【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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: p/ f0 q3 W, i3 A我另将歌词附在此。
# h# ~. l' \& T0 H6 ?The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" z+ \" ~+ s+ w8 zThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 ^$ c" B* t" N6 Z1 W5 f, u% W( ~From the first moment we met,
0 J; Q1 J: b! j9 e) K+ B4 _I already loved you with all my heart
% x* U9 Y& V# q9 r% KWe meet and talk everyday,
& X/ Q3 I# u) o  E0 HBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
, d0 u5 H. }- X' j. \/ T8 X0 fI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% T$ A  I2 {6 R3 R3 @$ e- ?9 iIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( ]% N# _  L6 t* s$ [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 `4 y4 o! G  j* N' M5 f. K5 wCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
0 }$ K7 s: a4 L8 IWhy is it so difficult to express?
' m' f( W- H: P8 D/ s2 ^I want to confess that I love you,
4 T' @, W% P- GBut I never did
8 [1 r# ~2 o% V  r/ O: d0 A) b$ QOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
% j% {! o  k: d( ]+ wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 M+ C" s/ O3 }- h7 L" [% m0 rEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

6 q3 p/ @/ C% S- B. F/ `<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 M3 D  m" z& |* P7 s) F9 `<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" G) d* B+ p( j8 j0 ^<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: b4 G/ P: K% _1 q  {0 }. H<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: p8 H& ?8 ^# I! ?8 ~& S& `<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 H) @' z1 N! C; m4 i- a6 B( r<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( m; X  C. ]3 Q2 L2 [0 `3 Y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
1 z: \+ [3 M8 a+ Y<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
2 G! _' G4 c, G- Q' [+ C<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
' b: v" w, u5 v+ |<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; {9 v1 z% z, {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 K5 S) b2 A& O7 _- _- R<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, u  ]% z: Z& b) n<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& q' W: t8 l1 ~6 h! t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; X) l3 R3 Z* \; b$ `6 I1 v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, [  z  V9 t$ p9 I+ K& i- ~( V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* [! @9 j8 f* [) i<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: P# d$ X" B2 l% R1 _. d<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 d: Q4 U% c/ J9 {: ?8 U<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! L9 J! M' e, B" P0 j4 {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ R( u% p) N  g( P; ^<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- p% x; Y+ F7 ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 t! d. c( `! p$ I4 W0 a4 g- T: v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, @4 m4 W7 l5 @# @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! C: s3 u0 v3 x5 `8 @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( Z/ r9 f5 y3 _9 a, R0 ^2 Q# @<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

, r8 a* M! b* z3 l+ u这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 z0 L2 M2 c. m  S4 k' U<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>