【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- m, ~7 b& _- z6 R- h- N3 @That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
2 r' V$ }: d7 f4 L% Y5 C, ?We meet and talk everyday,
% a& h7 u/ y- \! R7 G: j* l( ]But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
" R' [$ r7 `# z' {- @" D0 bWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 R2 r; Q: j/ m2 AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 E0 B' s) V0 z4 e! oCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) v$ T4 r- o. B- i6 e  r0 ?' w9 cLove… just the word love
1 {8 c7 k* w3 ]% C1 x  }Why is it so difficult to express?
9 p( n8 y, A; s; w' A% dI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
  g6 |2 ^  F4 s. f7 O/ u0 `, lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% Q7 |3 |" C2 |5 dIf today isn’t too late,
, s" O. Q% x& Q) V4 H( R. eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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( a+ |/ _/ {$ @& A[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  N) Y( Z+ a" v( x* T<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# t1 L- f7 y0 }<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( y; }8 z0 K  K% d1 v& k<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ o$ j5 u+ _7 y% o2 k: ~<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 e% g& `9 C  e<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
8 C; R6 F: x+ }$ S<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
6 V6 T1 d1 ~7 B) M1 U) e' a* ^, C<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
; D/ y, m+ U1 }+ d4 g' [& w& l<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) T9 c- V. B& ?- i! P<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
+ p6 z& F4 c8 n4 |% ^<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: v  d7 @( ~1 f! x<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ J5 U1 ?" r, u  y( S8 D; i7 @! E  Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; c& j1 g* C; w* G  y* c- @, ]8 ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  O% p, j" H8 x! e8 x$ c' A9 w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 d2 p4 Y3 V( _/ C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  r& y0 b. f0 W& _6 [<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
$ {7 c! t- y" F* o! v6 R7 ~. _9 Y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 K# ^; n1 V  ~( p1 Q0 C<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
1 _& Q  K* }$ C2 \2 A8 M. ~<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ X0 T; v3 r7 w6 \7 L0 x+ A5 O<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 L3 {" P4 ^( }9 R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 l/ O+ ]) t5 L4 U: X8 S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 B( P8 Y+ W. L' K3 v9 b<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 G0 h# d' }9 w* k3 i  v 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

% \: d* N7 b% O/ y这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 a4 l6 l1 W. Q/ d! J<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>