【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
7 s4 r2 ^- Q6 [* I8 q) [We meet and talk everyday,
7 b% c0 i0 }( E' D6 A. d* mBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
: O) S$ ?+ ~7 O: OIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ h+ \. h0 _7 c. K& j% L# FI would probably know how you feel
" L& x% ]# k6 s" BLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 j) z3 p7 P/ B+ L, l9 jI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 K$ O( Y3 X* R0 ?7 P' PCan I entrust it to you?
% }5 Y8 ], s" xEntrust my love within your heart
, F4 m0 Z- P; H# bLove… just the word love
* F- B1 k0 V8 N' ^Why is it so difficult to express?
5 @: }8 G( [% @- p5 r# [I want to confess that I love you,
1 }. j& y; ~- F3 v9 L6 nBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# e- B' z! ~2 C& j- \% |I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" Z; ]& s, U! R5 g' N2 S2 |Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) P' @: M: I1 p6 mCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

. \% W! C4 C9 o8 r[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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/ V. [% A% R' F6 M- {' c2 @9 _# B<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 D% J& F- E  G' z. t<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, A* \$ {) d' R* b  R: Q) ]! z0 H<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 x8 x( {8 a2 @- f( ^7 X<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 n& v/ B4 j9 p<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 T) q4 `0 [  b6 a% x7 u0 }<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ n1 r7 E1 D/ i8 L<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
. e# I* G5 D" b8 R1 s<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) r( n7 M9 a% z- y. j<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. P0 L  K" Y3 w. `<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 W3 |8 \% L) Z  b<P>但我不会</P>
- |. V/ a( n/ n" R( ^/ n. t& P<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  U5 K4 H3 Y- w* j+ O<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% q. s; K; J  Y* C! y. E<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ h8 y& I/ H0 P; |5 [. t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; q$ g, t. I& j! N4 l8 V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
- T& N) [. \; x; R<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: c8 X; l8 d. k<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
) i  ~2 X; X. V<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' z- a) E3 K* c2 e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- m8 V6 Z. ^- p- i- a( t<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' {: V8 F, r' t3 h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# _* H! ~% K$ N2 d7 K0 ^% P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" {6 o& b5 C. C/ T8 s* Q! j<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
, K- \2 Z# s9 r6 Q' g# q+ U<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

* n% B6 b2 M: ~2 R这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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' B5 `: }8 ^7 T$ ^<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>