【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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/ g/ n4 k8 f" V我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
4 r( D  T: @9 w2 `) ^3 ?That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
& b6 p6 ?5 N3 a) R0 m* y8 c1 PFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
! _3 `' Q1 r  D8 [$ `# ~We meet and talk everyday,
+ y5 u2 X$ e7 H. ?+ Y  [But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
5 X( n; Q; }5 G* v: {0 x' V& ~$ \! MLove… just the word love
& m) g, N5 i5 X8 r' Q! M+ t& rWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 `! }4 h8 V- T3 o7 I  o; kBut I never did
& p2 H  t$ H; L$ p  T9 gOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
! O4 P1 l6 Z- @6 gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- N% I5 z6 B0 Z# b1 e: m7 x/ ZEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% b; f& _  }0 c! r$ @But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" |& }+ X! h. v! IIf today isn’t too late,
" M+ P6 Z5 v0 t) @I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& H. |1 `( E% S+ T. C0 K9 EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ y+ ~) S/ F3 mCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' K! `. y- y$ U0 B0 f* M% QCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

) H3 P5 A0 k0 x- K6 f" A* M[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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9 C! B3 W+ p" u) A+ S* V<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% `& r; ^) [, y9 M<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
" [' L7 l& E: d) X3 K2 F* |<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
$ |2 N. R+ Q, _( O<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& w' c  Z% I' r4 i<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: I0 S" X$ u' A' h<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
# X) m1 I# Q. F: [; G<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, _/ h9 J+ R/ \& g& }7 F1 t' d! D<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
9 l: b* ?- T' p% V2 N& Z4 z2 T  F<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ w* x/ _3 O. K4 |<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 f: D1 Y; c  r* G<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 @" o8 L# p, P9 E<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; @7 j( V: d8 p. R* E* V5 X<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! C8 e  B* b* O<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  Y8 q" _* a8 L0 M<P>但我不会</P>
: N0 L& n$ r8 a<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% S- A6 \$ Z5 c/ Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 T' {2 b! b) Z" A<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! ]/ V4 g5 |$ l8 K9 [* }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 g  C9 L( _! F) H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( X' v* \/ T0 ]1 U! _3 C% u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
, G1 I& C- x+ ]* x: L<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 g1 E* S' H, T# _+ U<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* i+ A2 r& F* B9 p<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 B" a5 g. P! W# q( U% b<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
# w: C4 P; E  n<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
3 a; N7 j5 \( I7 W5 v# `<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
" o$ e5 U" H; m  ~" Y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 {+ [' a9 @4 w8 p$ n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 r5 Z) L+ q) H" s3 X, Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 ?2 P2 B* v( Z" K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( P, S* H+ V6 @3 C0 g* l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' Z; K( F, g! V1 z  x( k. e: w<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( j4 z3 j  A3 R- K( f$ p( Q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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, l) p/ u7 D9 i+ t' l( |<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>