【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
( `$ j3 L5 J' K' C9 s8 I4 S  `% hThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
  a; o7 y) g- }! S8 v, s" oWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% B: b/ ?1 L5 P% a0 s+ b, |If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. R' Z8 I+ K! ?0 P6 m4 V# E& TI would probably know how you feel
$ T1 f! t5 ^, v( |  c0 [) {7 eLove… just the word love
- C* E) W3 Q6 D" `* ]; c/ H2 LWhy is it so difficult to express?
% y) k, y. ~  X% t- x9 qI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: H* \! E& |. Q3 I* M5 KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. r8 `: }. ]  W7 DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
/ |8 A; Z7 M& Z0 S& `Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% [; U' Z( ?3 J+ V: S+ k! GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
3 |* E8 C9 Q. PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ f( k) }3 [% r8 Y* R1 t( fCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
  U; N# N/ y; kEntrust my love within your heart
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. C' D' S, p" A: V[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
; b/ [! ]9 ^3 ?# S1 y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, g) X' m. D2 K$ P0 n  y, t, \<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 Y. Z( e4 [9 F7 F' z# k! l7 s<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- s  s7 G: ]. E9 V! B( N# w: ]  @<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% J6 l" W9 l! j% ], N4 }2 G+ w7 M1 Y<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% G4 f6 R! @2 q: W* I# E<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 n+ U- E2 C! ?+ R* G4 r4 w<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) X# x+ x! o# k+ Y) D9 _; G) y& u8 F<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 F! }7 @6 M  v. n7 r! m9 J2 q<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ F) k6 f" L$ |$ k- O5 F. y7 K<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ d% m8 A6 C  W6 j. t6 `$ l* d<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ I! @$ M4 m2 h' ]$ V<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; L- d8 w3 `* q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( g# R' j; k! T9 A& g<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; I; I, Y/ X  c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' h* p) j4 ?1 D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 P9 ~$ E! L2 j7 }  w; s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 G( b( @  u$ y# ?* {: r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( l7 _  K! t9 _1 A% [9 B  w) I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ Z6 ]: f* _3 Y$ e8 x  ~. A( [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 U% ^" p; T1 f<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
; p9 z* t+ G. A: w, n* N& I<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
4 s: o% ?" F* i  O( D2 B<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ i6 H3 q+ T1 k" ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
. w& ?" ?$ N( m; _; {: d<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' m4 ]& I9 a; ~1 w3 r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! k3 `1 q& D6 \$ o/ L<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. W& A9 O1 L& X+ P; G3 V, L2 @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; a6 d( a+ i" ]' n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 Y' v  K! {* k, G8 [. {; _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, m) _- p3 f, [2 D* k5 N* t6 V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 G% t3 c9 c8 v: T, I; |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 \% u9 K4 L, W; X+ r3 E* W* _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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' v7 g6 ]& d0 S这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- f( q6 [- z, m) y' C<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>