【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
$ I3 `: S0 M. \% GThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
4 n  k2 w3 |9 Q, j* e  E8 A4 t$ @But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' j# B. c% v& i; T" h' O* vI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
0 r9 Q: J( q/ |+ TWhy is it so difficult to express?
- H: v! x+ l1 E0 w2 gI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 p; N5 z- Y  c- A* y8 kIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 i  E7 c( F8 B' X# K* A* NEntrust my love within your heart
4 M- O: e' N! s; ELove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
# L* u$ H: |/ y, YBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ N- s7 r: _9 e+ P8 I1 eIf today isn’t too late,
- N/ e5 Z! [: @I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; J2 s9 {  O: [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 c6 \: ~- {0 i" `( C# v3 k! S, YEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
+ V9 `* g( b' v3 I4 u+ gEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
4 w1 Q" m1 F' A  x<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' C% }! g9 G1 F! P1 b" V4 E, T<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 y1 P) f6 s: R+ K) R5 I  A<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
4 h- z0 ~$ k& a! k" N<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 u  D2 g' B+ e% w# d2 W% I7 D: s<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
' f7 S' b- ]: d<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( M/ Z% ?; l% _- K' w# F<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
  w2 \" ]. H8 m+ I<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 |8 T4 k) v: @5 l; Y+ t<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ T# {+ A/ T4 d& y4 h<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ w$ @5 B! q1 X  K. E& d! `' I8 I% m<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: c" C' O& ]# u' z+ Y. |' i" o8 Z<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( o6 z: f# j5 ]1 t7 d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 X! H* q* k" V+ c( f7 B<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 w9 e- g; H' l! ^& i<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- W5 O! T5 d1 B" q  @1 V/ g, B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" i/ j9 T. H, x, ?) P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 N/ B- s* ?* `  E8 D- n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 q2 f4 z: q( h, G2 U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 B) b/ v# l# P5 N+ r4 R<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; k, ^- h- \4 w9 b4 }/ Z<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
( d. P1 O8 f- H# V<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. o2 z& d% W# [# {, S. D( C  n<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 e6 o7 x0 r1 ]<P>But I never did </P>
3 Z9 v, \. P  R% U' p0 n<P>但我不会 </P>
. C3 x( `/ j- j- q/ ~3 u<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; u% L( E3 Q9 S<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 X7 `4 n! n6 N# ~( r! a9 {0 s<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 U$ g" n% x& J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- |  k2 @. @( ]- c7 j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# [9 l  j( X! z9 j% p<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 O; v, h. C! }5 E/ M<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; b* N% f# C2 G8 N8 I% s8 r/ K3 d9 \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: d) Q4 i  d: m<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% p8 s7 c! k! @# I6 k<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>