【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ ^9 K1 M* J& {$ v2 X8 {7 @From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
7 _8 I" n9 Y! R9 UWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
3 z0 M# r. g8 lWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" y2 D5 S2 U: nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ v6 z2 d8 @; kCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
) F3 V$ j# S1 O& KI want to confess that I love you,
9 v$ T) S8 q: L2 b6 i, hBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ F) i6 y  }( @8 a5 K6 i$ e% ^. MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 i8 R6 l7 `5 iCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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- r+ ]8 ]  P& s) G[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

" f/ C" X6 `* z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, q# l" _) z/ W! }<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 k  M8 ]4 a7 O2 O<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
4 v$ r/ v0 Y$ r; M1 y1 N1 O<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 J. K5 L2 ~9 W0 a9 S<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& B9 |, {+ N2 |9 \% ]# Y5 u9 z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
4 |- g! s& o4 x$ c$ A+ C<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: ]  U- t* o) u& r& m' u+ W<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 g- |3 b9 N! I- R6 @, ?2 b<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# _7 s+ B9 I0 \7 S& f<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: p# i: J- f% l- }4 O1 v<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, ^* f, v7 C* J6 B# h" x$ J" Q4 [<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- e+ \# Z' _1 l' r. z* g% w<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ Y3 c/ U6 D' e<P>但我不会</P>
+ s" l  `) A1 I0 s<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( q, ]$ T2 }0 z# k1 A! m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( c% I/ ?" [) o<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 M0 P7 p5 a# n3 c) M9 M4 v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 }( W! g. t# }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ t' b% Y! j0 ]+ s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 M) p6 T  B. N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' s! {# D5 s) k" y5 Q" ], s# ?<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( P* p8 ]& \3 \5 B( B  R<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* Y. n8 H1 {! a& W" {9 Z7 r  |- |3 j3 C<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; m/ _8 P5 |& V& Z+ A6 ^<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* V, I4 a5 }5 |  E<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 z+ z! b* b  c, O0 C<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* p1 ]/ N( E% ~$ z+ ^% U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 B0 E0 o& u6 A) E' A9 q' o  x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 m7 W* z6 I3 h2 n: m<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) U; p+ h  o+ ^6 I6 j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 H1 Y( J; n1 e* J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 ?# `* Z. L/ F+ x6 [<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ q! G: n+ I5 j0 |<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

2 F+ z, y* a; L4 r5 F0 U; L这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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/ I# O# ?: a" F, [6 H<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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) \  I( p; j0 X8 y5 I<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>