【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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2 l( p+ r( K2 O: F/ S我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
2 Z1 ?$ ^9 A6 D7 f: @# P: VWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# R; m  i  X, {5 L3 T8 T! b8 oI would probably know how you feel
, c4 B/ ]- a1 _2 D$ z2 cLove… just the word love
) p+ K8 ]9 D; {5 R1 B/ ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
# X& G" f0 e/ ~4 @7 a, V' P3 B1 PI want to confess that I love you,
" o3 }# u" n% {# I# ]7 S% J  {) ~- cBut I never did
9 M+ s7 C1 Z7 [2 v, H, T& IOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) l) H" ?% y$ P, ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: t( n/ {  m4 S5 v7 q2 S. HCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* n; o+ D# w  \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 Y- i: @+ z) ?5 B8 W<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 v* G1 R2 C1 n8 E' r' Y<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" N* T( [+ M. C! T4 }0 W8 ?; H! }2 B<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 D* E% O! e+ F) s3 q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 Z$ J, H& ~) H" X) z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, G& Z: w0 G% f<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. `  [$ j; G! e<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, c" ^6 Q' F) q) L1 V<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 B) j' L' I5 g+ s$ V1 K! l& Y% i<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
& O  D1 J" S6 x4 p  Y2 `<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 x! S3 b& I* y* Q( B) T<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
( P& J' b5 t* }/ c9 ?<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 X1 I- o! W7 |5 ?- j$ C. A3 U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& _7 y. ^0 K, b& }1 v: K6 Y- l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. w+ X4 e1 @( W2 K# @5 x/ ?<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 A2 c/ x  q, n) o: I) V; x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 T# A3 ~) }6 t) g- Z5 E<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
$ W$ w; c2 l$ ~! _( {0 `6 {<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& F3 B2 v9 f7 C0 K% ^8 C4 J<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
2 K& l' f- E3 B) j0 R# b; j<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
% v" X7 x; w/ T' m3 |<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 `, \! D4 u- F& n3 ~<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 P9 V/ t/ O7 i, L! y7 P2 y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 w6 ^9 E( z1 e5 z3 s) f<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ I0 M5 ?6 v/ O. L2 W+ o! X<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! H# Z( Z9 H: D$ c6 r) X$ w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 @5 p- Q& i- A7 j  s( z$ I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' T5 Q3 Y& H' \/ D5 `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ t+ t! L, M+ V1 U9 N5 O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ ^/ C! i1 i3 [/ k. f3 L& t7 ^: n% I<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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$ k' [5 j4 x6 `5 Y! C 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 l, x; H" O# k<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" j9 H0 d2 c9 F# g<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>