【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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" k7 A$ O. N- u" [: r6 o8 J" L我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
6 @4 [/ C' Q9 E% ]8 sBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# w" [, {+ I! w- UIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( U, `5 w+ \. i0 x# v1 d2 f/ l8 O" RI would probably know how you feel
3 ]# f1 \) C! ]1 O4 oLove… just the word love
: [2 h+ O4 O4 y; ?8 oWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 [3 y- N+ _  G3 ?. AOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ q* S( S2 y; B" [& ~Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( e" W% a0 \$ q! d( W. yLove… just the word love
4 R( d8 v- ]9 |8 r  M$ d1 G6 H" EWhy is it so difficult to express?
- i" r/ k5 |6 ?; zI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) |9 q% J  X) F/ q9 o6 Z6 I; UI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ g/ _0 f9 S! C3 O2 ~. f5 T7 XCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
1 ^9 u; J( s* B0 d3 n" FEntrust my love within your heart

$ K4 V6 J4 ]& H  S9 s) ^, k[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( ]. d3 |+ s& l3 H$ B9 k
<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ O+ t# I2 t' _! z( y; ~( ]<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 r1 N7 _; ]9 H<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; x# f' x! }( F/ _* a1 X<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
4 ?, I% V3 X7 B6 J7 i3 Z4 U! _<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ Q/ H) r0 k* ]4 v7 i7 Q% e<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! j4 c* j( I# R9 d" C$ }5 E<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 V0 d& I" `3 G( N: R3 ^# I<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
* s, v0 F, Q! d+ {, p. ?1 I<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
1 z. y, p5 S7 R8 {; b9 V<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 ~0 q& W; r4 D<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( u7 S* j$ `/ Z<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 x, [; g) o1 }. d9 L8 |/ B<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ U0 `# R* y2 \! D4 j<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 X, F7 I8 K! F& `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) L& v4 h' d8 f. H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 i3 t) R6 Q6 a) H0 M# t) m/ y8 w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
' F( T6 A' X4 V7 a1 G5 a5 [  k4 X% _8 ]<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 L/ i  @  S3 W' `<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
3 {$ h  V* s1 t<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 `/ }5 |! G* e  Z4 i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) K& @* h& T5 p! X! d, R<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ E! w, M) {9 ?) K9 n$ W% p% s! U<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# c5 ^  j2 ]3 V' ]4 L7 h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ J3 D# S( @( v2 n$ G- Z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# W- e) {/ a0 L# _: O- }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ d; w% l/ W( M! S0 `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 F" v2 u% V& g7 e<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
; R2 M7 D9 ?3 B: y, S<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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0 l' b  c: p+ n! `$ h- t; O  ] 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. Q: K! C% `1 I6 W9 {( u<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>