【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ Q* K) ~' A4 W- C) B0 h* zThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, |. q) a" R  u$ m5 a% G# LFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
) m( c! @' y: A1 }We meet and talk everyday,
( g1 J% c, Y  t& s8 _But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" W7 {7 D6 E2 z& f$ H$ `/ H8 u% _If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; m+ E. d+ e9 J% r7 v0 Q1 {7 eI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
* [& k: d1 U" ^3 C" y; }( b( {2 q. sWhy is it so difficult to express?
# G4 T1 W& n" z+ XI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* [3 _2 H1 o, ^+ r! EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
( O) W. F, g+ r/ V. @I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% q$ I, W5 I5 I1 T, }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, k* `5 b+ v4 Y, CEntrust my love within your heart
, ^; _- D5 N, I1 [+ s0 ~Love… just the word love
" \0 C+ \/ \% n2 V8 C1 v1 MWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 Y; A# B* ?% ^/ L( _6 @I want to confess that I love you,
! {" y0 J) W7 N5 eBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 s/ q% {/ [7 f3 V+ U) i. AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 I- O! C- C' d4 h# QCan I entrust it to you?
4 D2 D2 `: `, M# y0 V5 I3 a7 A& G4 uEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

+ s. H8 E$ W  C" }<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* Q% |  L% L- k<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! S# {* X- v9 j3 e1 N<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 H% A$ B' E1 o( o4 u4 F8 z6 _4 r<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, r2 I( c6 H& s' c9 H4 B& _+ k* r<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ K0 m  d. a) L/ g8 [, ]<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ f9 r! D$ h: _6 D: U4 o4 a  t<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' _2 G5 R. k/ v+ A# Y# i<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& Y% J7 p* j' a8 N+ w: O0 E4 e# m<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
* ]3 t9 u% k" y5 d. ?3 ^) Y* J<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ X+ I& \+ l) e' ~9 g9 n" i/ h: _<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 s/ f8 p# H; g8 v+ }% ?<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
& d0 t& _4 p  J+ B<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; B# h) u' B' `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
" h  |+ X  Z/ t: H/ S<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ q" m$ l! ^% \" z% p6 E6 n. w0 Y% y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 V) D$ X  p) {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 P+ W. j) ?- j( V) E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 y; y0 G* `3 K6 J+ }8 i  a<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; _1 Y, A: x* T) U  K, R<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 i! Q5 H) t6 U0 Z/ K<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 l- t/ R* t9 F<P>But I never did </P>
; U4 h: U9 i- K<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- J9 s2 }' P# Z1 X0 Z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 {3 }+ Y) f- H) p* G<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  V: C  |3 B* K% E* l4 q& P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 J. V5 u+ u/ }2 o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 ^9 E( p' F) n8 s9 [& Z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 x) v* f: g" r3 L% W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 {$ B7 p/ V' r" r$ }, i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% Z1 r+ e" [" w) J2 b<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 Z. p( g/ n4 t8 c1 J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 }- ?: r) v& O" E5 r% W- ]- q0 l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
$ H- z2 P, a* }6 m<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
% O1 Y- O1 _8 l5 w3 T5 |  |<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

: ~* A! D" C, x" F这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

; N/ G; H7 E; C9 h2 B; c  F) Z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& k. }% K+ _$ p, v. Y4 x4 g<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>