【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
5 L* @$ F0 N* i. B  N- ^4 ^The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 O  E& D" y7 c9 @+ P4 TFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
" G0 G7 F/ q/ P. e$ wBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ e$ c  ^1 o# ^% EIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
9 O# K, X9 o8 c' U7 [" KWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, c$ L( x3 h) z) l6 |) _  ^, PBut I never did
7 Q& l3 E2 _% z8 W5 LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
! v3 x) o0 b( k5 y$ REntrust my love within your heart
5 Z# n$ f( `6 lLove… just the word love
' Y3 c: w" e; {8 Y; V* y( Y- PWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 L/ r# m9 `* u) z" ?0 J! @  k3 r+ HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 p) E+ q) c3 H2 u3 hIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
6 E( c# w/ A: ?. G0 r( a- KEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, g5 ^& M5 k0 |- ?. m; o<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
% t* F7 ?+ g- s! o2 e) K- q<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 C2 f5 ~5 W8 J<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
0 I% N6 A5 c: m2 ]5 a( [6 M<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 {/ p9 Z$ @  V# {<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; e7 r: e5 ^' y* H9 f8 S9 M<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" ]5 N  u. M4 J+ g$ x+ u: F<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 o, s9 J  b/ g& X<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ E7 C( _( v- {2 O; h# @! S5 B. Y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
* {; A0 T+ T3 }6 v, J<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! @1 Z& P- @4 M' {  M/ e<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- `7 t7 a6 Q3 b& c2 T<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 e; A1 q8 E2 b" E0 b4 i<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ ]- K1 L- e0 U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; ^3 G# a# p2 B& s' d& V9 F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
' Z( o+ J3 T9 p# f7 n<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
( r1 Q) {; Y' |- l6 X<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: Z7 {# h" E& {7 ]7 s* A6 _<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 N9 r) u! L" ]; T<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
1 j) [, V) ?, r" X% b% j<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 A) U) |- C# j' }# R<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# R0 ~1 ?8 |% p1 L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 Z9 [3 W( @' M9 j3 G<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, E4 z# X7 P, H4 q/ Z( c; c# d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 ~* \. ]0 w1 H; k9 N<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 d; X6 M" I5 S4 H( P; c4 q3 f* {. I 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

, Y' o' L7 \: l! C$ G这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 M& _% b) v. A8 n. d0 U& u这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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& f3 U, j4 W7 {4 S+ G<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 O- h4 H+ V8 U+ A/ ?4 b& T<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! \" R1 m( O5 A& w6 a) f4 N6 Z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>