【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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( m- |0 m# [4 D. G我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
- p% \0 z0 D( v( B& SI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 }4 T6 }: B# v; S6 I6 eIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ ]; ]# f7 r! Q8 F$ _+ HI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 K1 S; n' m1 a/ Q' S: _/ mBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- p+ M6 P! m! g: eIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; q; _3 k& y7 z# FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 r3 g8 q) ^( ~9 i, oEntrust my love within your heart
7 y8 p% m' v& s' ?' }! I' `9 RLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 p0 M( b) l5 _# ^# D0 cBut I never did
) f/ O5 y) p8 {, ?  y; FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% B1 `1 _$ ~- f! j& q- m0 fI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( T- }. Y' X: [, ?! |; JCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

+ V1 Y' [  m6 U/ ]/ n% S$ O' M, S<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
; l: V; |) ]0 H3 p3 ?<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
9 N: z( f1 z' {: q5 a<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
1 r: d9 m5 c9 \5 t- C<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 H- b% A+ M! d; s1 y) i<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! {5 Q% \' d) U/ w; D<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 N" @% \% S2 g0 [- D) \+ N<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
8 Y2 W0 a  r* _% x<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! m7 C+ w  ^, d7 ?/ o5 E<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- s' e, }  d/ W& s; \1 N- R7 U<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 p* m0 }% |3 Y/ i2 q5 ]<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 ]$ U0 X. B1 M5 e" A- s9 E2 b4 q' n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
& g9 L) f/ `" X1 i4 P<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 [% `- R+ d. G5 l) b<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. v8 F% H! k/ M" C, h, Q2 T. D<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& A9 R& M- p  @4 @<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
, e: Z9 [; a/ _: W; j" K<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  R1 Q: D- \; _5 V8 c0 Q. y7 t0 j<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; L5 [: W/ c5 O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. }- \' V6 ~* i3 s# S" }+ ?7 Y1 q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ V4 K% U. D, \! M<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 s1 I: o2 f& U4 ?8 J$ [1 c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# p$ J. k+ t: |6 ?4 ^  \- u% V. I<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) v/ P7 g3 j# H) w) g) Z. Z% C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 v9 O+ M( @6 T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& l7 u$ d4 O, X/ J  O' a$ e<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
* \0 l; _+ S$ X$ W) b9 N- i# O/ A<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ p' L1 C: N8 J$ U- y+ v( W 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

6 l# F6 S8 F# q! Y. H% l这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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; |& |. x1 ]; Y! K<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 ?7 R, F5 R6 l9 ~<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>