【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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( n4 Q- b# |0 |8 K我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 h* x; |) |) W. X2 A7 {5 |1 jThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
# o! {$ O7 c/ ^6 W$ nI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
- v, t: `& v1 m5 Y0 w: g0 ]But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  k) H! u# E0 o  k5 dI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; l6 d/ S8 }6 n1 e4 i. hI want to confess that I love you,
  R$ R) [9 O2 U6 _# pBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" q0 @. p  t& ]# C2 eCan I entrust it to you?
7 [  ?. A* Q$ K" f! M3 {Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' f  c+ Y1 |; XI want to confess that I love you,
$ H$ O9 f+ a/ Q: `& FBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 |1 Z8 X5 x8 O& O  bIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) J# ?" k6 U$ }; w1 ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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$ x; i, P" d  z0 h[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

0 u7 H4 e# n: a3 A4 S$ W4 F<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 y& L7 T( j$ B  D<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& m$ L* ~8 g* G$ ]9 n<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ G  e/ P0 l3 U( n5 y7 m  ~<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
4 O+ Y, ?- m# p0 d+ A<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
% n3 P! @6 B& g! Z  x! j  ]<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 {# _) P7 P" V1 g<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, C  E2 x" _; s! E<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 f% k: x' p9 e4 Q6 x; ~<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: F+ s, ?4 y+ x/ p  j0 v<P>但我不会</P>
: z4 a& q0 h- d<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' l* N' b7 j+ G: U# [3 C<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ z" i5 i& r' V2 [<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" |/ w" N+ r+ T( J; q# k2 Q; s8 E& r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# g/ j' |% o6 F$ N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 V$ I9 q/ y# X4 b7 U! g/ r<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
) g6 a+ V- Q3 X! G<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 T: \4 B  U6 [0 k<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' A# j  k" \0 p3 j) Z, ~<P>But I never did </P>
0 i: E+ T8 d" s/ J* U) y, K5 |% y$ g% A<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 ~/ ~# ?. p- b5 i6 `/ g0 F1 D, m<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* |. u" L) c* k# U. Y8 B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" |" E' h2 ~& o( f0 i6 b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) @8 Q6 U7 D  f<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- C5 |+ w6 k+ ^! v+ E7 |6 B  h6 z6 Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 O2 D/ P' L7 \0 v$ s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 Z% C- Q1 X2 ^7 x, U% u4 I; M6 ]<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
9 o( w( g$ q" Y6 J! U& f- E2 _<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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/ v' w& X) N2 P" I5 G7 V) @这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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  f9 \' V1 X9 e# Y<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>