【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
  @) R9 ]' O+ Z: TThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ p, ~% I, B8 t8 r# w2 L  eThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" i/ U1 \+ o; k0 j' f) x8 I4 Z. sFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
4 o, _) J/ ^: d' X7 K0 J* ?) PWe meet and talk everyday,
( Y& Q: G! v6 f0 i' I2 [But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
* M: H$ J) b- x9 S, ^' nLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 X4 Y$ g9 ~- J& U5 IBut I never did
, x% l/ L* X0 z3 ]. VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
9 n! P7 \* M) N1 l  b) `I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 D& p0 B$ Z; r- G5 B$ F" dEntrust my love within your heart
6 e# T6 p9 H3 y& Y8 |( HLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 s% Z( |: y/ OI want to confess that I love you,
3 y  Q+ @' J0 l( ~  S. L. ^$ ^' JBut I never did
4 c# Z- D9 y; N6 Z: m# A; \+ OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ i7 C. i5 L9 q7 f" I; NIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 Z! L- J+ J. n' z) C: n5 O0 NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, k. o; q, x* XCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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7 ~, v) ~: N  w[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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: d: d  M) f7 y5 ^' J" J% A<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) _, d( B! @6 s1 g<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 }2 `8 o1 T7 c4 l7 _<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
! V* ?, K9 I3 B/ P- N<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 e! Z- a7 D" U! g, X- R, D<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' j8 W$ ?2 f: O% m+ ?9 t) W1 H<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ _$ s& K, n( {( O& ]<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ a9 X' a8 N' d* ]; _3 u7 d# [<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ @8 X' k8 F! e+ l: k# {$ b<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" W2 ~0 Y1 K& K) v<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' O0 \& ^5 x  h, q2 O0 |: Z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( ]& P% f* j' m( Q9 e2 q% |<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 b3 Y( }  q$ i1 S- A; I<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 D* q1 d7 o/ ]5 W! B<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ T' W& J$ {6 z, L- q<P>但我不会</P>
7 r, O" R2 B8 D8 S. K9 f# h7 z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 Z1 C$ ~$ N' ?8 M<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 K7 v% x+ e! K" D  @2 O9 \) h<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 m. o2 S! a# s. n% X5 D2 y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! t3 y5 v! i% a4 y7 g+ z, X* D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) D# @/ s/ ^4 Z! V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
, k2 |9 E% d8 t  u* {<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; I. j+ N8 o6 C, e5 m1 V! P/ N" h<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 E/ p. C* p/ o6 ~6 \' c% p<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  [4 x; A: d4 K1 ], g; H<P>But I never did </P>
7 ]1 D3 h1 v9 X4 G- i<P>但我不会 </P>
' I4 B' m9 }3 Q1 z6 H* E<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" L0 ~, T( Z# }$ r0 O<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  |/ O5 O2 K) z5 w4 m( {! S7 ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& n, t" f+ q4 P# t& `" g4 v+ [<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 ?3 Z' i7 G, c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; B) e$ J. ~2 }" \2 E" L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) d$ a5 X$ Z& [7 X8 ^4 ~3 b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 s) y0 W$ ]1 T6 Q. k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( X/ ]6 F& _' I3 P<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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1 r$ J2 T; P; h0 _; b  m$ f这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. s4 L$ v1 Q- t- l<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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