【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
$ L$ O* X7 ?+ {1 k& o# v0 PThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* G' e" v  ~* S5 c$ @1 CThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
/ J1 L6 w; A6 l0 ~2 XI already loved you with all my heart
& q8 _' N9 ]8 G" g# v2 `- rWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
# t+ }7 P& w/ \% l/ PWhy is it so difficult to express?
& z0 Z- o' S5 G: Q8 d+ V' VI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* Z, n! V; ]; H, p4 O/ BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. |% f6 ^" l! U) vIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 N! v- x4 R; \Can I entrust it to you?
+ |9 ^+ s- e7 ^; t4 X( k  lEntrust my love within your heart
( L$ {9 q/ g3 w; {, \Love… just the word love
0 s' R1 }+ k& |Why is it so difficult to express?
8 W* i$ `  J. {& z4 BI want to confess that I love you,
8 e5 Z- _% T; b1 gBut I never did
7 C6 T6 M1 u$ }( gOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" D9 E# ~. B4 R- y( K% P. _$ RIf today isn’t too late,
$ j4 ?, }9 I8 U, T  [. I3 {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ n/ h; M* ^0 l) CCan I entrust it to you?
) F0 e- j% }5 X3 Q( ?% z) HEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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$ o6 g* V4 n, O" @3 `[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* ]5 S/ X* `9 @. p) \  Z( t<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( E6 U0 @0 b! _( J/ a<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# n8 F- s: K9 v0 u0 {  F( c  y<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 o! }/ p: r* J<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! j$ y3 F$ C; m. ?; n<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 Z5 ?: a7 v6 l  [2 A1 F  ]" z<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 M$ k) S# e( z, ~<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
7 _4 ~* r9 |3 r: G<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 M1 O( l* n4 _5 S. J<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
' n! ?! K9 U# }1 j<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 l" C. w9 X$ b<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 ]" n) @8 W! Y4 x<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  C  e' O$ w3 T1 B9 z/ z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 y% ~. k' i, D# s<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 ]: F2 R: G- p. z  |5 ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% X) c: K: A: }- F5 t& l+ p<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ h. w3 G8 ?4 f, v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  `6 l( B0 t/ O- ]% @4 a<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
* X$ Q+ t' L2 `. q+ T<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 ]% g! Q2 |) L" L! p<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
/ F1 q8 a0 H5 O( J3 V' _% P<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ F8 ?% j+ Z/ ~. u+ z' e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. V, A/ D+ A/ Q% q0 J# R; ~/ @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 S$ `9 ^$ a; W0 K5 a<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! u" L, m0 E; C/ p<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 [" A# B2 l: S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* r5 p6 J  x* R+ |. e9 n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 S& E6 }- r, X0 f% t- e2 Q  d<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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+ b3 W  `: O' {; ]+ R% X$ u这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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% l. \$ M1 t8 V4 [$ X$ }这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 g# R) {, d( `0 }' ~<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 n1 a- x( H4 g* S( J<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>