【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
2 B/ o, u$ U# V) M2 tI already loved you with all my heart
2 Z6 x! L0 h  I% A+ uWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
! _. u: \$ a+ d7 ~  G0 FLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
8 R# p: \7 Y# K" l! ?6 N" ~0 A7 {But I never did
) l6 J6 H8 \0 @$ Z2 g/ TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  u( q4 d2 \+ q, r7 w7 T2 SIf today isn’t too late,
  y6 {# N8 T9 k) _1 E% B. `I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 y, }0 k8 G  n9 G; DI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 [/ F8 ~- G1 Q3 p, ^Can I entrust it to you?
' p( s; p0 _) ?8 @  R  jEntrust my love within your heart
, p1 g' m. o5 D- a3 W4 zLove… just the word love
$ _! q* Y& ?, ^$ u; s! FWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 p- w; E. U% k; B4 |Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) V* L" ]5 k" j$ x; q<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 M6 q! W& j& P<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& C3 k3 ~) r; Q* s: z<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 M- S2 }9 V: H<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 [# s( S7 Z" M; Z5 n4 Q/ l6 @<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* O5 a" j  _# F' I) \2 w: L0 `<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& u5 p( |/ ^. P<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
6 }8 l$ ?9 R9 g" `6 I8 j4 S" }<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ P6 J6 f6 E2 H<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ y% h/ N: r& E0 ^0 Q4 ]* b<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
3 P) I9 B* q# |6 z3 c# Z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
# l' f9 @. K  P1 R5 n( k- I! C<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! o& J+ W; ^! u  d+ }6 J1 i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& _+ j" I) P% A% O) U7 R<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 j1 G0 y( v5 d/ v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 ]/ h. H( D' d% N4 H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" y( v2 P( j, M9 Z  q& `: y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% |: z- e- Y- S3 {! V4 _% i# m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# o  O. I5 o( |" A" K$ T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
, z6 g0 Z  L3 u6 q* c: E' P" y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' }# q; m/ s! x3 c& F! R, k  W1 ~<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* R6 ~( Z. V  Y/ k7 ?9 N<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ }+ _3 v# v9 q2 u+ N; H<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
1 f) g. G& s; s/ P+ ^+ g) P<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' O  ]* Y) P" b4 g! _( T<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 n8 b5 M( M- {  t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ Z3 U9 q+ z- m9 O<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 H* x& i- ?4 v  Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  {& [. G5 z1 k: Y. S: \<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 Q  `. W/ I+ J+ Q3 ^( c<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) T" ~0 u6 R! Q# \4 ?: ]; h) O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 ~  x: ~4 _5 {, r  |. W/ P$ b<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 @4 H# B1 N/ d: ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 f  F8 ^8 E+ [+ Y; ]7 G  D<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ o! H. q% U' J- U, N+ v" G2 h<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 ^3 R1 Q5 Y. F* {# \9 K- P<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>