【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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3 P: z  d! C# i# |我另将歌词附在此。
; z4 `6 G, |$ O' |  w9 }- e: WThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' x  p5 }/ i1 H7 I, @That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 s3 D2 A2 w% h( `' n( f& oI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% N; t6 f3 q" TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 a; M0 e6 ~! ^% X$ D3 jIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 z$ T( [& h/ [5 }2 NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 u2 k* R$ l/ U7 h0 x4 ?3 w0 iEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* U$ x3 d5 ]  F8 Z6 |4 kBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
' U9 c  C6 y0 a! ^0 ZEntrust my love within your heart
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- ?# ~6 c$ C# M/ }( H( h- V[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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9 |/ \; c; b/ n' S<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
+ y1 l8 Y! c3 X4 S<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  l) S( _' i) {1 A# Y! O<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 \! i* |+ P' f5 B3 z8 T! O. Z# p<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ j. f) \0 m$ v<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% c( _. a. v1 n5 Y8 Q<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! c! N7 _" _$ @) E7 U<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: M0 C- D/ k8 g/ i7 o<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# r2 H, f2 m3 d+ l' Z: c% [: h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- x2 n  m* M, h# u9 d6 V<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 J$ S: m( v7 l0 p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 F9 u  J6 }: I) h% H$ d  B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) ^3 G. `0 ^/ v" T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# ]; G& H4 C0 w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 j+ I6 i' C; \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 F1 b6 p! {! [; k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 l( ~& E' N( ]% ^! s4 \<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% M, M" @+ l' Q0 `; Q6 N2 {<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& W$ G" W: b/ c<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 k% s' }4 n5 u9 D) Q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# @7 j* p% o; Y; J<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
- w7 @! `+ H' p* J4 G- S# O+ g<P>但我不会 </P>
  F# K" B4 Y5 }7 ~2 ?2 c3 y' D<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' B/ H4 ?! j, @# H8 a* p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: B# [# t6 q# m2 q) [$ e8 t<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 r, V  x% ^* C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ u+ U  i) T+ |: c- X( @/ r& G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) w5 q& C# _0 F* t<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) }+ D5 e& c, M# V4 y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; `4 d4 O8 R. ~% O8 k5 x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' M& j0 r& q' t9 d8 ~" A9 I<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

5 V, B  _, k: E0 t3 {, U  S/ E 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

/ d: n) d5 K4 M* P. A$ o; X这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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; C8 w% ^# w7 z( g9 q  p( `这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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% V* d" O( k3 Q0 `<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>