【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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8 ]& z( B% `& [1 o+ @: H5 {- h- G" b我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# V5 m3 W9 k5 i0 I% V! p5 \That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
1 s9 D9 M* i5 ]; wWe meet and talk everyday,
* p5 Z+ Q) |9 C, ^  d$ RBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% e2 q; B5 B) n, ~I would probably know how you feel
# n2 @8 v% x% r3 F9 \0 ZLove… just the word love
- e- `) ^2 C) H* z) w3 N* cWhy is it so difficult to express?
) f9 j: o5 ^  \) GI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. M7 _2 Z# _) [' g; |8 P# qIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ e7 b6 Z# K2 k% y& [0 u3 k  w/ u% P4 wI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
& Q: a; `4 |* g6 R. ?  S% IWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 P7 }9 r: {" w8 SBut I never did
" \$ g; c4 y# \  sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% U& e' A& Z3 WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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2 @  O- H. C! ]2 p! W[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 g! b5 K" U4 \$ g4 r) B<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( U3 F8 l4 c2 ?2 u! @/ A( j<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  T) D" @3 h7 P, f1 Q2 g3 q<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. o3 o# H7 ?# }9 ]; f+ y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 v3 L1 L2 ]% E7 t1 `& i' r<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 o: S* m* s& y1 ^<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 L5 k1 @9 J2 m<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 G. w1 P1 |; E, v<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% K9 Z3 P  Z  L3 q9 l# o5 A$ {2 ?<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
# h9 }* J$ p- H' n* n- D7 f<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
+ |1 l+ K4 Y; ~  }& C$ Z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 t& g, B  E) y! ^4 d$ y<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' _6 g% ?. o# l; k) H4 a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 d) M4 ~& q0 W  U) ^+ d7 x: e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; @+ Q" E! F" s( P6 F* P2 i- L<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 `/ G' |) |# m3 h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, Y7 J4 @) T; Y; o2 Z  c5 }* j<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
$ U  O, K$ h7 h  q  T3 z; W" @! Y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# B: {4 b& g. E1 `9 c  j<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
$ G/ h+ c8 _: k+ v9 _<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ F: V; ~4 q. z$ ?/ i: K<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 b) x" v: g) M& \9 [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) `  \- k' M- y; Q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>