【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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1 ], f, R1 A/ ^, |! b, B我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 v# l1 X1 K" g& ^7 z0 J* iThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# O# M+ v* F, }# x6 _From the first moment we met,
7 m& _  r  z! N2 t' k/ \1 vI already loved you with all my heart
% x' P, p5 k% h& x+ |& Z0 ]8 c* B" qWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
, B  c8 V5 ?0 R$ b7 K  FIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# b7 b7 S, }* r$ X# j; p9 g# jI want to confess that I love you,
* C7 @3 D7 g( T  iBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 h5 K' N6 ]) ~% e! Z. AIf today isn’t too late,
* R- N3 j: {4 ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 b5 K. ]% _: m5 S9 |2 u7 F" CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 Y7 a, f! w0 T# BCan I entrust it to you?
  V7 \! U$ _: v+ U" f' `1 OEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
; z. O- e) A3 I% ^Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ _3 [" v) _: F! C# I" F% ZOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
! D# q! R) G+ DEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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8 W8 Y  z+ ?6 X0 W! G! r<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# X) x" d/ s  s- [. t6 O" g<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  [) Q5 b  f/ {  N4 ]<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 b! t3 ~! o/ y+ i5 |& |; x# c<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, B: A7 E! O3 S8 M<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; u; j* M2 Q( W# W9 B8 \; r( r<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 B3 B3 g! j* P1 Q" S+ M. L<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% Y/ v7 K/ B* j0 [8 H<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
! D/ X+ _3 R7 I7 N6 ?; C% ], D) P<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
; X+ [, n" L* K) \: e<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! Y/ m- T' s* K<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 I  y" d' o0 J" G7 I<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" j* [2 s  @* e: v( |2 |) W<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 k( k5 N$ ]9 R1 i' E<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; u, c& u2 F8 F# @( D* B<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ c( m. `3 s1 m/ ~8 n<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" K* X$ S. n: {# _" B8 R<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& _7 H6 q! \7 X8 W& P1 ]: J# i% [, Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* O1 z2 y$ o* y" F* w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 ~7 l9 z$ ~! ^& O- h: H, j* ~7 u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' n& [, ]) t! p7 D<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 V; W7 r4 D5 K" F# y<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! |# C- J! |4 C- K4 S4 i<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 T9 }* j3 e! \4 S" ^5 ^/ x: c4 E<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& _. W! ^: e; Q/ S<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: y3 U/ }# _$ l<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
. ~- a  @# b( c1 o0 U- o<P>但我不会 </P>
. {0 N- W' o* l6 G<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 b- H5 Z* [8 H0 q% D* d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) I* K( R( t5 }! O: C! Q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ t+ v3 L2 X& g2 s+ p8 N* [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 Q6 G4 [3 C  P+ H* t# |  g<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 P7 Z; E  z" c1 U( H4 }& J/ g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 D7 b" i9 K  x* z) }# K4 o, x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. @: D5 J3 k: p% Q( v; _) C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" E% A5 A; N) {$ o, o  G' `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  J3 X( X# [" B  E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
& H, X" x' M/ `/ L<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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# b* l7 T$ G! C# r! S这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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# X& D4 W( @" r这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>