【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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# ^2 Y3 }% b1 J我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ Z6 z& L& c& P" D: K- aThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- w5 j: v( {$ Q, u8 O( r$ ~5 E( z" _From the first moment we met,
! \' \( E' ]; `$ MI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
! \* U- o8 l, Z4 q/ U% pBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
! e0 b* ?" R7 l  XLove… just the word love
' I) i% I% g0 |3 TWhy is it so difficult to express?
: d7 L! v( n: G5 MI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; d/ g% K6 I" e& ]I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) R0 {- @, V, E+ Z& m6 m9 T! XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
( J  F; `" |  W! hEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( z2 i. ?! Z, e9 P; UI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% E4 C# G- B) ?9 D! QIf today isn’t too late,
) p. A7 s+ a/ ]/ o2 ]2 R" ]- QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" M. L+ M2 ^8 G$ [* w' A+ t0 qI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( T2 s2 d0 S- ?+ e5 |: f- BCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 l4 h) t+ W" L' K, }Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

/ I6 v) h& n6 m( G  c[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 v" f  V. f: B6 Q& ^& l<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) {6 |8 D% ~) e1 C9 S4 }% ~<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* F; f; i/ l& }4 }<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 [# q1 _" k) |6 {# e& p# P  Y  w<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& T8 F  e# W' A* w<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
! I, Q5 i. w- T; y9 H<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ R# J' Q7 y# g9 z: r% T" Z5 W! j<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ n6 }( s+ [( |) I<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, [9 W# a4 g6 r2 E<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ b+ ]. G: Q% Q) B3 ]. z% [; u<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
6 ]6 r0 u- z7 H7 S  K<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 T3 m) @! k6 w4 k) c<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* ^2 |  s5 c( y; p<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: j3 M6 `9 ~8 |<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 r$ y6 y* F& B1 j<P>但我不会</P>
) m+ @; D- k3 Y& j4 Q1 L<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" O  Q( M# \* p& K7 K' ^: B! {<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 s' [& z, K, ?- f. f* T<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 _5 c) C6 s0 W0 ]/ J. i: v( _2 o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! y0 J8 c6 k- I0 `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 Y2 R; \/ I- B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& J1 u/ I2 r  Y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' q* E) ~/ e; {2 Y% B<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 t8 ~/ b: V9 J$ o4 o5 l0 G<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( b% g7 g: }, B$ k- N<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) T6 x- h9 I+ t3 g<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 o4 w& u% X! S<P>But I never did </P>
, O4 M5 ^, E7 M1 H+ V<P>但我不会 </P>
1 |9 t- L; R! D<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ U. F* `  t1 F# o# ~1 U) t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) h1 y: {. G9 F" \* f6 F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" g; f, ^+ T4 M  j1 S- }<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 _1 q1 U$ @& }& M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: h% Z8 a& _% ?9 u0 Q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ g0 l- s5 F/ }9 q% J  C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( {, l6 P  [$ e3 F8 U8 c 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

1 W  U( o  S/ F5 p" M6 X5 X这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>