【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
- X: L) q7 \' F) C) g/ t; p- WThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
+ a6 Z9 z; ~. |/ v3 RI already loved you with all my heart
: m5 d" ]" L# V/ H$ FWe meet and talk everyday,
9 v2 y' g; P% K# oBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% N: F8 K. O# ^/ ?' Q5 HI would probably know how you feel
, c6 d% z( P1 l6 E* k7 N: r  ^! V7 qLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 s/ {+ R5 K' XI want to confess that I love you,
: }% b- `  M6 V* e% D1 w6 DBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 @8 J( d# z  E5 nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 U) N- l, Q, U) ?8 JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
. u! `/ Z& G2 N& jEntrust my love within your heart
7 Y6 a  o; N  R" }1 n  TLove… just the word love
- x8 B+ F1 T$ G& `" s- U( Z; T, ^/ v: RWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ _& Z) J% U0 Z4 X  w( l- E" MI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 @1 ~- \# L0 h1 I- |8 [% YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# d5 ~) r6 d% X' D0 p: Z& YIf today isn’t too late,
, @4 R% j, P( bI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 t& ?/ A; G9 G1 ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( s) m; a8 @/ X* d- c0 n- e4 GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" F# b% \7 ?- o8 iCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

. u0 t' K3 q. Q, K<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 e' n/ h8 j' \6 k<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
1 c5 I6 x' D" W2 v" C5 c9 U<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 ^5 K1 A% c: B7 S- X3 y9 N<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* [; k' V# G. W( }7 I" d0 m<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* y/ c4 h+ J( v1 u" `/ R/ I- [$ K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% _- B2 v- E( x" y% j<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: T7 h. P% ~( T8 W' ?<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
. K+ i) ^3 L: Z4 M$ f/ y<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- I# G3 _6 b7 C+ Y- Y0 y: r<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" T2 L, z5 e% }2 X<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. h" @- H- O: Y, Y4 E5 T" S: H<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
! t4 V: k% p' Y) o0 @# M9 W( T<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
3 K& r+ l9 ~9 O+ F' I<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 V" k& Q% B9 l. A" D# W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# s0 O, o! ?: ]  o' T2 N<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 i6 B, Z, r9 p0 W<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) O2 q  G9 c. B# c% I<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( \7 h6 ]1 {, N9 Y. }<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
$ y8 z. Y1 M1 H* g. Q" x" S, X  y<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 b! _$ |; v. k/ H* a<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
; G- s$ Z  J/ y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ O! p6 n. k" y+ u: [9 A; Q; z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 K! b* ]" u+ U- {' D4 y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& r* [& m5 `9 j2 K* G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 l# ]+ J: ]; F1 W9 Z0 ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

  {1 D0 E1 @5 ?) [9 z这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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. l- W, _) n1 K/ G' e) l" X这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# Z" K1 ~3 F" `9 z. s& m<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>