【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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, r1 [) e6 r& {6 L* A% S7 N. O我另将歌词附在此。
; Z# z" }' @3 ]8 B% G) E( \& uThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
/ s( y, O/ B% T% q& Z. y& QFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* K* \( b1 Q) u6 I% [8 bIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( Q3 c- ?( ?, L1 ~- Q% P: [I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( q9 h' c2 a2 Y, ]  J$ [I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 b3 d1 Q' @6 f7 T9 hIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
6 S8 K8 ?8 a; f6 AWhy is it so difficult to express?
8 J1 v* W4 M; ?" kI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ M! k* k3 w0 w) e' h0 n$ KIf today isn’t too late,
9 `; V. J1 F! T: ?' {5 uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 b* s  I* L, I/ N9 ZCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; w* Q8 M8 W4 A4 lCan I entrust it to you?
3 G& }( e& K% }7 Q" oEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( {4 p# t: Z" O+ }/ ?: ], r<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, h0 _0 ~! ~  ]<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 d0 Y1 k, D8 Z& `<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
, S- A2 U5 Q. }  w9 a% \6 X<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 R0 @* X1 f% w( E7 W, g; S  M<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, |8 z' M9 t' k' T9 A<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 J. r: K" H& r<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ a3 j; Z! J% M7 j7 Y# h<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- w4 t- g1 E0 ?* b7 O! a) Q<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 E( A) }  J) ?9 H<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) ]/ H6 o/ Z+ h4 v. i' b5 M<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  V, H5 @0 g6 \9 o& t<P>但我不会</P>
4 Z7 i" S6 ?: g# f<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, j- q" Y8 M5 i7 Y9 R: Z! d* M<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, b" p2 `3 N) W<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ g1 q' d" S  F<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  `5 \, I7 ]- _" [/ t$ k/ G<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; z4 z2 H7 v: L* ]/ r" a5 x<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: [5 p8 z  H& {! g0 w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ |  }1 d; [; i, L<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  y2 P6 A; X0 x  M* V<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
+ A3 b* R! O5 K1 ~0 W$ Y$ Y8 e<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, f/ v0 _  a- j& F<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) s  u0 ?) J  j5 _8 {8 e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 M4 A4 k& t2 x; S5 g. A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) b! B9 S8 S$ A5 r<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( C; D) i$ O1 ^$ j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 p6 \' j% ^+ b5 c2 B& k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 D, c0 J; o5 p1 ~) C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ G1 k! u) g  A2 P5 W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

3 p, N8 ]5 y" P) F- ~这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 y4 c$ j( N) b( J6 [) W1 |5 Y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* g, J" l. W/ A7 R  P) F: Z<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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. C' q: B' J% ?* c# t6 z, k9 b/ j* m( D<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>