【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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7 z0 w4 D! M5 ~& `; t' ]8 Z$ o我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ K$ r/ t5 z1 A6 D$ w# p" V) c9 kFrom the first moment we met,
# n2 X7 m2 q' O5 a5 ?I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
: X" M3 t; X- G. QBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 t% n: L. P: J6 d& [If today isn’t too late,
% @6 M3 x4 a, E2 m7 ?7 E, sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 O) J2 v; R" W" R/ P& }6 OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 ]+ }+ n$ V* L8 ^5 g/ qCan I entrust it to you?
- ]% U0 s. s5 `5 t: `/ AEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ G! w$ ~8 I  ?0 }$ j" yI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 a% ?4 |6 o7 a! x0 A0 b( [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( [9 j8 ]7 f- E- v0 o3 CCan I entrust it to you?
$ i. z# n8 k4 T3 V4 ZEntrust my love within your heart
( w8 A4 R, F. a  v/ D: `) LCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
$ |& l& h4 m# R( p* e<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 x& E& u1 D  b( ]7 z; G5 ^<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 T6 H9 y5 s% _<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, j5 ~) @, Y: y" q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ V5 \3 X, R6 c8 Y$ ~* P<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 E: j$ Z) |! ?& p  j  j& _3 H& w<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  M( d' N+ V/ y0 J" C; n+ q4 [  E<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
; a  F, L/ W: z2 b% O<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
. @: K6 y0 Z! L# e" r; e<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; l  Z# X* x* b% B  N7 I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! w+ ~/ M# A# `4 {7 m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& p& }- E( u! X9 J. r) n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! `( H- F2 [: X% k<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# B  T# O  B& _+ I4 e! p<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ G) ?! k/ U& |+ c# a<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
( \5 M) l3 a3 J2 h<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; k9 i$ x' {$ X; K3 d, o4 |<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 `+ B/ q% O  Z4 H* P8 W3 u<P>But I never did </P>
/ l: K: a' L5 Q4 q, `! i3 w. }8 E# V<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ M( S. U$ Q& V+ G<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) x. t0 N$ K. k/ f: R+ d<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, Y* ]# W, v0 ]7 A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 X( l- U- j6 ?; J! m$ v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. K+ X5 C. x4 y6 P+ C. Q# t<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- s1 M' ~( N) {3 B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 G. d3 D/ _& o0 V( S2 ?" [<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# k1 F! G: T8 ?9 o$ z1 d<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ x4 m% b. ?  C<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>