【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ w8 k" m6 ?, i; BThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
7 `/ F) P4 U7 |1 ~' q3 xWe meet and talk everyday,
- f, u8 y0 }% |# o( ?2 h0 _But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
- }1 H  o$ F. YLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. f8 P  N! r8 {* |* yBut I never did
" Z+ D" u& C! v% oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 H) r! @+ }9 \( aIf today isn’t too late,
) k+ o: A% N; O! }0 M; o6 R$ wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 Z0 w5 T/ o5 j* F5 e# x+ O& }- VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  n: J7 P! r# }( d) p+ A  VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) v7 y$ j- ?' R, Y( `" i* sI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 t3 u! V: {* ~: k! jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  v, I) ]4 ?) e  FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& A" e. Q' O5 A" P7 iEntrust my love within your heart
" x+ w1 `8 R7 B0 p  xCan I entrust it to you?
5 S* d/ D6 N1 H/ C: JEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) }! V+ e, Z, Z<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" ?+ r/ x8 n! Z, _  F<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' C4 J& H9 M& C) L9 }<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; j; h  H& j0 [5 s4 d7 ?2 x" o) g<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' j: S$ n& s6 e; @$ \<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 J8 L1 _$ d1 V<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: S! {/ \% l) ?6 h7 P) v<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) t# Y1 v( E' `9 o/ }: H, l<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% r" E" w4 o4 W4 ~8 \! Q7 W. P0 v- j<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ G$ i: J, f( c- q5 }# D) o" b<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 o, {' V  |, X" l! g/ f1 K; L<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 C0 m" V, x. H1 @3 l  `<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' m& _9 G; s. ~5 {$ o<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
, p0 }4 d9 L! B<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ s5 S6 [8 K+ w<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ A" U5 {1 [' m$ z8 t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
8 K$ {7 E* h' Z; q4 `  ]2 Z7 K<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: v- [0 I5 F* P- u" ^. M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, @, {5 i6 s" V- ?! `2 k9 V% t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, H# A3 P/ T# W4 q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" n7 H0 ?$ e8 m0 z0 [" B<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 n! @# t. x7 U' X* z3 I+ w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) Q! u0 k/ `; L& J0 Q<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& s: k. x! L+ Z1 V+ k<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; G2 M* f' q6 z& H! T<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! L" u5 e# A0 S$ [9 o# w; T<P>But I never did </P>
6 x: [' E2 c9 w& h<P>但我不会 </P>
6 l, S' y: q' q+ p: z! |<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! n5 V4 l& |: c, O6 W8 Z# b: \<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ s! ?/ W, B$ c4 n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 e! V  L9 t' x2 z+ U! }, C<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! H, c0 s7 {8 p5 }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ L5 \) D3 I3 e- R+ }. I9 {- j3 s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 A+ f3 G* l# U7 a7 g& d8 ^<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' l9 W4 A( Z- R  T2 M2 C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
0 W1 u" m; Y( ~% t/ S9 K0 a' }<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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8 B2 {  U( O( e# Z+ Y0 F这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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( ~) ~; u7 c- s7 S2 L<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>