【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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2 a; {( G. c( q5 V我另将歌词附在此。
6 |3 f: b1 M' g6 nThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
2 X. L7 Q+ I1 o9 A( k# W- F5 oWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# Q# j4 v) V( s! }0 `7 p  mIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 l: [* z0 P6 k! o" V) }; Z1 uI would probably know how you feel
" u1 U3 x( U4 O$ ALove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. z9 K1 o) C* T  d3 H$ x/ @But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 E+ v( ?& y4 V) E* F, ?% I( c* e( xEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
& o) w" p& T' Q1 [1 T- o" lBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, |: o, S4 C4 S7 C4 {% ~I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

, J+ e1 v* Q3 f5 R9 N% x9 ~- C" k[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% X/ }- X2 r, s6 J6 ^1 r<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. a/ y/ l6 s% Y2 U* h; i/ _<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
) M/ r$ T. \) A% L8 u$ Q$ d2 Y<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* O. J% q- B4 i" D<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, H8 b- A5 u. Q0 g% e<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
* ]  d1 `, B/ m' ^8 I5 d<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ {% }6 I0 @* m( \/ z/ h9 K7 Q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
# l: {. b# Q8 V<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 p7 E6 D  G1 s6 u2 q$ ^<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 C. f. I5 I6 L% `<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 p/ q) R  E9 o' s<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
' h8 s: R' |% \' D6 ^7 W" w<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 W- K9 W: ^$ @& G  U  k% M' i<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% V+ l. s3 R6 l' U) t, y3 j<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 p, l1 l- ?) {( e* {& M* x<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 x( q6 f+ u  B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 d6 T$ D; _$ N% V<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: q; t: m0 m: `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 ^  v8 X  Z! V9 n" ~- C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 `2 @! T  i/ R3 P$ `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 e0 I1 o1 C+ O  d<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
9 P! C' O3 [; }8 n( J4 E. j9 U<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; ?0 }" X5 }3 O! S( G+ _5 x( v<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ r1 P6 t) w" u" a: p' Q2 ^6 n<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 [1 h2 M; O  s" T<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 E6 ~9 i7 p5 U0 C) u  q<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
* P) \* Q6 x- r, B4 c1 x<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
. G  x( k1 o+ V<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
& |0 |" B' h2 r6 r8 h<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: n# y. j- J" \7 a: `; ~: i4 z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 ], ?) y) L5 D: N/ Z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" A* O& ^5 t" z; p5 K; o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) d- s+ f$ z, C) r: Q. Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 o: ^1 h# a& e1 `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- L9 b) a; R# {<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>