【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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( o! B4 w6 i+ L8 U. r4 J我另将歌词附在此。
. j6 ~- u7 e2 Y% ~. d/ m2 j& yThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* P9 D9 C4 e/ q& s! s" _From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
5 K$ K) U6 b2 |# UBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' d$ }! ^/ _2 s: Y- cIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& S3 `4 K( ]5 q/ \+ @. tI would probably know how you feel
0 i4 \/ Q; O+ LLove… just the word love
7 z- _8 J" p) ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
# C- v( D2 p: _, s$ LI want to confess that I love you,
3 k8 f( i, Y0 p. q6 u2 F% d) NBut I never did
+ I* i. _5 L! H8 k7 o9 r, SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ L: B9 d8 i! e$ xIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- H& a; ^. |4 Q. ^2 V- \Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 {. Z, r7 X# o" U# n# ^  m4 sBut I never did
, [/ w# h+ P: i( N# z5 wOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  E- q& x" Q7 W4 MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) E, _* W  c, N5 ~$ s3 N# pCan I entrust it to you?
$ Q+ u& N/ Z5 S6 V  t3 ]# I  x" i8 JEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) g; b1 k( W0 d' L8 s) d8 W( j<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 t7 C0 }! J" a0 W* w1 y, l<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: p- L( j- {1 \* \3 [" W- g4 J<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 P% d+ Q& ~, {" j' x- f% J<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( {% M. y+ e7 f. Z3 B4 o8 r0 ?9 e<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 B) h  q" r1 H1 h6 j9 i& D. M1 E<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( L. X  r2 P  B/ {' H<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% }% f1 X; k! u% n* q% x<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ ]: L% ?; Y8 C<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 |. t' f+ C& L* }<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
( h6 m: l0 }2 I5 M: h8 `+ C# M<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' D7 f5 E' u0 G5 b7 y0 g<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) B% F, ^$ q+ P- U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 Z" n' G9 d& [! r  @% ~<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; W2 ?2 n' Q6 q$ j7 A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) n3 |; Z3 e" l# }7 }  ]<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, }1 Y% _( v3 t& A  b8 C* v3 A<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ R6 o9 {; U: e) y# N. N7 u<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 Q; c( S+ j! N% w4 U<P>But I never did </P>
7 A; Z5 l, V6 |, U2 N: _$ f% S  T<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  A4 z, f5 J  L5 A- c$ y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 L" a" k8 ~, B- ^5 {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 F" c5 Z- U) r/ B+ v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# G. k2 u" ?' q* D7 g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( u9 D5 B" M$ [* q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. ^  @5 Z0 U8 U; w  v. b$ G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( p& m$ J' v& J+ J$ f5 J" o<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

" N7 M0 R% s2 `' C. c# C这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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+ K2 L0 b0 d* a这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>