【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
/ J. Q' D& F* a% M( @# PFrom the first moment we met,
8 G) J1 R5 |: f7 M% t8 S) }I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
  I% O3 R2 d4 UBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
, l2 ?2 H& ^5 \4 r* HIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( L( G2 L! |/ A& F) gI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( U( N0 W3 T; n5 nI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- T% y0 a" D8 |8 ?If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 i  e; E0 r7 X2 R0 _4 ~0 C6 SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- ^' Y6 M, n. w9 H' SEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
' J+ X7 u7 M1 f! dWhy is it so difficult to express?
* p) q  A3 c1 V) h2 ?: F0 eI want to confess that I love you,
' \# O- U, B/ L/ S( B6 I1 @& k1 WBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" Z9 c$ h, _; v9 J. x/ VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 H, I4 J5 d- tCan I entrust it to you?
5 H0 H" P$ \3 iEntrust my love within your heart

0 a" L. [0 o6 M9 |/ e! N[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

1 E& K2 u. c/ [( t<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% V# [! e" V) n. `6 [+ J6 A<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) o) F7 b  |7 ~<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 r4 v1 ~' m1 [7 X<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" N+ p  D: n6 r8 i1 M<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- X! ]2 H+ X0 H; K! _8 @8 Q) g+ v<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ d; O1 C' \1 K# w) O% O<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 q% C* R% a1 U+ \  j- ?& W, @<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. @  j. E2 D* X* A! i& e<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 f- i- T1 B. j& S7 U' h$ z<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& t* m4 [3 c, j2 @" V. Q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' p! j4 X# W8 ^  ~3 T1 c6 n<P>我想说我爱你</P>
+ ^! l& Y6 I" O8 ^9 B) y<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( ~' r* D. v9 U<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 ?2 j" ?  D, w4 Q( O" m3 o<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 |# T' v- P* M0 A- c6 y% y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- M7 u: J$ F6 `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& h. r  P/ t* h5 `) w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 a6 Q1 m+ k" o7 s, J; E5 v8 v# ]7 ^; a<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 N1 D5 q1 R& p0 N* ]<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* \5 j4 r  @0 O  r4 w# S5 s8 j$ R2 |<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
! S3 b8 h9 X1 @+ k/ A8 t<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
# E$ v9 B4 u9 c<P>But I never did </P>
; p8 j" M- S3 M' [$ n<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- {$ v7 c9 [% S* {+ H9 u5 c) _+ S<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
' P- L! n$ `; v: c<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 t: k$ C; M, T* e  P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" @6 d+ k- {7 O+ L3 {; \. M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 E7 `. X- P+ F4 X( }" l* F2 c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 ^4 B: p" J3 y: M9 O1 F* o8 d<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' R; I7 _( t6 e+ v$ x2 d& k1 z<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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1 s% C+ S: x* ?这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ E5 `. A$ u; q% S; L<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>