【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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3 r0 }4 J) x- N& g0 f我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
3 U5 j( G# M  H9 W# G) N5 VI already loved you with all my heart
5 b* k3 W: P9 R# ~/ @# I% EWe meet and talk everyday,
2 Z! m; m' _4 {But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
, n: p1 G7 Z3 J0 tIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 a& t+ m0 E) J# W2 e! r: [- BI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
5 o/ P' @6 Z: C# y+ C! M' O% g+ E$ OWhy is it so difficult to express?
4 t, b2 F& G0 S  y& W9 C& Y2 bI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 E$ @1 N& N' A$ ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, O5 r& F2 n. K. t# U8 i$ I) pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
4 ]. Y7 w! g. [Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 _& W$ j2 K0 H9 z% d0 Y; e- rBut I never did
: s- G/ b% M. uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# r9 d( E( x' BIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 @6 Y3 b) ~8 p2 a( yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 \7 [" C$ q+ w& r+ MCan I entrust it to you?
/ B/ R: x: M4 a. `4 W) O, ]Entrust my love within your heart
: \& ]1 A2 J' P2 M( l" h( U  A, e/ UCan I entrust it to you?
* A4 [# r5 Y$ T0 p0 z6 w( NEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! |3 T' {: @+ a' S0 F% ?7 F<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: T% @+ a6 d# W8 T& A2 {" L<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
; h$ {1 a" X, z8 Z; H" u# `<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 L4 ~* d+ {$ C4 i) L<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ Y) y" X/ V5 C' Z7 n. \0 t<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! z/ X5 ^7 |8 Y! y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 m/ r. B: o0 y: L<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 G+ Z' c0 T" o/ I0 w<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 T; a+ l$ B! C5 ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; A& U: z0 K. V( m/ x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 r6 u# c1 O* r, f1 j+ |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! b4 t; _7 R3 t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: J7 a6 B8 r! X+ z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 ]" [( I, c$ d: f; R7 g% q$ C<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 m# x0 _1 l" c+ }4 L<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
$ X% U+ W3 C# X4 u5 o<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* s$ _+ E0 I$ M" _: K( P<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 `# R! G! F3 h' O0 m. l: q3 p<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
& q8 e: Y  l5 `/ `9 Q/ B) [<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# ~7 C- |2 U9 W) p<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; S; {! b) i: k+ |- Q( v/ J: }<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 j. P5 j: \* i3 f<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 a% D, Z6 w1 ]- x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. L1 o$ b0 s. n  u$ x<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) t+ ]5 s1 d$ }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. y& u0 E# Z3 ]# [8 x5 |" `2 X7 `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& W1 d/ X2 o0 d& l6 R: `4 o) T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 n; H+ A( U9 A: X6 S4 A9 U<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 a- ?, o6 ?' i5 T0 b 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 f) u$ r+ K0 I这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 t+ p* F, {5 g<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>