【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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) s- C  s2 X  B/ |我另将歌词附在此。
2 `4 i' a; C, z* d4 ?0 @7 \The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; G+ |: k  M( C- o( m6 Z# gThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# o2 d/ I9 a7 b! A2 U6 N! M+ FFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
7 ~7 d( E* ^4 qBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& B' V* r, K. j+ g% ZI would probably know how you feel
) D" c4 r; A  V( G" @6 v; ?; J& }% SLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
8 m+ Z6 v' {) Y: i# \% [But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  G' G; o' C5 G/ }If today isn’t too late,
8 E9 m2 F7 z) D& M8 RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' e# b( ~" h) i& K6 m: f: II don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! c$ n- p# A7 Z3 d: i( [& ACan I entrust it to you?
- R! M  t! x- h) k% B0 yEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ s7 i: E# c' [" _3 Z7 S2 k* wI want to confess that I love you,
. P8 J# T3 y3 RBut I never did
+ q! s( X" l# E: \: A" D' bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" ]/ f7 o5 J' }+ ]" HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 D$ \+ p' M; J# ^Entrust my love within your heart
3 t; I, F+ j" _. _' pCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

0 ?' ^( E" M% V; \[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% \2 ^5 q  ?3 w6 R" @4 f: w<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% L' E" S; I3 X<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, c7 Z) v$ A3 ?! I! M0 e<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ j# Z. N2 l1 @8 k% A<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, M2 v! [  k) J/ k0 y' n<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% A4 B9 R+ Q8 g, n- ~<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' \& o/ `% H7 d% S+ p<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% y! X% h4 ^% W<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 L' G2 K6 N) J9 Y( v; ?* ]<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 F5 T; }4 p& \' q# s<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
) ]9 r3 \7 F5 f$ j, d<P>但我不会</P>
6 Z" Y9 ~+ u8 t<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" Z/ j' p+ T! o6 y' X0 t7 ?& [<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* H1 q) K9 @6 }: K<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# Y! _" H% S4 Q) B" l8 A' S5 Q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 W, M2 e' H9 O1 ]; B<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% \3 W- A$ }6 x7 G! {' n8 I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' e/ j  Y  p* m5 ?( ^<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 Q% F( s4 U7 R( l<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ g$ N% o- a. r9 U' _1 S<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
2 i- ?$ `$ S9 n' K! x$ v4 }<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ s' g# J9 j- c" n<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
. u8 a: e% l# Q! T% o<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 A" Q1 o8 ], e8 ?' m8 n: [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# {- t! g# }8 I* N: X<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: s& r& V5 T' D9 N  O9 H$ Y; Q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, d) {# w# Z, A! j8 i5 z2 Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- |+ \: Q. s' y+ {% p6 U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 Y- M8 B  j  y( J) i, M9 T3 j3 o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

: a( v  f' o3 \8 E这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* S1 h+ @( }! p- ?' w! ]5 H<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>