【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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7 _* t# k- w- p# i我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. F- C! ~$ Y! k9 `I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
7 ]$ r* y' e7 I% L/ o+ p* P3 OWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) I0 D. H" ~  [; ^) B! W( {4 D+ mOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 i) u& \7 R$ H: Z  A' M  A7 ~If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 o# Z7 d* i: `3 fCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- L. Y/ {% }8 O, l2 F, fLove… just the word love
5 u2 i. Q8 J0 t4 s  aWhy is it so difficult to express?
( v9 h# W- d2 {0 s" II want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. y- u5 t7 P9 p" `# d% h( bCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
2 Z0 @) ?1 R7 `1 M. G- _Entrust my love within your heart
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3 B1 H: y( s0 ^2 C1 C[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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  y( V9 n7 J6 Q0 _<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. k6 R1 N0 O& n/ ]2 R; h* {<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, n" ~+ D% v" q; n: X' U# W% x<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 j# f0 Z$ e( W, I; a9 N<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 T' a, E& U) e/ t# B/ m8 j<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ U( z) M6 W2 r. x<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 e6 r: ], W( b4 O<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 O; M1 |7 A+ C* I$ B<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) I: S1 M; D) ~2 r" U% w* @9 ?<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 [; _" E2 H  I* ?<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
0 O$ s3 h3 \) C. i<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( k2 p/ d7 u; R9 A' U<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
# K' o( _; p6 O* y: ~2 y0 M  i: b<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: h" ^( M' ]! A) {3 m0 O8 U" r  S' S<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# ?" H* p4 N  v3 d$ Q4 R' o% _; k# H<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 @/ b. I8 D  o6 m2 l. o0 z: p<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 k- C  X; V; E* S1 ]+ A<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  `) D2 p8 o& j: `. h/ j2 f1 Y0 b! P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% D! q6 f4 t, ?! j. x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 b0 t" D1 e3 H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# G$ O/ U; _7 T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
, J1 N# E) u; ^8 L% n2 J5 h<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 p- u9 i& A2 O<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 ]1 A9 ?5 Y2 k+ t$ v3 N! M! j<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
, P( B5 a5 d  U: {( s# n; Q<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: [# O( D' k8 S- A6 t3 E<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- a& D* x  T) y+ ^% T4 V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; }0 `& v( i, g7 n3 A5 w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 |% r8 t0 D1 R8 n( ]5 a0 }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ b/ C0 O8 f7 p- u3 @2 S  C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" O; n! e, P: H5 z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( a/ G, f! A0 \& o" o% U5 r$ X% h这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  O6 V3 I; G; A6 a<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 \* a! C# E+ s4 e+ E<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>