【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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) {% G" S' T* O% k, `3 l# C' p我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ V* R3 X8 h. V8 E0 l3 B. d6 U" ?That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
# l: a# Q# I/ `) l6 @I already loved you with all my heart
* r6 J! C  P' Y7 O( qWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# ~% ~/ l1 E, Y* RI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) S7 j9 _/ h  Z8 m% y7 N6 Y2 E1 L: RI want to confess that I love you,
) |( m2 X* @6 Z. d( rBut I never did
4 c0 M- i1 H) n, O. O: POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) D" K/ u7 \- O3 |$ Y- z! J( xIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; r* F7 i  ?: B/ S$ M9 m- ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* e5 d0 p% _! N  Q' SEntrust my love within your heart
9 D9 D/ d( v/ @8 ~Love… just the word love
4 c& c& n- o- KWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
( X( V* l: J: L. h1 GBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ M3 s$ _; d) f" R: T- @I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 z6 _* J6 O$ I3 ?. V1 m- h5 ?Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 M3 {1 C2 _$ E$ A; x& cCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

2 y( M7 k. V# E[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

0 T" R" S* S- E5 ]4 g+ L# G
<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ k! h  [8 b  K+ |<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 k" n2 V  k  y, e- {0 W6 o3 _<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. y/ z: n7 ~5 i4 ~( ~; Q  N. ~<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- l$ c* f. N* k+ S$ X. j<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, l  |0 @; r" A3 @<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 n" m& M4 [4 n: W3 ?% [<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
6 Y6 w: [. X& h  Y. O3 y  h<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- t) {2 r& `+ g! \& O5 s<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# R! b: w  ^5 R$ y( Q<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ M5 d$ D; z& j7 i8 C0 Y<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 S* W  l5 Y) _- Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 Z2 d, ^4 F- X! t7 l7 I/ j- f3 \1 T% t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# [. w9 k7 A! |2 z' X3 H4 g5 P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; t$ P3 }) K8 }1 X) w( D" y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; z* v/ b+ ~* Q" B4 l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
' I% v$ B2 j/ }' P1 @<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 i( o7 C) p0 n" ^2 F<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: v- [9 S& w7 f<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 @: i5 `2 C; h  I3 C<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 z; K2 U6 _( a; T" o<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
! _1 C: B9 L, m, [, Y<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* X$ I) z& p+ K<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
' T* E5 }( ^$ N2 T<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
* I) `. x4 O& z; R: P  X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 F+ d" W; b; G/ l! ?2 D2 a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 u; Z4 U1 q; M" Y9 C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 o! Z* z. Y2 B% \, L6 _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% a' s- s3 |5 C7 u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ Y& }& s$ ~1 C8 u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ ^5 @- D& W8 g, _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
& h' V+ S7 u3 B) f& |<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; s; _  G+ }8 y6 {" J; A& a
我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
3 c/ S% j, @; `0 j
/ c0 I! B5 Y& @0 T1 p* S这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) Y4 T: ?: R! H9 {7 _5 a& w<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>