【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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5 y/ A' ?  b. l' m! U, v我另将歌词附在此。
( F7 |$ V" t% b  C4 gThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
4 H4 ~/ D7 E3 ]/ uI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
7 F2 n# x. e. c: R1 b( SBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ T: ]2 g9 W; X1 o& [If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
9 r( G6 n& Z" @" D& L: y3 {Love… just the word love
" G* D& j1 S( `& m$ }/ o  ^Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 n/ J# X6 b0 E4 @$ h, l7 X4 @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  ?) |2 F1 ]* F. H. C7 K- LI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% v  m* N" L% N- l2 G/ z) N( gCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) Y- ~. P9 X$ A5 ^8 Q) h, E) wLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
- R3 B6 r1 x; H, ~- yI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
$ }4 ^2 r4 M/ w9 c: Y# P* T7 |( COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ t, [  H  r! H9 P% C# C, BIf today isn’t too late,
5 w2 G% ^0 ~8 R# t; Y" ]& dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- e( |* w' L5 R- U7 g0 V1 PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ S0 A7 L$ t! F/ `5 u5 e  ~$ d' VCan I entrust it to you?
4 l1 q$ i$ S, a* A( K+ |Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

2 n+ l! o$ S5 Z9 {! H6 o  S<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 c5 g9 b/ u) l/ c- x4 z% k: j<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  ~8 K4 r' I+ I$ D<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# H6 j; P9 `" M7 f<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
7 [: S( J- r4 o" `! E5 t<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
" p* i4 v" m  @: l9 x) k% u<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ ?  l! q: T6 u( p: a! ~- b<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  A& A: [* i0 N; i' m# g2 N<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
; I8 {' F# o3 o. q. n& X<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" Z. B" Q5 ~- N, m<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 Y; H9 H1 g7 h  U8 N! n' ?1 C<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
) H3 S- R6 Q- T$ p<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. _/ z6 m4 \9 D# \+ T" Q1 G, G<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 i3 }: B5 Z- l2 x* Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 a3 d1 q5 z$ o) D" |$ f" g* z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, N$ x* g$ x3 ]+ g, c! T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 X$ E  X( G  A! n2 u+ l; l<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% q2 |! L3 A- ]" z6 k8 y' A: j( @4 t<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 X& D/ N$ |' F( o7 f  K) M<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 r# W$ X. y. ^5 r: M<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 m3 K2 e, L) N9 R$ l<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
7 Y, A) r; y6 u: I' W# e  I<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
( S8 p" z& F2 a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 \! @3 l. a: t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 v" H" O% N- {$ {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! j8 Z5 M. C' K# m1 X<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  B" j0 ^2 b; m$ E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# l2 o* O+ S2 a/ x+ E2 o6 J<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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& ?; l2 {* U+ i8 k$ {+ m这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>