【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" z- P% a. i' U; ~From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
* k/ p9 W' c7 |1 ?* z+ `) H; J% H1 bWe meet and talk everyday,
  O. ]8 E) J( _! @+ `( LBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" ^( ^) a  h0 y% t+ [6 D' u$ IIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. h2 L$ s  Y  H0 DBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ @# K6 Q& O! c( |: I) vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" x) ]8 M! T3 r. Y& I4 \Love… just the word love
" E# j+ \' i' RWhy is it so difficult to express?
7 D1 p2 @1 L( `: sI want to confess that I love you,
$ }0 t4 B1 L, Y6 X1 N; }But I never did
; ?! T" [; I0 G3 e, ]8 k. s: dOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* `1 _$ E, G. p0 i2 S: mIf today isn’t too late,
  W  S7 D5 I7 n! G2 w: MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 `- B$ W+ C2 x5 C. b0 YI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, u9 G1 H( r; o5 v# BCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, W% r5 x5 @( g9 ^' M/ lCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

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oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  J$ x# h* t! m; j( ~) w<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 {7 l' X0 k/ ^! f; _3 U; U+ A<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& S5 j2 v; d, d# g; ^2 W1 [, f3 }<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
+ Z) t6 q: `/ h+ @& d3 L$ ^  a<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 [( H' D9 R! ]% ~& H, v4 A1 Z* Q6 i<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% d4 @% z# M& ^( v; i' y) |$ J<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* W7 f/ ]* Z; o3 b9 A9 m1 J- y& ^<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; r) w* e) w9 u' U<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 r$ L; X0 e: g8 _2 F1 W$ D<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! a1 J; [* ?& i, ~7 p+ Y3 ^<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; r+ x5 Y$ J4 B. T<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% g) W) J$ i$ k<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) C" P. L: Q5 p. t& ^' T7 o& I1 g5 m/ c<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- @1 ^& N% Q0 G* k<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ j7 M# ?  E7 K: ^: \; \; m4 r3 f# \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# n/ _2 z+ `4 f* y0 J3 {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# _( u9 y: U, e) @5 C6 C4 y% y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 R; ]4 R7 i  U) ?- Q" c0 n5 J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' u0 r; r. ^5 \* [. E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 e( l' h5 c  A9 T5 b( z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 F4 e. C9 f2 N0 C. E<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
3 y6 B+ Z: n8 n, d<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ R4 ]" ^% t3 v) u( o" B% w<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 c$ N5 Z& g0 f# x1 d1 p<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
0 I# @" b6 T3 m0 P( w' Q<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! f- \, w; s" b. ~8 o! r1 W<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' P" e1 d2 E2 l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 C7 P) w1 `- ^: Q1 n% d9 z* g<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 g# {, ?+ P% [8 f$ t6 @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: P6 O& G3 B  K6 r0 I$ \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 [; P$ s8 i- g  k  I# G* T( c# q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 `: k1 `9 l3 A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% _% m) ^3 e5 X4 L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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; ^4 C1 k: O1 S! D7 Y 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 o! W1 J1 A) v0 W# r7 \<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>