$ f" ?" Y8 p. I& a6 F* BI love you I love you with all my heart
$ Z( M3 V. f% o; Q! g7 R6 INothing can compare to my love
$ @. f' U0 ~! J+ Y5 l1 e2 BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 c: O' x9 b) {' [( j6 B4 [/ j4 }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 L9 X- S& }# g1 s& i6 EI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 x/ u2 H4 {; s. U) P$ DWith such a tongue as yours,
3 n3 R0 `# i+ G, b" Q9 RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* V8 h4 B9 a* S0 F. q! GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 {6 x2 y: d0 S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 t  x2 y+ Q. k2 p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 ?& N3 `- e5 h6 D/ @) E<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) A& Y* L- _% l# S2 e! F- ~6 P/ Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 N8 M8 w  t5 d" {" f" v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- J1 t8 v  `8 D: A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 h4 q; _5 U3 @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% X. b2 a! X( _1 Q, V. m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 z/ L( B3 Z1 K  |' L# d1 Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% b( u' ~3 w: z' w# k) z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 u3 }5 T# K4 b+ z+ S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 c. d( t: W' I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, I* Y; j  Y2 U) H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 m7 f9 c, e8 H$ h+ o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ t1 ^! @$ m- }% X4 {. s# g7 N, k8 [<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ z1 e5 ~; Q; _( U, H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& q7 R: D4 P: \" u) [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* s6 T) \8 a( x+ w9 Q% x" e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# u) S. B- q8 @! S+ g. t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 s1 X0 h& n" z3 e6 {/ Y8 R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% G" {' w6 T# C<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. M# f; j* y0 z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) v1 p/ ^. f; h( M5 L4 N  W<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" T8 O. q! T( Y( t( c; F# M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 P+ P$ C$ c2 k5 `( y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 l' u: e& N& z' h; o/ P- ]0 P1 a<P>I regret not dying</P>
  T, J0 Q( m9 \; D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, V  m" w0 r! f0 T" y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 j% i- U4 g4 m/ X$ _! d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ w- J7 W% T% p  Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( p% h' a. Z. {) t<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 H* O# N- Q& Y6 ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: T* K, [' E2 T- h% `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- H* b9 l. i/ O, K% P* o  T% L" d% u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, g* Q8 o5 @# N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 {( j! Z5 t; K; h$ t) A( D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>