【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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0 c9 j/ ]& _/ _% h我另将歌词附在此。
! T1 {6 F0 @& ]/ ], a. q3 W* r9 c0 \The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" s+ L. P! E' NThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) d- ?) s3 j  q, y) uFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
, k% _: O, s4 S  L& E; |; qBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. X  u0 w% D- ~8 W7 |, f5 ]8 k7 II would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
8 Y, E) S0 q" R! S0 cWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. J' }  @* u7 V; |! v6 |' j( k- j/ ?One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# U4 K& C" ~# {* [6 EIf today isn’t too late,
& N; k5 v7 w8 O( P' BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ P; N' M0 D$ s5 e( I* _& w2 K, HEntrust my love within your heart
" {- y8 P$ U' L- j2 ZLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 O8 `9 n0 S1 E9 G) N7 T5 wI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
; c) E' }8 d" q  xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 h) O' N: o6 m) D* z& {$ zIf today isn’t too late,
# o: n' M: j! K1 A; i, Q. C2 f5 PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
5 M0 l. u$ a1 j/ X8 u- t. M) qEntrust my love within your heart
# h6 x  n+ E. B9 PCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
. J% q3 k7 ~  m0 ^* G$ t  N8 S: A<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
+ E$ n" ]% k+ S9 d7 f, k5 W' F<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% N. W9 w+ w7 O<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' Y  b) U6 w! p* ]( P  d<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
* @8 I. s6 g3 J( S; l<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
& p& L4 F4 i  \. P' F<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- v, b  h; d: D0 I. A* g& o6 ~4 O6 `" N<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
4 Y# \$ n( R8 O8 U<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
2 ~0 `3 b3 E: g+ j: c7 [<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. X" s2 T! p: `8 f<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& G4 N+ P0 I, I- }# }# P* S<P>但我不会</P>
+ a0 B9 L( ~8 j) u; d" \; s" F+ T<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 b( s2 _6 o, W2 m7 I3 M+ k  o<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 a7 k8 Y2 |+ E' z; _<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. T6 k) Z! A: c& c$ b<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' o! _; A& P- K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; S1 {6 a/ b* S/ b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 w) I/ k0 s+ i- R+ ?0 `4 l* `( F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ F6 O: |) ~& k; @$ F1 R1 {: Y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( I7 s4 d# @. @1 h<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
2 \4 G# W$ l& U6 o9 }<P>但我不会 </P>
+ b2 k+ u3 y- V: X: Z" U4 ~" X) N<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 o& d& |) _' K5 [! D<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
+ V8 k  u4 d. v: x& \% @5 ?1 `4 y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 ]3 f% y1 T9 a" v! |! ]' M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 l* \2 K& n% i1 d* W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  |7 t% ?+ E" m: Q  I$ N' n" f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 z2 O+ G! u! I/ f7 a<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 N8 s$ X2 t% b1 `4 n2 ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ v0 g, e4 L4 |) h) Q5 b1 _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( M6 `# w* X2 y# G
我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
# z. g/ }* t2 U3 l8 L# K- ]
5 G& e! q+ X  g2 H这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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: I. y4 u. q# O8 {' O! Y5 ?/ j( N这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 L3 H3 U$ @5 L; {5 I1 w9 D( r<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>