【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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6 F7 A# `. u* p& a5 r; Q我另将歌词附在此。
/ X3 J- V/ k! g: BThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 v8 x5 {( c! J" w; _From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
% N6 J  S- ]& ]- e: rWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( ?. s8 J. _! Y7 f: V& gI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
* l/ h* s. b( g9 x* Y  b3 _Why is it so difficult to express?
) u1 _/ i; g0 V# ~I want to confess that I love you,
# [: `5 L( ^& d+ ]0 t' e3 Z# ]But I never did
. F7 M# j8 Q9 x- k- J: WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) R5 J6 _$ q% {$ E0 ~I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( Z3 R. q7 J$ T% d" ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% n$ [) Y3 z% s- mIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 @5 M3 y4 k2 X% G7 i! {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 }2 n! i. N7 D( lCan I entrust it to you?
" L( Q, A8 A5 q) ?+ w  K" nEntrust my love within your heart
! f, D7 h9 {" o$ M$ y8 N) e' rCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
- f% E5 ~4 r# i3 w<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ i6 n1 F1 j! I3 E6 ]. S  R: K9 E<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 c; u% e/ b* _3 `7 i) A<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  D+ d3 a% U, u0 e2 z" s. \% Z: ]" V<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 o  X7 l7 b3 z) B) c<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ `9 p+ j4 k+ c<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. D4 E) K& \3 ~6 o0 W+ V2 T<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ a2 E( W& q* s" y9 S<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 m  n, i+ X4 ^2 m<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
! g9 G* X* Y0 M" J& Q<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 a6 \5 r3 {2 c( b! `9 ]/ I<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 @' T3 \6 J9 G1 P<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) E* K$ v0 l. o. |$ e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- r- q* V5 j+ l; D<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ t5 [- B3 l  p9 O<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ U, w  ~: E, J6 K  j<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 x' n0 D) z& F. v  m4 F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 K5 _5 P4 h& F0 N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* a2 i/ o2 b7 t% z<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 L$ G' Z( O2 }<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, z/ U' q5 L) a0 S7 P8 O' ]<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
' Z: {" f6 e* }9 e4 }; h<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
) ~8 P, s! O; h' K- l; |<P>But I never did </P>
& r: h. b8 s$ g) b. ?<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
0 l7 ^$ N1 H7 m; h9 W<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# `& o% v, n0 j" f' u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 g8 p6 @1 h7 u" V<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: {6 a6 u$ C# M, o% T$ q  T<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 ~0 k; l7 ?+ ]9 @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  `' Z/ P1 q9 Q# M, I  n1 ?% N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  Q& @3 S+ ]7 v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  H, x, p* B+ x<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 n: L/ ?2 H' n7 |+ O, x' u 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: B) J0 ~9 g1 a1 R<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>