【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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8 D, O: K" M& K: T' Z我另将歌词附在此。
" @8 f4 ~0 b  p" T3 G3 m8 DThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
- ~0 s/ G& f8 \4 pI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, N$ x$ a0 s5 t* i7 lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  I, F6 x8 q9 G3 ^* aIf today isn’t too late,
7 M4 M& |: |9 x. ^3 Z; u. _$ LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 R9 q9 E; K/ n; J' [- nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) L+ }4 p# V( ~1 NCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' H' Z, M# y4 ~& w  QBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: `& K# j  D. L1 A, m- x! JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. F' n0 ]' x( m. ^* ^5 JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& G9 t1 l: N5 O% F3 p7 m& x) N8 VCan I entrust it to you?
' Q# ^) z! M+ N( y& n' B5 r3 J2 G+ |Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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7 s2 d+ G% I5 N1 h% f: C" Z[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

8 i2 w7 r! @5 I( \: J+ ?9 N<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 k- C( w; p5 P+ @) N<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
5 n) |, D+ t% ~# |. g: G$ J& J<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 m' n" q5 ]( p2 t<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 `8 \8 p0 Q- Y! E* m* W# k<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ R2 q/ T( L1 b6 G/ @<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
8 f8 c: ]# M* u% L4 H. G<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# U6 s7 Q% C: t5 ]9 `8 W<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' {" {4 n; K! q5 w0 q9 K" a4 c<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% e4 ^+ a% F$ q0 d7 D<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 a5 q1 P! e" h. \8 ^1 E$ P<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) i/ V& ~+ \! `# a: [<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 ]& {* }+ Q" T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. e8 Q$ R  {" L! p* Q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& ]2 S) W2 O. p" M+ E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 N5 d5 t+ F  M  E7 r3 C3 t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' D6 ^: T  S' t5 t<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; j( v& j7 ^9 `<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  e% L8 t% a2 F( K<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 f0 H; `# |. M: ]<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* N! y% h9 Q+ ~<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 A% i- l. G: @# m7 q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% Q9 T7 |  |* P; ^$ g<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 q: u! |% n# I& |; M# u<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! d, `! u) r! K# {8 }, A* q+ D' A+ c<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 d: c4 c. h7 q" _/ g' L1 M' O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% j) T' I4 J+ ~1 j/ j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ f2 p# g+ p, w+ s+ G) G% ?! R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
: y4 B5 a- C$ y2 D, ?<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

; R, L) o- @  c' K- i, X这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  h2 ^5 D2 f5 i. J; ], ~" U4 R<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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. O  ^# e  X- q( h2 e<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>