【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
( H  w$ L; a3 _3 P0 V5 pThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& f" d& m, d) k/ T: ]2 g4 H  rI would probably know how you feel
8 V4 D; B+ O- s) N+ nLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! c- B. c: q" K# X7 O1 d( L0 @7 VBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# i7 p$ J$ A4 B4 vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 U5 m1 @4 R9 z& A# z. G; k8 K, p* TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' W! ]1 X. R" n7 T0 c( X; KCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
# S, h6 {; ]7 y, X1 q; XWhy is it so difficult to express?
* ^" j0 H! y6 P- H+ Q$ ~! d3 ]I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# Y8 R9 Y  O  e9 `I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ M8 d6 |: N  A" j! X- A3 HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; {& u4 S- P0 nCan I entrust it to you?
4 D* D( E; y+ {, qEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
' w& l( R+ |+ F! ^Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
4 w3 u2 O- p0 p4 J/ h$ i<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( A7 T6 i9 L% p3 e: e/ {' g<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
' |4 k9 X4 {* ^* c<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; F1 q! [) P5 w4 c6 V# x; n( R- N<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
' }& W$ g( Q% \% b, U( t<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 o5 L: ]: e( m) C% [# |<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- ?% `$ e. C+ u; H9 f" W<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 [( J/ ?) R2 j# Q5 ?1 Y! J5 Q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 [$ t# ]: |* L; C( _; Y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# R, G% L" @/ m% M1 q* n<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* I, h' l$ D3 `* r5 ?. x5 P" ]: C<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
, \4 M( w8 K' v% j# C1 f: V, h9 |<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
* l# O5 R; |5 ]: _; G" R<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) C/ c( B* l* V1 {0 @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 }2 u, y! x  j# J1 b! d<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ C1 V- A: J! {( }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 C9 c4 Q; ~6 M  F1 |3 H# E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 _* I& ?2 v$ Y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ p+ a+ u, Z/ @/ B8 j$ F# O<P>Love… just the word love </P>
' I1 G( E- Y8 t) \( P: U! B<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 Q, Z" M: G7 F, q' }- Q<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 F9 u3 f% w" m4 H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* d7 q/ c' d) A7 s<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' F* x+ }1 v' m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 o+ D+ F: l6 {! G/ G$ V( n5 B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; \5 s' L1 b6 U# W( n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' s* Q- v1 y+ u7 M2 p2 c# r% r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 s' V2 R1 [: I% R% H( O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) O9 D2 s1 Y  K. o7 N+ L<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 Y* c* W/ f: {<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 }& [0 v$ z2 N9 j; N7 d$ D4 n<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>