【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 N; e9 `$ M5 l! }  H0 ]From the first moment we met,
9 n9 H) m/ w+ Y: y) |, [/ SI already loved you with all my heart
6 p. d9 L+ D& d2 }6 D+ bWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" S- R( k% @* t' Z2 K, KIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
' N3 a2 z  N5 b( d! SLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 u' |' u5 s5 A. B  [I want to confess that I love you,
' J  V; @3 k, \; |) L( K" GBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 o/ ^+ _9 n7 b1 A* z- DIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( U+ J* ~! ?; x2 b/ }* PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- V; c" F1 p0 E8 GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 V' m7 Y9 W1 X; D- Q8 s1 \1 L& {8 _Love… just the word love
0 T& B: n% W( G) V) f, ^, G: wWhy is it so difficult to express?
, o# S/ ]6 H' G0 q5 wI want to confess that I love you,
+ T; H$ [& m/ `) X3 EBut I never did
8 ^0 A) F: ]$ {/ u% QOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: D" {/ b% e7 j. Y( w$ t& e$ Q% z) }I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; O- X# g% u& b9 ?; e& ECan I entrust it to you?
  l9 t* W; z) PEntrust my love within your heart
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7 u; }6 M% v* q, w[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; }: B" F4 k2 Y* p1 C<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ k! s( D, j: j! h% g<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
; I: x/ u5 R8 l7 q7 r<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, }! W& X) e1 u1 l; L<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- o" {9 f0 q) K4 Y+ ~0 i3 w. c<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 o. H+ a/ J. ]<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 z+ `' k: I% F6 U' X/ f<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, ]3 i! w2 [2 p! J/ S<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 K% l# {: S* A4 o# ?<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
. w' c2 [  r9 U! r<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& F) L) ~3 `! o3 U7 [6 \<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ N4 c4 G- ]7 |- B6 b' E5 l<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" {$ w2 D( R( e8 b0 V& P<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" y/ d: y5 r. C$ i9 \2 k<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! p! q) K( r% Y- Q( z# B, a4 T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, `3 }% ?, k9 A+ D% Q+ P, H<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
8 e9 z- n8 I6 }* g4 l' N" S3 [% s<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ G" J. ?; {3 e+ ]  v4 {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 {5 ]  l: h- ?. a' D5 G; j: q! J<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 k# }0 L9 D* G; F2 Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  S+ r5 k% z' P3 n) Q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 T2 Z. e! x6 A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 G1 E: a; ^2 n3 P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' q1 l( V# u( w+ F( w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ j+ g/ m9 W/ L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( c  H- ~: Q- o2 K0 U! A- A8 J<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
% ^& K6 c# G. z<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 R, G* Q( }% E4 R) ~ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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* ^" S& `! V% [0 E# S这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>