【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
8 t& t' D2 ]' |But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
. s+ {3 W: {  C& wIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; [  K! p/ g5 N" ?5 ~! ]5 Q$ dI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
1 ]" P7 u0 Q) c( L: J0 LWhy is it so difficult to express?
' ?4 w" u' w( xI want to confess that I love you,
0 x1 O) [# Q# j8 `/ B/ nBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, B/ J: b3 |% X/ P: g6 GI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ E- {) n& w* bI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, F) v$ @3 c1 I# l9 `Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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8 K: i3 X8 U% }. ?% o1 j[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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, w) V0 q) R6 K7 J' f<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  ^, O8 \8 U& ^0 ?! h4 f# P<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ N3 l6 s8 @9 N" J1 r: a<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
2 n. F, z; {2 v" F  q3 ]4 r) p<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! v# B+ Z/ e7 h: Q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 ^  N" z( k8 G<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
( `4 z7 ]" b4 j<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, l3 |9 t& O4 Y9 |<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
7 g) ^% [- i, B; F7 L, {<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 [& Z4 c6 J2 u9 w+ m<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" N6 V( h9 \0 K8 ]' `  u  i<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ J1 j8 Q' B$ b! E/ h- n5 Q<P>我想说我爱你</P>
' Q& L8 P+ J5 O$ s5 o<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" O. f8 m8 r: Y: l' F<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 w- c1 R, D7 G' L0 Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ r7 u) S- W2 K/ H5 i# ?2 \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; I" S! u1 @0 @" i0 k& [6 U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 e$ z' K7 o4 v, [6 V# a* W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 Y( K5 F3 e! L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. ~' G6 \( T$ Y& Z. w9 l  w/ O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ n/ Y# R! R/ g/ z7 g5 b<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 \" @1 s- Z# S8 ?<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 n% R  Z) W9 z9 x<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: h* F2 `2 \3 B1 a  V; D<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" W! a0 d" k  t0 K<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
% J8 X% g# c; d& O! A/ q<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
0 N2 D5 Y3 _  e4 r! ^( B1 L$ g- B<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( ^  \5 F. |. _" E" X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 w9 i: q* i* @8 M<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 ~' b5 m" Z. @# b: [& m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 n( ^6 e! p+ ^9 x8 ~7 u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  {- D: r7 J- E: K<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
& l3 d8 ?9 ?  r. I, _<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

6 B' Z! h( l' K) d( d& P 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

: c2 x* K) ~$ f& R% g8 c, Z" a这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! O$ A: d- W: o; T- e<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>