【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
' W( A* n) \: yLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ c" R# w0 x5 c9 Q0 p9 uI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; L1 F5 Z3 J: }# Z) F1 p( X9 a2 \If today isn’t too late,
1 K9 P: N/ [0 o# I! S0 ^; @! y; OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 o, i. K8 Q( Y6 _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 b4 E! Z! P# [% d; c6 @* f& JCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
3 o$ r; u% S$ [, c( ^Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( o0 u9 B! w, d% x, M+ }( OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 R# u; y$ T  d1 uIf today isn’t too late,
* j9 k, u; a) f# H- S) c) [: [8 ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ e$ T4 ]6 R3 m3 k; E; t" o" iEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
9 F( z  N* g" x0 @) Z1 MEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

6 g2 a& X9 m7 D, T) P<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% ^& v- v  j, g/ {3 O8 F<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% o, d; b% h) T# v* z: y$ U<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 m. Y3 I- B6 a: u$ M6 O1 h( s* r$ X<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" ^6 c$ C) M( v( j+ `* J) t<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
4 h2 d7 o- v( P<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
0 V0 Q7 m5 D( K! R  l5 M1 h<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 E0 D) y+ ~# {' E2 k<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  Q1 @& ~" g& s9 f" M: v<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
1 K! c# d2 J1 ?# R/ Q" m<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 T7 I( \" L+ H( E8 p. z) H<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) |$ y1 h+ |3 t" N. q' O<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& v9 _& X7 J% _! U, v6 w<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 s2 N4 c5 n. ]/ l/ V: Z! t2 T<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  C& x; S: \9 u# A8 {  w6 a8 B- i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: q8 u- Q+ R6 P( x7 s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" N7 U0 L# u: d/ k& W4 h0 s<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) X  Q7 K/ w  P9 L* A. i7 F5 o<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) y& ^$ q1 _5 P0 E0 V1 G+ V<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, R& \- }) R( v3 G8 ], i+ l1 @<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  w& d0 H+ Y8 K" g0 h# e2 m3 H<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 p; q: p1 o1 K<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; k, h( d$ U. G  v! T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 p2 y: M' p! |* i/ J# n" ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 S! |9 O1 a* a" k( w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! A7 Y5 Y7 h/ j( m" X  _<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* [2 W! w4 v- y9 T; D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
# U7 G& F) X% @. ]<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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/ {9 `0 X! `1 l$ R3 K! C 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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# d/ a8 {) m; T3 ~9 |这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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* ^' d3 {+ H, u  I- w5 q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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" O* Q" |; ]4 U: Q  Z3 A) L<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, U7 b- _) l- M0 v8 ?8 _+ n<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>