【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
# Z& I: \( R2 X; x! {! iThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
  i* U* \' ]  c. \! ^' M, sThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 \) l" m& G! N0 SFrom the first moment we met,
3 T& V5 o2 i5 x4 ?I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
9 n' L. P0 g3 g# i  p. T' MBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 Y8 n0 L5 Z4 [( eIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
' g2 Z$ b+ X2 f( ^1 ~( OWhy is it so difficult to express?
% E  m" Z4 E* D3 MI want to confess that I love you,
) |9 {3 Q; A6 g4 _$ D, s* {But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- _+ T/ G( x, tIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. ~' a' `1 ?5 A8 qI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" l2 U7 k& e" U" w+ I, ?0 ICan I entrust it to you?
/ g5 b& Z) h6 ?. A( S3 M( gEntrust my love within your heart
) W7 Q* U, U$ G9 vLove… just the word love
2 J0 V- s; T! B# O% E  uWhy is it so difficult to express?
# g* M7 S1 ^" C7 o& f+ [( z: LI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" C2 Y3 N9 M, OEntrust my love within your heart
. I1 s7 w) P1 y& uCan I entrust it to you?
6 |9 k- @, X+ X: K3 s5 VEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# [5 g. ]# ~; J<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! {( E0 ^" d5 X+ Z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
% F. s+ e0 }# i<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
* A, S4 m  G& v<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* Q5 ^; H: e  Q! I3 V; X+ X0 ^4 [<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
! _* C) `4 X6 B+ g0 Y* [6 v<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, p5 B0 b( j: l. k. ?% W+ r) P$ y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
# j, w# `* X" B( Z: i<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# i, I0 }: s4 Z% ^+ S<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" O# W9 c+ @" B  v+ `<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 s$ ~# [4 U6 K  B' Y/ x0 R5 M<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: `7 W9 \' ]3 d<P>但我不会</P>
1 L( Q, i# J) ]; I3 f1 b# D  e<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) W/ {- B: o1 W; N$ M<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! C+ Q% y4 L  Q: Z3 q$ D) T% \<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- A- s# B$ s, q- E<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& T. T% b( N. K. S1 `0 u. w8 r7 S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! ?4 k: r% Q& i% ]4 Z" s& `5 f# x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( D* Z2 `3 e, v# v<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" \2 ~% T! g, o  d0 e: p/ y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) k! Z+ Q6 V* g, Z<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 h) ~2 D( \! R0 T/ S4 P<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 r4 a( j  K5 Y" g. O- k( z! ^<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: p1 _* n6 a' ?<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, ]8 s. W$ j# l, `0 L. K<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- t/ r- \6 O4 R  z+ @2 K% ^1 s( Y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 Q) _% q. x+ P<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; K3 c# e' z. v5 w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 V- i- r& `5 \/ Y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ Y+ O: I0 \& b4 }7 v2 B9 G. c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! t1 o, f. W2 i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 P  ?# y/ j: f6 o9 {6 h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 o2 A# D5 _  C6 K2 A7 @" i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ G2 g  {8 u* s; N# X+ R' {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) U; P1 {6 r" Y3 m$ b<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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, f& w* A0 |) ~5 J这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% Z4 S* B; {) C4 q3 F8 S) y3 ~<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 `* R5 i. F$ p" k. V- }9 c3 l6 e<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>