【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 ], e1 _' }& r- |6 }$ T( ZThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
: w; h5 m7 U5 T7 i6 MI already loved you with all my heart
- Y% ~, H  R( h( ?We meet and talk everyday,
0 m( P7 i5 M5 f% V" W9 _- {But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
! A4 r* t+ ^; Z9 Q; P+ zIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, `/ r' b, l5 ^. e( TI would probably know how you feel
6 n: w/ ~9 ?; {4 Y. pLove… just the word love
2 [! b( S9 \" I6 r! U7 QWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) q4 P" \5 H% N- ]+ F8 m% SBut I never did
- e1 S! I  K# ~% Q3 R" XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 q3 U- J9 O+ \7 \/ r/ GI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: C; v$ y. y6 F& I- y; X1 L& Y2 K: TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 q: j1 v1 E) H- |. w9 @! hI want to confess that I love you,
; l  M' z* K% {* EBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% I% D, m2 p2 a; D. ^+ A5 lIf today isn’t too late,
8 Q: x' a7 M- ]  sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ O/ J) ?3 n% r; `Can I entrust it to you?
, g4 q# L9 e3 }$ f# nEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

4 k, l/ k+ Q0 e4 M$ H) j& ]9 S" L<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# N9 n% X) K3 I" `<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* E6 \) B4 `) i# M& {<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
, w5 J0 w2 l8 x' W; K9 W<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' U3 o  M+ |$ s  R% c<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- k+ D; E) u  e* x) [<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
8 O5 K) \6 H, }4 [0 j) ~<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ L: |. W' B, I; t: K+ ^/ }( P) f3 S<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, c* v5 d& Z" l0 V2 s) U<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
) B# v/ V/ o% m$ i) \<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- `% `( B+ s/ q' y, E: d$ y6 F<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ O, y0 {" C& H' g<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ l. X$ u4 D* \* d3 d7 k3 X( C. c<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
+ x) l; d8 ?8 w<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  R% d& e6 }1 A<P>但我不会</P>
3 X6 ~9 m0 A( A, n; A<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; m% {4 _* j1 h$ T: f* j4 S) N<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ g& I3 U" F! e! L) G0 X- q<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& E' F: b% |! T/ F' j' S- T. }6 {6 v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 R" t# u! |/ t9 B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 |: z& h* w$ j" x* P0 g0 `* i5 D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: X" F8 s8 m+ y, A<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( B, V1 z6 U' n" u( _2 i, D<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) m+ [. j' e1 v6 R; Z<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 g% M. M8 B# ]$ b. n1 N5 G<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
! [  i( m' L3 B4 y( I5 ~<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* H2 o& _. Y& X<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 ^4 m! u" ^  f% x' J2 Z9 {9 {5 s<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, g: [( }1 [% M* n+ E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* _  x4 x" f5 ]4 a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* T7 ?8 \, S' v) R8 g. ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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! r- K% Z5 U& n5 d2 x  ~这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- ^) |! w- P7 }0 m$ k/ g; }<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>