【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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% x0 _0 Q* m& C2 m$ C我另将歌词附在此。
* j0 x! _7 i5 ]The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
$ f  G# L0 q1 Y7 I& `+ `I already loved you with all my heart
/ N9 @# S3 Q5 T" S: i3 x; g* @! Y) YWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ y% w9 S- S9 n6 ]; ?% kIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
" A9 r0 ~2 G5 R) oWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
: \' U$ Q, r* C; @5 ?6 k$ [Entrust my love within your heart
1 N/ Z( Y+ S& s) t! iLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 O* V) K* @$ J: m, g1 POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 h! b, d5 u( H, vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# `4 Y" H9 T( H$ b1 GCan I entrust it to you?
* q1 A4 k* E4 t$ v1 @" MEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
5 O" f3 y: u, l& A/ h) CEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- [5 C7 w! h2 Z! |3 p<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. H: j. Y" I( B# e<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
7 d2 v1 q5 r. b( H& l$ x<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
! g! S# g! h7 J7 |2 ~<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' l8 `  Z1 y: @1 ~5 _% g5 m<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 Z% q/ R" F& e3 s1 T4 ~" p<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 d) w9 {  E( V2 s8 ]<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: z. z! a( d9 ?( g% w<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, Y3 R9 b% c3 n" v9 f+ {1 ?<P>我想说我爱你</P>
# {# c0 c) F4 M2 G& I<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 s% s: O- y8 S3 V% `! g, l3 B6 {<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 V# F" t$ \4 H$ a<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) \! j; }6 \3 j3 K1 z  m) I; I<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& n' K  v; ^% Z1 |) C+ x2 I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" |0 `  ~5 t9 {) {  D3 l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* a$ K' v6 F: K/ {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( ?4 p# Z1 q8 S( s4 w/ F<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 l) `0 V* t; N' `3 H<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 }' x2 p8 l) ?% Z<P>But I never did </P>
8 C. E& O. N! _8 }8 M3 ~<P>但我不会 </P>
9 Z9 v$ P; n, D; h6 k' V<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
' H" ?) ]0 G: _* D; _7 |6 N<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, C5 k9 \$ ]8 [3 E5 |  Y& E/ H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) C7 e& u, r5 e, F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 j, ?8 f9 ?7 ~) V5 N8 [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. N! W4 G+ @: _, X2 \1 n; w1 F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 r2 d5 Z1 j' p8 c) b5 ~% V& b5 k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ t8 l  X! f0 R; G' U  X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' z5 z$ l; L. R! L! y9 c<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 j' i9 T6 r% U5 g! w<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( G6 V6 y, o# n9 E5 c1 T% D这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 i1 W# j9 z$ |0 l2 J: W) ?<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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