【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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6 P0 V; M# {9 S- h* S  D. e. M! @我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) Q0 V: R7 h0 t) l. I2 G) h: NFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
: b/ l" e; e* s9 `7 VWe meet and talk everyday,
+ g0 z: {/ W! J! u5 x( P9 \; U' _But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
0 f4 a% |1 g4 m/ KLove… just the word love
, v, M) C! \, Y: |2 R. lWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- C: f5 G, m  l. @$ Y1 lBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) a, I$ R0 Z( dIf today isn’t too late,
" V. o! m1 a- h9 DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' _. O, ^8 K0 a6 I" yCan I entrust it to you?
9 e7 p0 H' o2 C$ \8 r6 g2 X7 `Entrust my love within your heart
% v: }( M* i/ {( x7 Z1 ^7 vLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
  S6 j  w5 y5 F- F! B$ g. r# qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, F0 ^* x+ I4 C8 s3 ^- AEntrust my love within your heart
' \- l+ n2 T7 \  C: T* zCan I entrust it to you?
" p' @6 ]9 I6 X( E" L/ jEntrust my love within your heart

+ @3 z$ {8 J1 l* T3 d( T. C6 k[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

1 @! P/ i; D  y<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 a  W* q: B& [3 F% q<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 l' h4 ^& z& o3 n4 b# U, j2 T, D<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& `6 c: S" ?+ P$ a! R' Q1 @- z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  Q; ~+ g' s8 a" c+ @  i<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 J7 e0 l5 c2 g2 Z# U" g3 C<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
+ D  u  a0 J5 G, w" d9 h. H<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ h( ^, r1 C7 ^9 q3 R$ B<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 s4 J2 O1 F: U, C& h) m5 b" G<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 ^! L# ~/ c) b. x: e/ o9 e<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
6 A+ G  ]! _) h4 n5 o, W4 a<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' U# h5 H- f) ^<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" v6 ^$ F5 U9 |) i<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  D0 j* b( A1 k, R<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 ?' E2 r. E/ p9 `) D* {<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 y2 S: T. M5 x2 c' K# w- Y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 U8 V) a$ F* n<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# R$ l# C+ p5 [" p+ k& P. e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! |8 X" ]0 K( Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  I7 h7 `( p: N, \7 }$ Y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( u, c3 z% l1 m( u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% O" x/ T$ }( \% t& `<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# C& ~+ x  s; z( B<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% B9 j5 S- B, t7 z2 i$ T7 ~<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ j+ @  F" l0 y) ^6 }<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; ]# s4 {& F; H2 t( i<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' D$ k/ ?& ~; c5 A0 P/ |4 f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" f! Q+ v8 f+ K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 H& ~% y8 t# I7 Q6 ^; R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) k* ?4 J6 ?% }2 n: D( J5 F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) B! H2 v  E2 v" X- [5 S* y<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ D- [9 p" m: m5 _, Q<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 _! b- v/ G$ D3 g0 u& w# L<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>