【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  c. X- s9 G- C; v0 Z8 e  QFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
% O/ s8 c4 u& K9 o) ^We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& b% a9 @% N4 gI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, y1 }; U( F+ ~7 e6 h3 g- z( Y# MOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( G$ [5 x9 F6 L8 b8 KI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 F+ u5 E$ ?9 h- Z0 n* m/ Y6 }Can I entrust it to you?
; i5 ?6 M$ D- q# E; T2 B# MEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
; e+ V7 f: ]1 K  Y$ g4 r& RWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 c/ k# R; L+ q# yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 ?2 ?# i( G* b% nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
. ]  m2 I6 `1 F' ~  G& Q8 w<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) k1 B3 O  _  |2 @<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 A) T, R8 v# z1 c& r6 Z9 W6 F; P<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 R# \, r4 [  m6 Y0 i<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 l6 F+ y  f# [<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* |7 ^" t* R6 ^( H<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 A% ?- D" G1 |( R) a- T" u) N<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ A1 |7 Q/ W! d$ L<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 P/ u/ h/ t) R6 Y6 `# W# ~& f<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" F2 n& }  {5 ~3 b% C3 J7 y7 o) E<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* o2 c( m! B& r/ o<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
& [! A4 T1 z1 n2 [) C7 z3 n<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
. R" y2 R: ~6 B3 @<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 |+ w( z( [- ]( Y+ r$ P3 L<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
7 l5 a2 z# z$ g+ D+ j  k( t  v, W<P>但我不会</P>
: B& ]$ @  i1 F5 v5 s9 O<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 y- S& V9 V" W0 D1 Q* L<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) R9 s9 Y1 r! k5 p0 J2 N; P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# i( Y( V4 o  P% Q2 `& ~$ Y<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 }! C4 m; t2 l" d: j' G<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% O3 P; N' X; o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 E; k; O% R# h, @6 T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ j5 U4 S: M: I3 X3 h* V+ }<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 E+ s1 r9 l4 J% P; V) c<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ u- q& P# \: w( x<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ c5 A+ s* u0 n/ ~; }# i<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 P6 c4 {' e, p  I( U<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
' v8 @- \% t( K, f$ u' ^<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 I1 N: `1 u" E4 o7 k<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 V$ j6 V, r- O9 _8 Q7 z; f7 Q& [  ]<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 H, Y. ]. d& c) v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- x+ V) R' H$ C$ ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 _6 T5 e+ A: @3 d! ?; \$ a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 x1 Z; e  o" W9 \# L; k; D+ K( r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 q  o) U0 e% ?( j1 N这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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6 `: F0 q1 b) |* S. c  B' j<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>