【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
& K  Z* k' \. D5 DThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  L0 H# D1 l! U. ?9 jIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 A8 S+ }: o% Y. TI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
: A: L  Z8 @7 l4 n4 R7 ~0 ]1 {' }" v: `Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. o2 ]! A5 }% i' [) X$ JBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. w  u3 p2 S$ w! j9 v3 \If today isn’t too late,
# N8 H: j( r1 ^: }; ]& ^8 WI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* m; N+ Z* i/ G; D; Q% O. OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  j: }4 a2 e' i+ rI want to confess that I love you,
2 @& {  ~, p8 XBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
0 z3 Q; D* w, T# b5 \: PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
' r+ ?. A  }! ^: k0 r; k' M3 }Entrust my love within your heart
4 U6 T$ Y" {: KCan I entrust it to you?
4 n9 S3 [* d  l6 f4 ?$ ^Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% E5 h3 f% \, \' w  e<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 G( K7 ^' Z+ O6 ]<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% [& P( r' r# S9 ^) n. K<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% @" Y5 m2 t: y% S, k8 t<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% o9 G5 u$ {" [<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 ]8 E8 O3 a; p<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) o5 P3 j! b# f' W% Q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" ~) K- T5 s1 E) r7 F- U<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 B4 M2 G1 M6 v7 B3 v<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 z1 w; }) q( V6 e7 ]" {( u<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 |4 c5 @. q) M<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 Z9 C0 i7 {2 O3 M* W% q<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
% |. E" E& N6 u" R! m7 p+ f1 A<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 t, y' x$ o6 L; m( u. ?! R<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" U0 h' n5 O4 w8 X7 R+ }  z$ p+ W<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 X/ B$ \# _: r- I3 ~" i  `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! J& o. ], p3 B: d% Q8 e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ H( s, w& _1 ]5 M. E% d9 h<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" S" S$ {- H. ^0 ?- |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 F6 `4 e1 P  M  y- Z<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' Q- ]# u- O0 [, r<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 b5 @1 C7 C9 D' ^! r9 h+ B8 M<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) O/ y8 w# c' |; ]* U# V& b<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ l3 U/ O1 C9 `) R<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
* t" t, i. E" u( U7 o9 P5 S/ v& P<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, e& Y0 K& Z  ?$ x1 o5 |<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" h* M% u8 V* _# G/ c1 ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! p% r2 `$ O- q, ]% Z1 U( D" D0 T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* C5 z5 `' h$ D/ \/ W& b2 l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; ?) I. S) y  x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! q) N2 n. y7 |4 o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 }9 o$ c2 t* I( J7 g3 e<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>