【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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8 S, T! }: U7 w$ x+ C$ x我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 S5 N6 ]$ I0 S, tFrom the first moment we met,
3 l! W& f7 ]- A" M3 tI already loved you with all my heart
7 r) |+ V) }3 IWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 ?2 q. \* F# I; TIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! p9 i( t5 m( P& }6 zI would probably know how you feel
6 e+ a, O0 N. MLove… just the word love
6 ~2 n# b" ~; l3 TWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
- M2 v4 [% c3 k( g; n3 w, V! {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 B8 U% G: d+ ?- k9 QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: ?9 L1 o# }6 q8 |Can I entrust it to you?
2 c) H* Z6 V- i. k5 REntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
3 A& c( _! ~. q2 WBut I never did
, A. Q1 D# L% L' V" @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) i  Z4 [" s. [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 t( ^, q8 a5 pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" L0 l. q2 X. ^, I$ G9 gEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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* k" v$ b8 ]4 C* z4 S# g8 N2 e[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

2 `. U6 N5 l( B% _" _+ m* }
2 P. I, Q! J5 j! Y" J' d<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# p# {$ Z6 u+ B! h% ~<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% D+ F; m0 Q: y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 x7 v6 n  d7 U6 L8 }& F6 r<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( r7 W' Q6 p0 x# n<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! a- v' A- F% @! \) S<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
' R; {+ N; X4 u2 m<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
1 @3 \% [6 v8 u<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 I0 ]) k# m7 M* E<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 x# P; r; @; O$ A; N; e<P>但我不会</P>
) e3 h/ E* h' S: Q4 M<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
. @- _: u& d. t6 z! u<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% G" K7 k& t* F& w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; d0 l) Y2 Q* W5 Z: K& Y9 U0 a<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) ]) s7 v9 z; ]4 [5 C3 F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! t0 f0 G8 [! _, r0 L" m+ `<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  Y2 o0 _% R. Y# D+ Q) \<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! i. o, X# a2 `$ N, z+ F0 i2 c<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- G2 }8 }8 i9 n- I) ~<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 h% w0 |" k, m! l  w<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, S5 E' Y6 X, a7 X2 X& R<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ N2 C$ \% Y9 Y. ~' r2 o: q" B  C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" L3 e6 I( O! F9 l1 e' p6 v9 R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 k' O. A2 @6 Q5 q4 F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
* l) K$ {1 e/ [<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 }4 K. c2 x9 b; v: D; }
我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

# B, Z6 c' W& c3 O# n/ ^这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>