【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 [3 C) P9 y7 x6 x( ZFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
6 y( O( S, |; a5 `& r+ l; a7 oBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. n5 o2 b1 V& Q- E& e: f& {, |- JI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
) F  T+ ]+ O, t' R% DWhy is it so difficult to express?
' S4 b9 s" C  Z# y# W8 P+ iI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
  e6 v$ u- U5 c. W2 Q/ }( WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 G& `. ]8 t2 V! x2 o3 pIf today isn’t too late,
# R6 r! B8 H3 W" [) aI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- r6 L: N+ o+ ^2 i+ kCan I entrust it to you?
, o/ B" O# D+ O4 G( NEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  m2 a% _/ D) w1 nI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ s" F0 I! s' z, u1 AIf today isn’t too late,
% G# F* T$ u* C$ r, B+ o/ PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 S( H$ L. r2 o3 F# E* [8 D( xCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# D" z2 m$ Y( x5 [% Z4 oCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, O# e+ H5 q9 `3 ?6 p6 N# _: g<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& l5 r; f6 M# i& @* R  ^3 u: K0 j<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 T5 W, [& s; x, W0 e<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 D" g! ^! K# Z* \4 Q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 \- E6 Y( L& v4 m6 m<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- p5 g8 _, V4 n- R. U2 o<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' B% d  _4 s4 M5 H<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) ], G- j# f$ B8 }3 P  Q. L; `<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  T  l4 Q* A$ C+ O7 ^<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# W% I1 S' i3 r3 Y4 Z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
* s* a; A+ @* u<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: C  T' [* T8 K- E0 ?( {+ p9 t. d<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* g0 ^* q( R& X9 \<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 ~. _4 w7 H% x% \% G<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 N8 D' m4 q  i. y7 P- a" P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% Y% G* r2 q; ^: w0 z2 M3 p8 C  o/ b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, H- j, S/ G1 p! t4 K6 f  Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% c( v- P1 ]5 V  [% }$ v/ s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# @) v5 O% q/ J1 t* e" |. e. B/ S<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( B7 e9 Z6 L  Q4 |' ?( C. \' T<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) |8 w4 M6 y, o7 p, N<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 {0 E- E# L1 T2 Y8 [# b<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
; i3 R  [' P- _  r6 ]' ]<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" A* g& j0 _9 F' H; M. j* {- D/ y( f<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 V0 L  [( J/ N1 ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 C2 t( o2 G# s% }/ f. `! [# x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ L' ?+ H& g2 @8 K/ r5 n: }3 S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 L1 Y0 ]0 _  G6 ~* j1 }% m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 @  d) Q1 Y8 ^<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>