【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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/ h/ m2 J+ v2 K$ _' @( r0 B我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
3 r& b9 t( l* o  A) g8 m* N% \From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
2 G" W/ o% l- X: z- s7 P& ~We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# F" X7 S& U: ~+ |0 cIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
: v: u; T/ L$ y# K; ]Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& G  ~: I# l  p1 ?/ h4 ^+ Y2 KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ j5 F, J* w; p) i7 i5 oI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 C" R+ @" L, z- k8 }, ^Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
+ h7 @9 T& m6 XWhy is it so difficult to express?
  k* K  I. y* K( p2 X4 g( A+ GI want to confess that I love you,
! x+ X1 b. q) w4 jBut I never did
; J" v) Y, X/ {& |2 \9 eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 }8 r/ T' F6 v3 aIf today isn’t too late,
! u$ s% p8 G4 O& }0 E! v9 gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; `8 V: [  a0 {& L1 E) h1 OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; G3 F+ F1 F; u2 ^/ M' WCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

9 A& k2 t2 m8 d[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( W0 I" M0 o8 v# E<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: f$ s& F0 e: D<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 I+ ]2 ^9 ~+ }: F* u* H<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
5 x" M' c  }/ H  Q8 m<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 A) u9 K4 e9 Z+ z& L* [<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" b* m" L; f, {<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- X1 n# W7 r7 X* }  k+ P1 H( h2 e<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ Z3 r! H6 [9 B( w0 l. q<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
: t+ g% w" W; \* }9 J% ^" M<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
& C; B5 k! y: U9 M1 W$ E<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( y! ^6 z4 f0 j<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 `/ ^1 a5 J+ d. a9 r/ W<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 ?2 D2 T% _3 m( f$ L$ {0 ]<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 B, @, B+ f9 w! Q5 G# W" g7 r<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ s' U+ l- y5 `4 x4 v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' [) ~. U; m5 J' |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' h7 q  N4 ?7 B+ H0 |<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 A" [2 E; v1 _9 }+ I: G9 H+ h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" _% M7 J8 \: D! u  b: E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' G5 Y- T/ r1 C) }( Q6 O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 ~+ s0 e# B" r3 L/ h% C! ?# s<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 h! S2 C" k- o" J9 a1 m<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* y5 |7 G7 }4 J<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
! }+ x1 o' W! a<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 f* q2 I4 i# e* {0 n+ d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 j4 R; h# O* s! S<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 q* i: Z/ w1 g% h, l/ n3 V8 ]2 V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% {- R" L! a3 W  P  P) ~<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( S& M9 j4 @3 @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  w: Y: N/ O# c$ X- }  v<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 `, V! m* _2 l, v# g7 q8 I* j9 K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, h6 t& x6 y* v: q: c' L" W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ r; I# Q4 _. m2 t' v5 Q<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

3 Z' x/ B" {" S这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

! {5 w/ w& i* Y. L- z: b8 H这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* H& P1 N, {" g$ Z5 `' b3 r/ y2 c<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>