【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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, Z4 n/ B2 A. p- \- [" E我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 Y% U3 ^- X3 qFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
8 U3 f' E: z! C- G" k3 yWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
2 S, X* W# A4 g& t, Q* Z& o9 QIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 N: e- `4 f1 W2 Y9 Z7 AOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 O! o1 G- O5 @% iI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; X5 b# z% y4 W! n" ]9 oEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 {, q# S+ }) e% m( G- B  ^But I never did
9 M1 j; S$ q. C1 O9 WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( w6 @7 J6 V# lIf today isn’t too late,
) E1 `1 z; H( E2 b6 b8 V3 OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 Y1 }3 o! ~% W, N- @* NCan I entrust it to you?
3 ?2 E* d6 t2 J, y& M  _Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 K( w# U: N" o4 c/ Y* ^0 e<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 m2 X% r9 l; @1 E9 B1 [<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 @4 T* f9 z' h# R& |  |, W9 k<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
% D  X4 a8 y0 U3 |5 Y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ N  {- L5 a( V4 b<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 R5 o3 I. m$ o0 \<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- H& i2 Y7 a; x2 V7 T& U" |- Z1 ~<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( V* J- n% j9 p2 Q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ k* P; Z- ]8 G  X<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. z' j8 q. H" ^3 R+ k& O# D<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) p( N4 I* A3 }6 k<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 e  W' }4 z" {, N- C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" c: Z2 K9 \; l0 B6 m, {& }4 v; G<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& n* G* ~2 m# g8 Y; V% J- X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! w' f( P$ x& v3 n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 G0 G3 ?" }8 ?2 d) y8 R. l% K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" s9 A* v% f9 g/ O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 L& M# S9 @3 V* t2 R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% J/ K# Y( h9 C8 z5 t2 F2 d<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; J0 P' ~+ T' Y& B1 C0 D<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' c/ k0 N, n- F7 }8 t# N<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, t  g& N+ Z7 f1 I  F<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
' V2 x' W  f' D/ r<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: [! Q# B/ `2 F/ d9 d0 i<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
+ I0 G0 `1 o. C- @3 c4 c4 s<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ ]' c, M" m9 }- \7 v" g) P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; K9 o6 S& U3 V0 x- R! O<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: u) {7 k: J1 d9 A<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 L) X. i8 f, [+ `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) g1 a- ^0 ~3 ~' d7 L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
" K. Z9 ]% V$ X<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

4 g  N' H# K) i8 H0 ]5 O# K这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: o6 V7 m! a/ ~, L9 a<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* j  Q2 f, K6 F4 b<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>