【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 }, f0 e- K2 SI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
2 V5 K* y7 _8 q% a6 ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- Z% `" P0 d4 ~6 `! ]9 ?But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 e6 A9 b9 O+ D& j3 G5 hI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# S* ~) A. o& SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 _" ^* a- E' @/ V5 j' HCan I entrust it to you?
7 |; S/ x' N# i* w" MEntrust my love within your heart
1 S+ Q' Q# b1 g) _% ]Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 Y1 f/ H$ W9 _) I# ~1 r8 W! R* YI want to confess that I love you,
5 V9 R4 T9 p" L" n1 gBut I never did
9 _" C! v+ o* Q& ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' P) |- Y$ L4 L% r2 p7 v% }- Z) \& W$ dIf today isn’t too late,
: E5 X+ g* ?  T6 C- j0 LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( G) ^' s; n- o  o0 GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 g4 ~5 W) M7 h$ U6 Y0 nCan I entrust it to you?
  ]+ \- Z  j& h, r, f/ VEntrust my love within your heart
) O  n; O5 f/ Y. v" ICan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

! R4 n' ]  X2 M& X. n3 o[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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  l1 ?( [" d" I5 e% v<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 _- |/ ^" D5 {; g<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: ?5 P0 a5 {% R- N, b* N- _# ~9 f<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 T) d2 \( B$ C0 B8 O<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
% ~4 h' K* P0 _6 l* B<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
' v3 d+ ^# S1 X<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 e9 d% K* N5 b8 H$ Q- T4 u<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 G  }5 r% A$ W$ u0 T1 |<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! L+ {8 H# k0 w. F; e# V<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 c9 G5 G; A5 Y3 P) [7 B<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. m$ H; T8 n! G5 K2 w<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  V1 `6 {6 |9 k+ a5 ]<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
) ^8 c0 f* V" ]! N4 \! p& H<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# c5 b6 ~* j! E$ g5 n$ U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. D& \+ i& @1 S/ h' C6 l" y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- S; `- M- r# Q  w$ K, u& V- J* H' n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: }8 z. J  n4 p<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
1 K$ m9 G" K& u, F<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! |4 ~4 m5 K  q; Y8 M<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 e. ]5 a* U- A& l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- Z$ h  E; A5 u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 ~) O1 k& X7 D* U3 n) W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. M" A9 x2 \2 B. W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 M9 w) M) [* V$ J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 Y) S8 Q# V/ U3 l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 P6 v' ?+ ?- z! h1 Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( m6 ?' \8 k% J% i, [! j6 Z5 w<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
. n3 s0 _/ a$ M$ A<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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' d; s8 P# Y& K5 B/ O- f' v" k  s) ^这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>