【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 Q( e/ M* A5 F0 y4 H  V; k4 _& uThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
6 f: U6 d$ H* J- QI already loved you with all my heart
  n( J+ j9 x0 u# AWe meet and talk everyday,
0 y- x8 `# q& P/ e2 ?9 PBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 K$ v# _, [$ G! e3 s' fIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 F+ n3 t) x0 B; NI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
$ @+ a( D6 X/ J" JWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% p, S) e9 F- z& c) a+ V3 HBut I never did
( {) A$ a8 {" e2 JOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 `2 z2 O% \4 ^: P0 ^' A  T* m- a- }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& Q7 ~8 j" ?( i$ BCan I entrust it to you?
# u6 d2 a" @1 B+ \3 d4 c- Z8 o7 UEntrust my love within your heart
) c% b! p2 [8 a# CLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 A1 m9 k$ M; K" GI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
$ S7 w: i0 J* M' sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 |! Y1 M: t( x6 h) S5 Q. tI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
# _. e3 t3 D9 Z5 nEntrust my love within your heart
+ G/ B$ |6 y, M# jCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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7 i! E% f; g7 n$ T) [[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ b$ s) {- n$ w( d) g<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 Q# p, w7 ]( H9 I, ~<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% P' L- w1 l: J# s! U! P<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' v% y! {8 _8 }9 n( g$ q<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
; T9 s, w& W/ s! q/ S<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& ?! O) X& E# E+ _; f1 v<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
% Y1 i) `7 _3 U( B6 b* }<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* j. ~, e; j+ a4 ?$ Z4 m; ^4 n, M% [<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& e* N7 k; J% U, J<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) P9 U) D$ k  f2 V% V6 c5 A- q<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 E8 A0 _, V; [% i" a<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( x$ c+ w$ ]( X<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* _! @+ o7 a' A/ t' f+ E7 l<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 [2 ~, E8 T& ^9 k  d. X+ X- V<P>但我不会</P>
- L4 Q1 O+ z6 g. X/ d( Z3 y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 V$ t3 s( |, t' w0 N<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  y& n" P0 S& e; w0 M& Q- v; N<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# u' s( i' j& a( j$ |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; I- p0 ]" m5 x$ b5 V  g3 P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% J/ n3 ^+ a! M3 X6 T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  N1 r. i9 _' Z& ]<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ m; `6 x% c/ `% ?( z8 F) u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
5 D6 w, L4 m; p1 \) b<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 n8 h, `& i5 h: Z" E<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 ]9 K/ D3 K; X; U7 O4 o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' g* u$ _7 o: T' N# d9 P: |( N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

. s" W* C" c9 ^3 z' c这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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2 z) s6 Z4 t% h6 U0 b1 a# }<P>

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. o0 i( Q% G& {1 }; Y+ R* c8 k<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>