【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ p1 }- S0 B" G; I1 UThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
6 g( Q% i% }$ K  S1 N4 zI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
5 B! V# L) i  XLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 k0 }; Q0 t) a* {/ XI want to confess that I love you,
8 f4 f- K( ~" b; p/ DBut I never did
3 [1 w! R9 x  S& e: YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
- S+ K$ k; ]. O% [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& L  x: S* N" r$ `/ \/ p8 Z7 `3 BI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 R5 |5 u# F. `( {1 C( W7 gCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
6 W, {0 K3 B: z' Z8 DWhy is it so difficult to express?
  i. y6 z3 ~/ II want to confess that I love you,
' M* [  L0 u: jBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
' G  Y: I) I5 a  I# {; {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ X1 j: Z4 j7 M* S- L! k$ T5 }* YI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* g5 s1 j8 V4 _) VEntrust my love within your heart
: r( v( p* U: [Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. ^9 x4 `; N. n+ y2 ]<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 _( V+ Y4 l3 T& `<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ V1 Q) Z4 f* \# G( t3 _* w<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ f+ o' M, Q; `1 e' A/ Q4 n. `' f<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
# y) T3 o7 e& n% G5 l. A<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, U0 e% l5 w# V* C7 H<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% }- ]+ u* J! i3 V<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, c" B  F. d9 I7 o<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 a. _( m) z, d4 r<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 b- S9 ]) _& u1 E$ d  g<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. M6 @! }* k7 A: @<P>但我不会</P>
+ E; U. P6 U( O# a7 j$ h<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; Y: v0 S: Z  Z; L" ]3 P<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# B% M8 H; k6 m  S8 _$ b* [<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 K2 ]0 C2 L2 ]% j6 l& y- I! n8 ^" S<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, L2 @7 z' J* F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 h& }9 Z/ v9 m( p9 [$ y7 X3 ~<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  I3 y# q5 s3 h" K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* Y6 M  s, f8 }% E1 f& F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& k* p. M  Q2 H1 b3 [( @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 N1 V( c: _& n: d7 `( }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 f4 y2 m4 R, \% P  l* |8 c5 W7 v<P>Love… just the word love </P>
& V/ D0 V3 e& j  R<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 M- C; v" p: [1 @( c0 A' M: B<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 v' ~  e& c3 f' e3 v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; p: s- F6 U1 w/ S1 J5 S3 D$ @7 [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' J* T6 v2 n4 M0 C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
5 o7 e' U* n9 t, U2 T<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
& j" t* ?! i+ |  w" T- T<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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8 N4 E0 A) [+ X这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>