【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
# L7 A' @9 L5 |- w+ X* BBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! X1 C8 a* E, e6 cI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
6 E! X$ V  V) c! mWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. \" K5 H% z- FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ R. s7 p4 w+ {! K9 I7 dI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 z" M& l: f% r+ YEntrust my love within your heart
7 \1 B$ d9 [9 S# oLove… just the word love
0 |& w# W" N$ {2 m  _6 bWhy is it so difficult to express?
! `7 l9 ?9 D1 ?I want to confess that I love you,
  B6 H6 U- [9 K# B/ C+ EBut I never did
, O: C1 T6 O. ?# T6 V$ qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 l  `+ o, G# i9 @3 @5 q, y- Q& pIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
% q3 s% k4 S# aCan I entrust it to you?
$ P$ ~5 f* l1 P/ z9 [; ]; f' UEntrust my love within your heart
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8 \+ g( k4 z& `$ ~7 W+ [[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  X* D( t  |  ?& D% n$ f<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, N( H' w% R2 V3 q" o<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
  t: l0 `% N, {* V: A! k9 |9 u* l<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* H* c. w# p+ b+ X% |<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 g- x7 g+ k* r# v% {- D<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 W- j/ m0 S1 M' y# b<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ ^; K+ F& j/ O8 d6 w+ a<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ i  r5 l0 Q0 H& k<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- a- S0 B0 f# Z$ [1 \8 W<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" l8 g- ^' e+ |& R6 D8 T. [<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# n0 S; s0 |8 ~/ x<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
- {5 D- `+ f( D: w<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 ?0 r% k9 C2 s1 v<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& o9 o3 p& Y0 S7 o<P>但我不会</P>
( w7 |0 S7 Y) G$ v<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ k: O7 U1 h7 L! d  k<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 ~2 Y2 m" j' A  T* a3 X& L/ ]<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& @6 F1 [+ u. I9 C<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- w3 ~1 H& _2 Z( z- |' D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% ~- \2 G5 q% s6 l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; T! p% M+ {! Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
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<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ }$ N7 [$ L  Y! i8 u6 i+ e<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
$ w  D! }4 A" d( K<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 [: U1 X+ }/ J4 ~2 n* Y9 H% ^<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
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4 `0 r+ ]" a' x, i8 M0 b' E<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, H0 t, C9 N9 r. {2 ~<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* u; L0 Y# G) e- F0 |<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
( l% A6 N+ G! d1 a' q4 n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ P2 V( d, M! g: f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 d, }% ?6 @! Y: L0 H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" b6 C; H# o9 Q) s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ V$ ?% z% r" I: j8 X9 d0 ^) T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- F- C5 b# y( q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) ^) ~) }3 T3 \- v, i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, ^0 w/ T, f' ?& F% S- ]<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>