【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
* ~) s& J3 L& G5 M! nWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- ~3 P$ C. z& O% kI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( l- Q, E. i+ yI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 G; g& h4 w/ D- _$ X6 V$ E! }One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 O1 e2 H/ |. o; K" F2 RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 @7 b+ a! Q2 T) Y, U8 ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. N, ~" d# o! m; j# PCan I entrust it to you?
5 I% G: ?# j4 ]# r. ]9 o0 fEntrust my love within your heart
; I# _1 k2 \0 m2 b: [8 a1 BLove… just the word love
+ o6 k  G, g2 z2 ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ @+ d7 W0 U! j0 {4 X  R0 T5 r& u1 zBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 t1 q/ V: K3 l& @If today isn’t too late,
) E4 T- Q  d  h% N1 C- d. sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* M3 s* s& m( h$ d2 B: MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
1 p( Q; `' X5 [' YEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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. l0 J( a  m+ C2 ^<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# R* ^8 U: d) \( D' [0 k. J<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
9 k! D* E$ q* C1 ?  }+ s* G<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 F  f1 x# z7 p5 p' E& x8 U<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. l+ D2 Q. b. J<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; G0 T* g9 c# R2 B6 b8 s<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
$ ~" r  Q4 o% h+ z6 s# M1 K( Y! Z( i<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
* q9 ^( d' o0 W* H<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: g) Y( }7 |7 V. ^+ K7 q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ Y& J  S. J4 k: s8 ]8 C<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 ]* p# d, r3 F- w<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' w2 t4 Q4 ^! V<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 ^4 F* v/ M3 E1 `) B( K4 U$ z3 s<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: O3 D' _! o" r! I$ ]; {; U<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; o( Y1 G: i3 R0 r<P>但我不会</P>
, x. ?6 T& F! r/ E9 P<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# X' i0 v% j# \- u" B% R3 I1 ?<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 y& ]& E" K! f% O<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 A) |# h% @7 v( G<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# i8 T! G* b; f4 g) c- A<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) u4 E+ _. K2 r7 P9 y$ Y9 s+ l0 p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 X( |: g+ M/ @- G1 R* e<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ ~& O8 p6 B5 ^2 b% {7 ~<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 G  i3 H& k' n. M; s: j+ @<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 `) I% w9 s9 L+ w. p0 J& j<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
& t: s. b1 `+ Z" a9 G. M9 W<P>但我不会 </P>
. m, C5 N3 t$ l4 |<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
* _3 ]7 W1 T6 _. v<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 P8 \5 y3 J. m3 M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( ?0 o% e- ], ^0 E3 K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 T! F4 G  t- h) R3 g% F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 _1 {. Q% f5 `" U! l5 \) e<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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7 f2 M( n" Z' q( n* |这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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2 h- N0 x# ~: g2 d! b0 s& m1 H<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>