【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
0 O& K" Y, |7 y0 H4 MWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' M' A/ j1 e: Z/ h& h) d+ nBut I never did
+ Q1 g5 ?- r: |  cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  g: O9 Z$ l( X$ y! ]; MIf today isn’t too late,
+ Z/ S) S" h1 Z9 U; a4 r8 P# xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. k, z4 b1 M& k5 F$ G. ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 d: w" Y) Z9 _  CEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
6 Y$ j( Q5 o; c3 K& U$ GWhy is it so difficult to express?
3 ?' H$ ^) A7 @3 v! n) oI want to confess that I love you,
" ?  I' w& Q9 BBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 j& J& {( ~1 A" [: OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
7 r8 _% b4 [- h5 b# s) F* JEntrust my love within your heart
% [1 R) Z1 S) M* a# jCan I entrust it to you?
; M3 j" x5 f: q. P& E2 _$ v- s6 aEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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: r* S. U0 G3 t+ h( ]# \<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" H" w7 }6 q; C. s6 R5 e<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! o9 M- B' b) c<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 j/ C: h1 R: F( v3 p<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ g& E  B8 I9 J$ ~, Z% d<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; f! z/ n% M! J- `; {: |/ A7 n/ _; Y4 J<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: i5 p2 \7 K  q2 H+ c# U5 F<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 n7 T# c  |# E- h) I- d0 j<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; N3 F. a' E7 R8 `. ~8 R$ a( Z<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 ?+ T8 A4 L2 J<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 y, J, L, k% c, [<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
9 {0 B" L) L2 R9 n4 c, O7 o4 Q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 a9 @6 _  k6 M5 T( O  E<P>我想说我爱你</P>
9 \7 b* I! q) S<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, z2 i, a3 c$ g1 [5 u1 F<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  F$ q" o3 h  r4 V' M<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* S$ K5 j3 @) d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, D. Z* C" {6 c/ x8 r<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 ~7 n" i( K: C) e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' c, ~. G$ ?9 h8 y) Y; y8 O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 F, U. b% Z2 f. t<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* O1 _& J- X7 ~  V$ i4 l6 M: L% ^8 g<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
/ q. T! U6 `: [; x; c4 d<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 K# s' c5 x/ z) `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ ^" a, M! M% H, x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, i- V1 i3 {- Y! A  G5 J3 z$ s<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ h* Y" S4 Q5 w<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

* I7 m3 v7 `9 p, M: J# g* B! D' R9 y这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

8 t1 k) M& r# {; W2 o- o7 M6 |这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! q. g. ]9 d+ O- p2 ?8 v# f<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>