【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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: j5 R/ m+ ^# c4 E5 m) ?) I: Y我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& P8 @1 h" Z9 v# v8 _( l! Q% |That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
. i6 X: `8 ^+ y$ Q; h+ uI already loved you with all my heart
; s- _( O3 w" i6 m- QWe meet and talk everyday,
# G- ?: z( I2 `. `1 H. \But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 J2 W5 ^6 q+ mI would probably know how you feel
) s3 V  ?- E7 E  X$ R2 aLove… just the word love
) W! K) K3 V* F- Y8 M- nWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
" T) [/ ^) s( h% U# _2 R1 l/ }One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" \1 P, |/ u: g7 l! a0 ALove… just the word love
4 l9 I" S* m4 ^$ e: ^$ WWhy is it so difficult to express?
7 J8 d1 I+ s% ?8 `# mI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 `9 `0 a' p! pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 S" M" r5 a! Z' J( kCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
& U8 t* m$ I3 k: }9 f) IEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

) J/ j6 B$ S; }$ B( D0 ^' x( g8 [<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
! y* l: p" V1 B7 B<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 I8 Z8 g' d0 m7 J  B# I1 i<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. L+ K) }0 ]5 z( @9 a2 R<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% n# o: e$ V: o; K; q% ~/ u<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. _1 `, T9 d; l<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# f# R% e% P, d" z+ R<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 j2 C: x7 K9 `' q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 W$ M6 C9 W3 u5 V. R* {<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: G# n. Z4 @7 O( M- w4 `2 Z. H<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; Y+ F& B2 w; c& r0 \<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
: H7 H' g* _! r& [. v; {<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( [, S7 w' k6 X5 E8 r<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! Q/ m0 x9 t! g<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% g& M) d/ u" }- ]9 ~. I# [8 R<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 y- n1 ^* v4 J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& G  z5 Z  d8 Y$ S4 V6 I4 o! i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 F9 P. M7 g2 x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 U1 q1 ]! h+ K<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ d9 ~( M+ z# p9 d8 Y" c<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
5 k* U3 g) J: V# m<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
0 _  R; E9 Z$ w: T, L<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- b& C1 d" u0 c& s<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
4 o- `5 L( j  W8 ^: w0 V, U$ L<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ H: N4 g: a0 D$ |# _7 b9 [, m<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( u5 \, Z! c- W8 \3 }$ Z8 a<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 G  E7 w3 S" M& q+ {9 |7 \<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' r/ u. }, z" u& N7 E<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( w4 @- i  |, g$ o. ?6 @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! l4 Q/ q- b# P+ J) j* e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: ~4 ]/ l9 L) `! w% v7 B3 ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
3 J) x! T. Y8 S4 y9 o8 r+ i. p# }<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>