【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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! u0 K7 W+ t# L, PThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
( ~+ e4 A7 O6 b: a: SIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. h, `0 O) r" y  G$ g" `: T6 uI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
, Z- o2 Q' S+ `$ E- k1 ~2 T2 eWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ a" d4 p. T- g9 S6 b# _* \! oBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# M1 _9 D( o, ?- p- EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 `# f2 P$ Q7 |- u4 REntrust my love within your heart
9 l! _. I( `# a8 O1 ^Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ V  X6 W/ ?. S. sI want to confess that I love you,
; i* G0 d( {. ]2 q5 iBut I never did
0 m+ p& p0 p/ T2 N2 S0 ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ M9 t7 V. Z# W2 i# T6 n! y4 P" `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* L7 M- K# v! }' TEntrust my love within your heart
, A. k; ]& Y7 |4 z2 S& ~! TCan I entrust it to you?
! o1 S4 |$ {+ _1 }2 S) J- f9 fEntrust my love within your heart
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% K  F1 A7 y# U7 Z& |[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

- Q% r  v$ S' L' S# H1 I* Q% T<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 A. g' X; w6 j<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# b+ u% V- A) Y- |  K$ r2 G6 A<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 P) O  V; i4 \; w' p<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# J6 c5 M0 j  a# P<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 o) e7 ]8 ]/ I<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ a$ o! E8 b3 m6 U<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 ?4 A' ]* o- a7 h5 p/ ?. \9 o<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' g* z& E* o$ W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 I9 v2 }, b7 B% X* X- ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' t* Z+ P$ q- V) k9 u; V9 E/ ]<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! E7 S* r# u  r<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 G# S+ [1 u8 k. V% L<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ v% n, ~$ D3 ~& e* p<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
# S- R3 C& O3 n$ f$ ?5 u<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
# h" l" ~* G7 u/ G9 K' ?# B6 H; ^<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' D) q" E  y  m% o; S* t& t<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
; s. Y- k, L. {  @+ F$ B<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" G  n4 k- p0 g' z2 l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) e8 t. A5 x- `9 I- a. b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' j/ V9 F; _& n2 A/ @6 h, |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 Q6 _. q; L0 F' y. ]8 V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 Z# b! X/ {. L/ X0 s, Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 ]8 K9 s! ^6 [5 D3 ^<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( k1 H4 R8 W- j9 a9 f# }; c 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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# E" \8 w( x5 X/ e5 r3 |7 m<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>