【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
# g: L3 B, g  O( U. |+ F1 kThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 W: R1 V. k9 @7 Z) q2 n. S1 DFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
) c/ D& N1 \+ X" eBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
4 D  D0 W  Q3 I' d: M. D/ uI would probably know how you feel
$ [8 I; p. u, S! Z# aLove… just the word love
3 e4 G3 G' j6 X8 ]: G1 W1 y! vWhy is it so difficult to express?
- u% H* c) n. m! t; _I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, B% o% b. U# M, O4 m$ @9 f+ OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& a9 `, B' j. c9 p" k1 ^4 T6 j* S% B2 AIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 C" U. {1 b+ a8 |; \+ |Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
8 i7 T& L! _( p( L2 p! x2 c0 hWhy is it so difficult to express?
4 C' t9 @0 h# \I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 x+ W4 [* u2 p3 D# R- d# sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
/ n' t- y" W% r! ?% d% TCan I entrust it to you?
. n9 z: _! O$ n0 X; ^- zEntrust my love within your heart

1 r' S$ M6 e; f1 N[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

% Y+ h7 l7 b; f6 f) a% u0 U  ]<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
+ b" e. A9 d" A" u$ u7 Z; Q; q% `<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ w% S; @( d$ G$ E! }3 W" R3 T6 C<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 C- I/ {3 d4 v0 T( r# E<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 W; b1 x# ^& S  W2 y4 l<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 y7 F8 m7 o! K+ w. ?4 I; [<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 v( x! A' r6 }# r( }" E7 p; P<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
# g- T3 ?7 K' _- Y- X5 ]. S# p<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) B6 X5 ]0 ]7 Y5 R) n$ a<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ V2 H; \- ]( G3 t" W<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 y5 F$ j3 Z7 Y0 a4 o( E<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
+ p8 V- ?( v1 d4 E  q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. B" N* x: s. D- G<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 z) B: z' S1 w& {* F/ G' d<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 N& z8 |" ^& m+ j+ H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 J, ^7 t$ D4 Q) D% s/ i- H<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
: ^$ q0 n& c& ~+ \<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
) A& R3 _( Y3 A! l+ f6 c<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
% ~6 a% m2 }- c! \7 j* W* p% n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 w$ C& G2 ], e/ x; J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# S" X9 h7 d; A( Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% g9 b6 y( P( E6 w& _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ p4 z. y, b/ _, Z/ ~* c7 Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 o3 I3 \9 Z0 u! U4 }<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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$ V' _$ r9 ~" x& s5 l这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ v1 P$ t5 X' E( g/ x! _<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>