【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
. J' D' _; y. d  c/ U/ r3 BI already loved you with all my heart
7 A3 y$ T5 ~0 Z, ~, V% YWe meet and talk everyday,
6 c0 ]4 D. ]' EBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 ]( ~& V6 I8 H' ?7 t- l' rI would probably know how you feel
2 E" m0 d4 T; Y) K* \* sLove… just the word love
* g1 U7 Y6 {  `2 @2 lWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ L# v. x. y; Q9 Z% l) c, j7 Q1 k1 m9 GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 W& ^& f0 F( C2 w* B/ z* l; z4 f8 T* L* uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: u1 d! M$ x) hCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  z' |# r4 V8 @; sLove… just the word love
( E6 y+ V( U  k9 O; R* [Why is it so difficult to express?
3 I7 A( n/ R) {' Y' q  G1 jI want to confess that I love you,
" y8 z; l" x9 S4 w+ Y) MBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 E0 P& O! e: ~7 L1 t/ Q! CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 V) p1 q0 Z) B  KCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
! O1 p* {" m7 o) ^1 |& YEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. _# ~+ y2 [, A<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. p$ h. M) X& j, C: N0 K<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% n0 {2 k' m& Q+ |* M* H<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# F+ x5 {+ K( f" U, z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# k$ R3 H8 I0 \  H, f<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
! }6 U& o1 }. O- [1 N) N<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# t# b6 m! u( X9 e<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 b+ Q* i, c8 r3 R3 X% [<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, A; `9 G4 R9 n! S3 T<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. I# E+ a5 T' q7 c! x1 V<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
3 A0 G' N$ H/ O0 n; Q1 x6 k8 t+ G<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* g0 m& O% L; j2 G<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ p& q0 o/ k0 C' A# i/ S: P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) `0 ]- n. G) C% A<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 O6 u, n# K, E$ i0 ]! W9 N) ^<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
$ d  H* h$ _4 v5 d<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 i$ Q2 {8 n! K! o, Q( k: R- j6 K<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
( Y$ I9 t4 j* I  _* u/ W2 Y<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- f; v/ f* C7 |$ V9 E+ B4 H& b<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 q$ b* S5 j. c0 ?<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ H" i0 K  Q) Y  W$ _/ G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- |* ^- j# |3 |5 n% S* n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ f, l1 I! `' \; R& L<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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: j) P2 P( t! V% [; B9 u这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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4 @5 D3 @8 T8 U- Q<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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) Q2 X$ A# T2 H; k5 V% D" m<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>