【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# k. @& [) ^' s- c/ k& C0 E$ I( qThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 v2 Y  z9 I. k) \+ v7 v3 YFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
+ ]; D$ n: X" u2 f+ Z0 CBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. ?8 n1 q0 l$ z6 {/ L" [: wBut I never did
  k7 l. h! U+ Z& k$ w. y. Z" _One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ A9 {+ y' H% p* SIf today isn’t too late,
! f+ o2 ^4 L7 E. R) [2 `8 M8 qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, x; `. N8 U; G6 sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 C( T; ]5 h+ I- h7 fCan I entrust it to you?
6 s! a/ m  m% _( ^2 BEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
3 ]6 ^; [% {: [Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; F9 A7 m- F4 @$ K! O4 _* yIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 T+ ?. I8 |; k* |  fCan I entrust it to you?
; ]- ]8 e2 S1 |+ |Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
# ]( P: X' m+ ?. gEntrust my love within your heart
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, M$ t# S/ u- V2 K# n& o, L  f# p[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 `# E' |: z# F5 G1 K<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
7 }( ]! H5 v( n0 M, G<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* B1 }" f/ C/ X2 b3 l+ T<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
( h5 G6 y6 A4 Y3 P5 L0 @<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
" X) V( G! f) k<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 v% ^, [9 B7 B6 j# {8 g<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
5 B8 F- `, E8 b) r8 |2 x<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! k% y( R4 y- ^% a/ r<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 m1 V9 C% b* Y0 G( n<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 K6 `" T. \9 L, H<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* i, X; v6 ~% \<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# ]+ c4 `/ X/ e<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, X5 D* h" c4 I" D- [1 H7 s<P>我想说我爱你</P>
, Z! |; e3 c/ {! q; S. I<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
, X2 o% n- w; ~. t<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ e, o' d2 ^" E: b! }<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" Q1 R0 [' R# N) D3 }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 ~- X1 L' z. C<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 A& L+ g; g. j4 [: q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' m3 ~. M- x% g3 J5 G( a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  t+ o- A' L: t9 x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 `  J$ T" g% i( t<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ [" }, h+ n1 K; Q% \; P<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
2 g1 t' h, d2 x7 L/ C# v<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
' G9 a+ u, O+ W5 F/ Z& V! S<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
% n, N( l! n5 G% M/ {! J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 U% t. L2 `! |9 G. }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( b; ]! G0 h0 }0 E0 k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 W6 ^, u; u( m2 V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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0 {3 R: q2 e5 F) q, @0 B1 Z+ A- f这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! Q& h/ |5 X0 D. F<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>