【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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0 X5 X. l' C% S) Z我另将歌词附在此。
8 F' i2 m! w+ B/ P- b2 LThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
: ^6 b! I' {7 u) H# mThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
0 e8 O: S; e( u! U7 _3 y" {3 kWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
2 g. |' _. Z, o3 f2 @8 jLove… just the word love
, P- B0 u$ p$ T* A1 fWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
; A/ X; ^& C: _2 s! q3 V( QOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  Z! P6 V0 k* P; h/ |2 N/ v  yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: m5 p) P5 D) Q( y/ r6 rCan I entrust it to you?
. I% ^" ^' e3 [& ?* M9 K+ @Entrust my love within your heart
: \8 b1 l2 Y0 ~2 m7 c3 f2 d0 FLove… just the word love
# b% H& P- k5 R4 u; A  g9 jWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ u! \  T9 ~4 g5 e( l) K1 w0 ?I want to confess that I love you,
  l. }) n$ X" iBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, x/ O8 S" y3 sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" J; Y. z8 B& O7 tCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 m1 K! S2 {/ |' e, w<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' Y, y* }; }) x( U<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ f2 `" `. N* Q! L<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 N% c. s" h! k/ p4 [* V$ ?<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' b3 V; d4 Q; Z9 q. Q4 }; G, N) P<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 g* t1 U' n6 e. U& ^# j) ?6 b; O<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 m1 g& B6 s* S! s<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' I' e% Z& Q/ g+ t/ p<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 C5 W6 p% `7 t4 n<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 u; h9 M) d$ g/ w/ s8 m; |<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 {' m5 s! I0 [3 X  R. |& M<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: e0 C7 M! I7 C  j<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& }6 H& u! M! Z) y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& R* m0 o0 U7 ~+ K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 ]$ Y$ r6 I' P& s, j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
3 g# u8 [( t0 }5 H! y( ]<P>但我不会 </P>
( W$ N# {9 ?! {1 D* n6 O0 k<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( _' Z  [: h  R<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 u! _; w" a- \8 P: j, C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: g0 T' ^9 |8 v& O! g1 a' [! q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% v4 E8 E6 D/ g+ A4 W% e! \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 c  w$ O# d" a1 ^<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 R* k1 C8 p5 g) t2 ^; Z5 L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: Y, ]9 M0 n1 ^* i<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* h/ d1 j$ B+ J0 M3 |# v& H/ K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 D, F- C3 _1 Z- l! O( u<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 U4 p* h6 j) P<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 j  w6 p0 g) i1 Z; j  p1 o# e. E这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ F1 E% @- ]( I7 Q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- f) X( r& s0 n2 K# A- y) ~<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>