【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ j# W( b- u$ m: n9 s- QThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
5 l& l8 I6 B4 }3 T9 O* z% NFrom the first moment we met,
$ A7 ?4 s5 _  S+ f# p  EI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
3 J8 ^% _3 i, N3 H: g" u3 `. tBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
( q( r4 m( s) {, e- ~' K8 |* qIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
- i" ~, `  G: ^! W9 rLove… just the word love
* l* J0 T! p% j$ @7 C" uWhy is it so difficult to express?
& T3 G( ]2 I1 y* \# s8 rI want to confess that I love you,
6 ^" x3 k8 B# ~6 [" |- dBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 {' Y' v8 \+ h# n4 g- K& T: K; pIf today isn’t too late,
9 J: Z4 x$ \- |  v" o$ H) A: G: LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) O1 R: Z1 R& kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% R' C  e0 ]) ^, g( C- BCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: ]! V4 X8 }( lLove… just the word love
  ^# _4 v5 j) y, iWhy is it so difficult to express?
' f) h) ?3 d' V  G2 p( uI want to confess that I love you,
" n4 k2 a" ]: E5 P% Y. uBut I never did
% p+ ]7 l6 e' L8 s" Q2 R& lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 h$ I2 J+ t9 x6 N2 I+ R/ jIf today isn’t too late,
; U# D3 X) D, h) o2 c  p# `I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
' o% t2 X; _* c3 SEntrust my love within your heart
5 I- _7 X% l! Y; TCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
+ J  T5 v% ]& `  k: ?0 C# L<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- i# A) j; H; o9 e) L- E; K<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
0 H' @9 \1 I' H! ~8 f: Q$ s. S4 O' z<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 ?, D, q+ U# e1 V<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 l1 Q0 }4 N+ c# R  _7 @<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
. c+ M: ?' E& Q. u' F<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 ^8 }( f. |4 }0 V8 F' z. ?<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- D% G- T/ }# W. R" ~5 R! b; i<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
3 b% ?4 ^0 G8 l8 S6 X<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 _$ }* x. i+ z* b8 ]<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' H0 p0 n/ J  L0 B+ s6 q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 a; w6 k5 s5 |6 H" j<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- ?" p. i% ^4 w) y7 y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# @& W3 S1 S4 t* A7 c( k1 n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% a+ f* [9 a- O7 u7 |, J3 N  }- L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: q- n/ `2 t9 [7 q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ [" ]; U6 b" z# g  \( |' K<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: r9 I6 a. ?8 _) ]1 p' A0 B<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
' p  D: `( W2 e) c* ]# }<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ _9 M3 z7 ?* n5 z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
. [  H5 ^% |7 U, E<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ ]( S- ~6 X# U: S1 ]' q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ |+ Z5 h0 R( D' _5 q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 [7 }( f- O# j" k! q8 S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( A; y/ ^( Y" O9 O/ j$ M5 Q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( @3 R* T0 j+ w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ }: h+ b* i! ?; a& O<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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4 o& w  t* }" P7 l$ @  H这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 z: b6 K" ~4 b, V" z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>