【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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$ y3 B  W# Y5 T. p- Q/ Q6 S我另将歌词附在此。
, ~& t& F! q5 E1 CThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ y! K! d6 _5 DThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
8 E* E2 m0 r- N+ @4 \I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 ^! }: Q5 d: N, M/ A( q! \If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
3 M: w. V+ q/ f$ [, H2 \* TLove… just the word love
4 K& l- e/ I  [Why is it so difficult to express?
/ U- Y# r' _, G+ i7 W3 HI want to confess that I love you,
! ]0 p" Q- D9 Q- G2 vBut I never did
/ A2 i6 c2 p! SOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) q# I, m9 q( L: \' ?If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 Q, R0 i$ R$ v% QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 Q' x3 [1 _/ l2 L" x4 OCan I entrust it to you?
% [- \6 p1 e! |! J! GEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
! j9 f* `5 E1 O6 VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# d( p+ \( J( n# d6 p2 _: bCan I entrust it to you?
9 _" D1 Y, H0 ]; f- q4 HEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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3 q9 `8 k/ `2 Z" u0 o+ m[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
0 m  H& q# U3 ^" J* [$ i' c5 h<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 `2 w$ {: _% t) r<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 I% N. B3 }" D( z# G<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
: o& @# n7 ]: d4 W# }<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; A" }/ s& |6 x$ O+ g<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 B1 N' F- d4 l: m, u: D<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 N& E6 g: R" H! y* X<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ M1 m9 e9 I' o* }<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: S' G3 k4 H, H5 T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. t: y+ o7 q! r7 C5 ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) A& b$ I3 r) L2 P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% a+ I; y$ s6 K9 H$ q<P>Love… just the word love </P>
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<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 n% p0 H5 v, _<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
; D% p( k( X. U1 ]- c( D0 ^! H<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
( x9 {- Q. L; p0 i<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- H7 w$ q$ o* ^<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 {3 |" R: {9 \3 l% n0 Z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* i; I6 }  f* c+ k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( C1 @" R% r- \+ k& W% Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 v( c! E  k$ W) p) H$ Q4 B8 {# I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* C( t0 t' |3 f& y# d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

/ O9 t& X' g% z8 Z4 g2 F这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- f6 Q6 V/ S+ h<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>