【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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- j- h: o/ B* w7 S我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
  Y& K# p' c* c4 ]% k0 ]That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( f7 H/ m* m# o  O. ]( \From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
0 ~4 ~' R; L8 m% j- I* WWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 i" h+ P. q7 M8 hBut I never did
/ P$ n' e% g% `, v9 o% `! }One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, K9 S- Y3 ]9 \* ~6 qIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 D4 P& r/ }4 \4 R0 w6 e& Z6 N9 J3 n6 o2 HCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
% w3 W  f+ R4 ~. ILove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 X$ j, l0 J1 Z( EI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
. q# p2 l# L9 |I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 T& k0 }2 A+ S7 \/ N" nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) b1 x+ P1 U7 l  sCan I entrust it to you?
) R# E  t) o! V1 e4 F2 QEntrust my love within your heart
5 ~+ q8 |4 d& _/ dCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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+ y7 c5 `4 n) }0 N# ]9 _: O9 k<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" Z% n6 W" `& W% B* A<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 ~+ {% y) J3 m  R2 G9 R<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ e; |8 Y$ o5 m/ L3 Z) F5 K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 W$ W  Y5 A# {& Q- ^0 S/ ^; ?<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 y) @4 g9 o- `<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  l* B. b& n: S7 k" X0 U/ J: U0 |- {% w<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" H# q4 Y0 Z3 D1 N2 @6 I<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
& _9 ~, N) }( [# k8 j  _- n& r<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 f4 M8 l* B7 T, L# _. Q<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 l+ k8 p: S# B6 ^, w<P>但我不会</P>
  |' P% B' v  S+ V4 Y4 z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- b& A2 O* l- t3 t; e. [) i/ t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  Z9 {; i- b. L/ o# ?! v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 M  x# G2 C5 A* A7 c; m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# h0 I  a! P8 t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# y# t; h: u" y6 @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, X3 B' g3 S' N7 e9 k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' M! \1 A) C% s# U<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 Q0 E3 x6 P. a3 q, ?<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
! _- o. |* j: @- t1 ~<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
4 W6 B3 O. U+ z5 Z9 X<P>但我不会 </P>
7 O1 {6 b4 _1 R- N8 f, T<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; W% B5 @$ v& l9 O# _<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
% a0 z1 _+ c# B8 P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) z2 K) b9 r, y; F% z  j/ P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 I( p2 o0 P9 c% z" U: U/ h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. O6 K4 B- A! L& Q( Q2 P. ^<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( I% @! t% `2 e7 |& s: @+ {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" b; q" c4 ^/ D6 e9 S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 J, C" [. z- T2 |+ a& ~; |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 g8 q/ |1 O) ^+ T  \5 x' R: ]0 ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' i9 O+ E1 R+ R( [8 W9 L  k<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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" Y+ q3 A$ S* V$ D6 y3 F" H) h 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

( ]8 B* V: |6 b/ J, m这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 u+ ~  V9 k8 \5 ?<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>