【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
# H! y5 }% y: ?' J0 ~- |3 u/ i# UThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 C; f$ ~  _" u9 X& w$ y; WFrom the first moment we met,
, t! z/ R2 P5 _6 G+ c6 I6 @! QI already loved you with all my heart
; z0 b7 d! g: p9 w$ Q. ]9 Q$ {We meet and talk everyday,
/ ~2 t8 A) [* N2 w  y* z' aBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
( b1 {; k! v- b, pLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& @; f) v. n4 v: I3 `' x; DI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 y* |; j. O3 \9 KIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 }' c/ ~  b" ?" e0 O0 ^Entrust my love within your heart
8 R- ~9 C# p3 ~Love… just the word love
! ?* u1 x! [3 t! b4 |3 E  P- UWhy is it so difficult to express?
8 K" q' h% W5 `0 z' p+ \) l8 DI want to confess that I love you,
& [. D, h% y9 FBut I never did
2 u; [# f/ Y5 b7 b6 XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 b: R2 J9 n" P# D% Q; WIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% S3 ], |0 S2 ^Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
9 ^2 u2 u' k  B; V6 n* R: B# O- M, ~Entrust my love within your heart
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( P- N0 I. h6 g$ G# l2 V+ S6 ^$ e; H[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

! j; k7 X0 X; k+ D) t& T* U: H<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 k: D* c0 T: C! u; K<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 e8 x- c. m5 v7 r- \9 d<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( T) N, e& g* S: h<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% A. o+ t4 Z# z, C+ {. Q" x9 L<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; d  U; W; L+ G& N/ }<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 X2 y7 U5 n; k7 b<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 e7 t% l% u0 F& Z/ u<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 D2 v# h9 O8 O% Q) `. t, S) Q, p# ^<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% k# H# n" u9 N8 ]0 Z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# h8 w1 k5 _) r0 n<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* k$ n, }2 o$ y  X- Z3 h<P>我想说我爱你</P>
% I) D4 _& B0 L. q<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 |) e7 b% M% G, T2 r<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 _! C5 u7 P" c$ @& g( k<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 [# y; P0 N/ I' k0 R7 p% m& P  e9 p<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. k5 g- E1 `, v' k7 O* n$ t<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& J& l& a1 U1 w( G. B4 V7 C- j9 M<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
' N  D2 u- C2 s, S7 ~/ M9 l! t9 \# k<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" H0 x9 s4 N/ A1 _<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
7 i# C3 D. r0 x1 K- O/ y) E2 _<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# ~! R( c/ g4 V, B7 b5 A<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# W( }( e, l8 ]; u$ @3 u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 \2 U  P- U. m* [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" b1 e* C2 b1 ?, F  m: t' M5 C" ]: Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  g2 @2 Q5 U! k9 g9 f<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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' Z: i  _# O3 B 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

, _/ e% b+ s! y/ C4 u这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>