【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
! |- o- x1 a* iThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* O2 W" M: [7 W- _4 x' d7 HFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
3 L4 \9 I5 n4 T  w% }' c% x( a* DWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& h- C) ?# _8 [' mIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 F4 }7 }: A$ y0 e  lI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 z5 _! V" |, i( e" w8 YI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: E5 y; A  F* u0 c( n+ nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
3 P  N! f0 a- MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. q2 n7 h, A6 A/ lCan I entrust it to you?
4 @" B* ]8 L% T. vEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
( X9 t  J) i# n; P4 b' x: r: TWhy is it so difficult to express?
' Q' m+ R, ]* g% }I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' E9 V' B5 G" S' _& B4 b. }% e  cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; L: r! K. N9 N2 t; G# qI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* m% n7 h$ A4 \" u! l5 ]6 W  fEntrust my love within your heart
) {/ b; d" x9 n' @, n% ]Can I entrust it to you?
# ]4 ^3 j3 n$ P4 d+ q8 g! k3 q3 [Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: j. x# h2 U6 m7 ^* |! y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, s. ^) @! k. f: ?4 \3 [. Y2 @. x<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 N. _% p9 a. T<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ C* B0 M3 p& h/ I0 `<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& x* T! d4 B6 i; M<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ H8 d" ]! U0 H7 x<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- W& i6 p+ j7 y" _# \<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
* F- w, g' s5 e: X0 X! u' r/ W<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' v; I# O' ^$ v+ l3 S* p<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
2 K% x# S0 |, `<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 q8 }( c+ V* g, ?2 A; T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 H) \9 v1 u/ N: S% M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# t' D4 `) B0 K4 Y( g' h! n% A" \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! o- Q1 I1 i# l: |<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 x- j$ I7 S( y; h# `<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 x7 T" K: N8 \6 s. K4 d<P>But I never did </P>
7 i2 f" `1 @# H<P>但我不会 </P>
; Z- r7 Z1 b0 T; z' J( k<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- d( q* s9 d( _5 i3 v<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 S, i; B5 {0 p" g, |0 h' q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, v, _# H! \  b$ |3 A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) X& S" m  R( O6 F" h8 L8 j; @" m3 U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! ^  Q7 M) m1 E$ a. M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 H1 S+ a# p9 C- y; I: m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& d1 x+ }: D, ~2 m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
- Y) }' ~+ b% r4 f0 m<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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0 \+ k- M( l7 c: p# z$ ]: j- [这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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8 w5 H1 P8 j2 Z4 A<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>