【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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0 e# T$ A7 U7 f我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 C# z# _$ ^% ~. Q& z9 IThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
, V4 B  K/ e0 j$ F5 f9 t0 [7 v) CI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
' Q7 u& S* k! `( v3 j  v! iBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
9 q8 C; n) s% @% ?% H1 `( d3 ]- H% b/ OLove… just the word love
6 `2 K0 @5 Y$ ]6 M( E+ P- bWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ z) U3 a6 ~4 C$ ZI want to confess that I love you,
2 |% b" y& e9 y" T5 `But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 T, d8 V* p' s. V  ?Entrust my love within your heart
* `6 O2 t; x4 U! HLove… just the word love
) Z( I' s, ?- q) i, v' k. LWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. ]; G5 U1 A6 j5 ~2 D5 h$ hOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 K. r, }" v. \6 h. ~, {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 i9 C* k5 U- {6 cCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

, I3 Z4 ]# I! e/ A: o[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

0 G" l6 l  R. k3 ~7 j9 R<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 Y: p' Y+ j1 K/ a7 r<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
- _/ z# }* j9 b) r( b7 H<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- m5 i! |' J: N$ ~6 a) V8 U6 r$ i<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- z+ C# C7 N3 I! d6 r( }# F<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* x# y4 M* i9 D6 P; W4 g<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
. E6 u2 ^: N4 h" E" E* b' W( e<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
7 i& O9 Y; R( Q2 @<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& E$ ^/ `% f2 \% i<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. G9 B4 B+ `; G1 X<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& F* }1 E  j1 j2 n- Y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 K4 _9 t& h* n! W0 w' Q3 W<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
" n* z8 x; f1 j3 Z# g' U0 n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! a& F2 k. \$ Z" j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, f6 a1 [/ H* M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 p0 E. _$ X0 F! p7 Y$ W# p8 i<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- Y9 E  U" l' q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 q$ F% w( u8 b- O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, b( o6 S' O( o+ e9 i, N$ p<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
( X; [* R& e2 X<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
; J8 d: @3 b9 O, a% W<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 j, c) w4 ^! J( T* T<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 p! [1 h- e* g& Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) `% C0 t( r& @* y* |, A<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" y6 T& t7 @# B1 c3 J$ ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' ^% @/ f# ~5 G- P$ i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
/ {  W  H6 E. B8 p! ~/ r<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ }" q! u! O3 `; K1 e<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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+ w3 y  B1 k  X& a3 a 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

8 X5 w& x7 `9 J  h这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>