【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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$ |' ^+ D9 X# ]我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
1 o/ E' j: B9 [) [From the first moment we met,
& B6 \& z& V  l! H' P0 uI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ u9 E) {9 U5 i; T: Q: RI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
, G! ?' V( @. Y- WWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ w6 n1 v- ^) A: T: d% mI want to confess that I love you,
% R0 h5 ^: \* g# C4 u* Q+ f: SBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# p1 r3 |7 c$ F3 |I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" Z* q3 Y( p8 _* I. P1 V# uEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 T$ y, e) C5 \6 y7 J/ T! D& KI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& o* o7 S) `7 R  A" y7 ^7 p' FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 O( b% X5 H, q; z; v' _& e) HIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' F4 c$ X; ]. g, F4 y/ d6 |Can I entrust it to you?
$ ]8 R1 S, S6 C" D% n9 ?7 hEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
2 S0 H, O! N- G* w* ~5 c' K7 B! |Entrust my love within your heart

& N7 j4 }: l6 H6 S9 C, u$ g  s[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 j/ u  f2 x. T5 C: v  E<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! I2 y9 ]' ^2 h4 i, J/ j<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- [; L' Y, n  e<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, v: f/ l% Y" W* w<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, Z! p' x5 V% }6 W! f0 P# x<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# _4 X+ \& x" `/ o<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 y* M/ x& l" ~( P6 k; A5 l3 h0 V! o<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& G- K) M' X/ H0 y<P>但我不会</P>
4 ?4 v2 B1 w6 B# c, a/ }<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 R( a& r$ h0 i! `, U" @# p<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 @, {! d3 C* H* Q+ B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# r9 m+ R' H# K  }" r  r<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 h: F  g6 p5 q( g& F$ A$ R) x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  L4 w. |! J% o+ n( ]& o7 t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ y& d1 I7 o3 P; ^; t0 X; g& r<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* I: `  W; S& b; ]<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
) ?8 k4 R# V2 a5 X<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* M  t* ~3 B5 ]$ h6 ]- d; F" Y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% F5 `9 g1 ]8 t- i0 @1 w5 j<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
' t* R+ @+ L' c4 a2 A; i+ H<P>但我不会 </P>
6 O2 X7 m  v1 o/ b6 ^<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& ~' ?1 h* M1 |& z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  x4 ]/ H0 R' k, K- M  d  D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! L3 `" Z& g4 n# J3 u# r& ^% i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! x" v, T( S6 k# {, l3 d/ m% e, [. ~! `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 h/ r1 `% t! c8 X3 A; A! h. R7 W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' z3 F9 t% J0 N) P6 K9 n* J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ N! `2 |$ L4 c# ~1 P8 C# O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

+ {: K+ \: u; ?7 c$ y4 W. b这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% [0 V- b2 {" k+ k- z/ s7 u这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! @- x4 {" @* l6 m# o" _<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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) Z# d" @: O4 r# R/ U6 H<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>