【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- [" f: |) X3 Z+ E( ]That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
. H$ ?, }% z- x- M1 \+ LIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ g# N3 y) |: R; u3 EI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
) ~2 i4 K* B6 f6 WWhy is it so difficult to express?
) ]/ f. P5 e: [/ R8 VI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: F5 W5 w2 s9 O" d# ^. [0 K1 x" MOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& s3 k& m- V* NIf today isn’t too late,
  \; i( e& P0 o+ fI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 [& ?8 ^, c% f; ]& d/ f3 PEntrust my love within your heart
3 r0 @/ ?4 ^1 h, F( R! lLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ e/ g, @. K+ }1 |( j3 lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 F! F! V/ P# x: `* E$ RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
: n: W  t7 d$ BEntrust my love within your heart
5 B1 m5 }  g; X7 b( A5 f+ R. X4 W; Q5 t2 nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
1 Q: C+ j" v& i% H+ P<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 B1 a4 Z) L9 I! i<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 y. H( j) n2 ^% O8 x1 k<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! B% B0 V2 k% Z, Y7 @3 a7 P<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 z( }  e) s( a4 D<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 l7 L9 D, o+ \% q! v5 s<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% j) a3 ~$ \& I. s  S( T  k<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 [& p4 A& N7 z" ]# N8 O, [2 i<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
6 a# r# e' ^( g  \8 N  [8 S# u<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% _. e7 j& _: j: @6 K<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( D& {; p4 `. G* s8 ~/ t<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, p* f" |; y2 e! z% R1 A<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ h8 N8 t+ S( E9 [<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% P9 L7 ^" y- U) W4 v" C<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 s9 C/ K3 g' _; x, v<P>我想说我爱你</P>
$ \/ U& H' N2 p8 [1 p; w& q<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 o9 V7 d' e/ H<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ i0 x! V$ Y2 K  f8 E+ f<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 I/ V) w( S# }' h; }0 b<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& c# L* `  r9 H, t* v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 U4 O/ ]. X5 b9 ^" g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( x0 H3 e3 P4 W* |" E7 _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. p& O: Y1 L9 k$ r: a<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 f4 }) H( X/ Z% o% {2 x<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. B. l& h- t$ Z1 O6 I. U<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- w/ a$ q; `% C7 g6 O- f<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 M; d' I1 d  \( w" T& e<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: \6 G; E2 P* K+ {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ R; g+ {% l. A6 A2 u- b: }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 v0 v: F2 ]( }7 `' l<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 x* j9 o% h) I% W+ c& t9 n  Z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% Z& e) C9 S) `! J<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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, }: i0 i1 K, h$ d<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>