【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
7 |3 F8 y6 X! w" zI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
  c3 m# p/ s% D6 A0 uWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 A0 K! X1 i8 V- l0 o9 T( {If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' o8 }/ Q; Z! ~/ ~0 `" bI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  }; X  V# B; eEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 t7 P' p1 d; I4 O$ |If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ U+ Q& o  ]% B, z5 T2 cCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
% l% H% E, e0 K: P9 XCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

1 e/ P4 d: J$ o- y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' ~. W. R3 n/ a<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 S/ }+ M5 ], a3 W0 s<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! x. W1 @% k: e4 h2 ~<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) I, r. p# H. z  z* Q( n<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
  M& C0 s- n$ t5 d<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- U9 D) l7 G+ `* b4 [/ u<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 B) R% n' j* K  [; t& f+ Q- a+ O<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 B+ }3 ~7 C1 ?+ f3 w* z<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
) l4 _: J2 Z' @0 Z+ d( |2 G<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
( w$ R- q$ t$ Z) ?( E2 {<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 W  M2 b/ c6 J. {<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 x' d; I; A) `0 J# Y! K, P<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& Z! @! F, B4 c6 z% H& G+ a<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  F+ \4 t" a% m' r) T7 F<P>但我不会</P>
4 H4 ?2 w" g( L2 _) ~<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% |* a  Y: g& v* a<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! o( ?& G; j3 Q  M% w1 b% z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, U( |' {* X; D( [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% [: Y* E% P' w! V' i- v<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: i; d! `3 r6 [: Z8 Q9 y) f6 k8 O<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
9 L7 h# m+ W5 P% j<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 }6 r  d6 M# G" s% I! }<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' h/ R6 c5 ^. u4 }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% C  X2 h* y2 X6 D, Z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 w2 p  Z+ K3 F- M0 Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 d1 e# R9 T9 I3 O  `4 Y: I<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 \* i* O* A! N# k- H5 E: G) k<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% l4 k5 w. l+ \/ {- j<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: ]* C* f/ p8 a3 z; M5 U4 {<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>