【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
$ Z# N: J" g, M) D! ZThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
! o1 z! Z1 [, h" f& Q9 FBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) N4 c8 ~% }- }4 W& gI would probably know how you feel
9 g* U5 q" W0 WLove… just the word love
6 J* Y2 Q0 d, Y& z; IWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ k. {$ a7 a4 LBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ F/ h* P2 @- TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" `8 `& X' T  |; l# J1 T% x+ U* D1 |/ kLove… just the word love
/ j8 B* H* J, \1 k: TWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ Q1 C* ?) d2 ]1 T/ g8 J: II want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ U  C4 @& T2 \5 Y% \+ K: uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ O+ Y! Y7 J* C$ I& TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ h) _5 u3 B, E2 I5 _! uEntrust my love within your heart
6 Q, x$ b. z' n& }6 S' OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) f. d- r1 |" x$ [4 P2 J/ ?8 {<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 F% H. }9 _" y) R; z% W# F, T- w. s" g<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ q  A* V" _! z& F0 N: R+ x<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 o3 \$ z, Z+ e* |( @, E$ b<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
$ U* v4 |" c  d( x; w' N: M<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! R2 w. M# p6 A+ P- H  A<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' f% r: F/ X: T. r1 A<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
) @" }8 `' t$ v0 F8 K<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* w2 A: u- M# r5 U<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 Z6 z8 }' Y2 _! H4 X! g<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! }- a9 H' @" r+ x5 }6 K<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ v) K+ r: F- t' N7 |" Y<P>但我不会</P>
7 D, l" m0 c1 ?- T: P6 M$ j' {<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
. Q. K+ X) E1 E, v. j- }<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 c2 s) k6 m3 h2 ?. q. P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& O- v- l7 O5 ~7 O  |4 \5 F- E. N<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 N, Y8 ~) v( m<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ h2 c$ T' ?* c8 h; o2 w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* \2 I# }# P3 M) ?0 ]5 z, ?8 k! Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ n( v8 Y% X4 u3 X/ s: P<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 G: d  ^, t# L0 T<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' ?9 t' c3 j% z! t$ B7 U" u<P>But I never did </P>
$ Z' _2 o' S: R6 w<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
" E+ i5 |4 |8 G# \$ `<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 |3 F' l1 X3 A& O+ a7 ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 \9 U8 d- n! T4 t, W  D% Z& {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 v, A! j4 M- l) {9 \<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! b0 r4 _4 C8 a9 K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 D: I( O7 U6 A4 t5 d) t! a这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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( M: f* i! L6 s! E<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>