【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
2 h. B& H  t0 [5 `! Z* R# K3 |" FThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 s# I% \7 e6 f, m7 HThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ y3 ?, m! s- g) e1 d. u4 xFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
0 {/ c  D/ y! b* y. A5 _, hWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 [* `6 z- @0 \/ u2 [+ \7 nIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
5 X* t" j% R, zLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; z# G/ _' J5 x) a7 `* |7 AIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
4 B" n# j  Y* bEntrust my love within your heart
6 S: r7 b* T: j% oLove… just the word love
4 K4 i: E& b7 kWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ F% L' Q# B3 A( }% h+ a9 F7 II want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 s; b, J/ z# ?7 g: c& ]- [% PIf today isn’t too late,
! a* {0 R: D) Y' D( E8 EI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( ~  L% u' a4 f1 O5 YCan I entrust it to you?
8 @- H) a# A8 c7 z/ NEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 _- y) [2 ~  O& M, @<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 r. c% `; Z2 T/ ^<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ [$ z: i* @8 m  G# U5 V<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 w5 x. x: H$ Z<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
0 _+ y+ Q6 C) N9 C) O8 ]3 I; k<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 v* [# ?  N" J; c& q6 V<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
& j9 X# \+ y# d( X/ X<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, b4 y+ {% w  c<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  m2 l8 h7 l1 |4 I! U<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 ~% S- Q* f, X  H( X<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ l2 j- j% r& x4 ~& {<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ |2 c' }- D2 Z" V<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, O, k+ j$ R' @$ D<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ H; h' E! j! |$ v9 B<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% r9 C" @8 |6 G- K( y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! ^9 J+ c+ _. v$ j: d- U% S<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: ]% D2 C, }7 Z: W) j; s& m" e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 {" ]! w+ `$ J4 {  S<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ I; l! L. Z; E) i  @! b0 ~/ a3 N<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
5 ^- c9 J; S. I4 j. _# B2 m<P>但我不会 </P>
* D% G$ N4 M+ L1 `  l! c<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' q0 ?7 f: [; O8 W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; c% V" N/ ^( f  m. ?! T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; `' E3 C" M0 Q) l: e# {* x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 c0 M' Q: n, G0 S+ W. X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( l$ w. U, u# L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' j, v/ S0 n) u( b% w<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
- K- w7 e% }6 r8 L! K" A! M<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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0 [, j+ p" j" t/ [* ^. x+ L 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 F3 F" ?6 m4 Z. X<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ h) y, [, N. U5 r  Q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>