【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
4 m0 y. n5 o1 W& t. Q) R( QThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
# ~! u3 p1 D5 AWhy is it so difficult to express?
# R$ h8 u; j6 b- M9 tI want to confess that I love you,
& |% b0 |# ^7 [. X( d( X- uBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 u7 P3 A5 ~! S0 y0 d6 s$ s3 x1 @5 _1 c( wIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
. I. P4 V* D( X. L3 H  n3 gEntrust my love within your heart
9 K% |8 Y1 n4 @4 M2 ~Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! F  a5 C, \4 v6 K; y2 q0 W* t; h( }I want to confess that I love you,
" z) z" X1 u2 p+ H# EBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: `8 w' W" V  M- UI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ b( m2 m  d3 E. L# Z; M8 FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; G* v5 m( Q/ g+ s$ B' C8 ~Entrust my love within your heart
. A% `- G$ Y; o/ B$ l/ |0 F1 i9 RCan I entrust it to you?
7 a; y1 v3 ~3 [3 G. S* i+ j# ]Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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0 M1 A2 O" V7 Q; l9 n<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 X( I9 l$ w! @2 Q+ y3 A& C6 X9 [<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 m- m, r7 {, b7 o7 Y; e7 U6 n<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ N4 C. F3 P' y# [+ }<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. _% k5 N- t+ D<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
6 Z" U: W  h1 |# z4 W2 Y# p<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- p' b; u) B: p- Y2 d# A1 b" ~! r<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( _# z; P6 G: `! R<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' o8 `0 g! ?7 d9 ?$ p4 g0 o<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) d+ a, n( w: e<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
" y  X6 D( {+ W: D/ t/ {$ i<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( D$ ]1 t+ y6 |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 L' ^2 n. |2 ?9 j$ _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 v# Q9 y2 y! y6 ^8 `8 V/ N" ]<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 _, W3 Y  p. t4 |' \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* R+ E% ]. r* K2 ]  K- e. M" s( O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 U4 H' a- r, m# a% l; e# ~<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 i) A; c. D! O  u; r" [5 P9 e3 c<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
$ v( ?4 b+ E$ R: v& _<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 g- V" U6 b5 p5 I. ]( X9 @<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
* I: ?* V: N; g2 E$ A; R<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- l  P# a! r+ i& y8 f* s5 \! m<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 F. a2 n5 n1 {4 A; Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 T! V7 ^$ t' K3 J1 c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% E( `9 P1 @9 j7 v, G8 ]/ C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 Q6 [- Z5 o9 E, \1 _8 j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; T! E3 F, T9 T) a<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 B$ S8 M& j/ M% f) V" P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 |+ f6 f: q" {7 G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  T) X# s% \: T  v<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 V2 g9 q9 O) [, h) x 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 A) r( ^# M" T  V, W4 o! B这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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  t4 ~- g9 U3 i; Q. M2 T/ v<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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