【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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1 g  Y; G# o0 m- y* i' [我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
# P: D' q& _' d$ U  U' x5 M* QI already loved you with all my heart
& M- f+ l- u: \% C) V2 DWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 I: W. f8 O- L4 c: IIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
4 R! w1 R5 C! y; F; A. \  i! I/ p# J: kLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
  Y/ a% u: }0 m* cBut I never did
3 t( Y8 j3 v  b& VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 T7 R) S$ _8 |% `+ {0 w8 S- S/ l8 @" zIf today isn’t too late,
7 @' t3 T) l$ lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 F- N' f/ l: y( F! ]$ i8 k# ?% vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ D# B5 M) M, u# c4 eEntrust my love within your heart
. A- s" ?5 H) h8 bLove… just the word love
4 G2 L6 O! i1 uWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ D' x1 ?  ~; ?& K* }I want to confess that I love you,
0 l) N2 q! V. ~( iBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# B1 D6 W1 w* t; ]8 k1 bIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. [: ?/ N) B- |! b, {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* {3 U- Z5 D& i/ Z& |Can I entrust it to you?
) B( L  |$ {. H- }Entrust my love within your heart

* ~8 F4 L9 Q; d+ K/ W6 R[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
$ F! M: W  J( R: g; w- e5 d<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# t" l  m2 \9 C7 W0 G5 ^<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' Q- S" `, ~0 S9 I8 G/ O<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 e2 d6 q' R9 u: x/ ~5 _+ G<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 h" B+ @4 N4 j! \6 F! B$ R. ]<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 w  ?6 C8 q8 @! |) x+ _, g+ S# ~2 Z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 l2 q# a! n. o5 P. c  Y" L<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ C2 D) ?1 p! v2 q" ]<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( o# U3 `+ M& \2 Q2 E<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- E5 f- ^; Q: a) k8 h7 ]<P>我想说我爱你</P>
, n& n/ g* O- F, Z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; S2 Y$ x4 O2 ]' r5 N( P$ F<P>但我不会</P>
- }# v2 X9 Z: \$ M2 v<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 o3 \" Q2 G( `( s<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# s3 S# b' J. y% M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 n- v3 h6 ?. W/ ]<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; y! ]% {* c$ N8 ], [! n1 L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- V$ G( h5 j! X& @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) p7 Q; Q. w# [+ E) M# V' A* \: L<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. p5 J; @' X% k2 t; q5 K<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
- ~/ b/ @+ d- t1 Y<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 N- t# \# d5 z" d! f<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
; u. [- r& l2 W1 t" H2 `3 ^<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: M$ T$ _* E# t<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 t( \. C/ X4 O' P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) K  }% z: B. T$ U8 Z; B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) B0 S1 r, \: y9 c- p$ N<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( B# [' Z8 h$ K: G4 U& x+ H<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! |6 l0 _; b# S+ o5 N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
: {( n( [. s+ ?* k5 s5 J  _<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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, v6 G; [1 ?. v- F. M 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

* z) J$ E2 A0 a这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, _" F5 q' V& w1 i2 h<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ p. l2 h. }5 O3 s3 h7 R<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>