【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% d  ~7 C0 x) X9 I! WFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( C! ]7 h+ b2 p" {( |I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; d4 c$ K, C6 s' j# D5 F. _0 rBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 x3 ]& b/ L' A) s/ b, @0 B' F2 II don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 [# V* Z: ~5 z% [Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
$ S: S; z6 W% M- I6 A2 eWhy is it so difficult to express?
( X- Q. }4 G/ q$ J( E. K9 I3 WI want to confess that I love you,
% o+ x: M. r% fBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
5 c# e1 f" m; nEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

) `* m% _& i7 v3 j$ V% ^( i+ o[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

8 `) a5 Q5 D- C: C) S5 n9 M<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
7 z. Q) {1 }. u2 ?9 Z2 _' w<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ n- q( J* v; d( F<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
& k1 g2 v) v% j9 ~& {<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 U; O3 i5 C  ]8 N<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 o2 g1 ?0 U" I8 s& a<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 S9 A' Q$ r! Z! [<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" B, @; Q9 ^2 ~; z. I- N/ |<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  n3 J1 U; t) I0 `, w<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  h, h+ H, E  t; g3 z( A9 N<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# L9 k3 n4 q2 g5 Z<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 D# l4 H+ L( t" {* ]2 x; d<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ L+ T& @: w' H<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* r% [1 e) U1 N3 `' ~) N3 i<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 V1 Z% u2 C8 B4 g$ e; G+ L<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; v/ R" H# g. i5 P' B. `<P>但我不会</P>
# L/ w2 ^! `9 g3 D& y9 r' e, [<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 D. V3 B) Y& i) I4 L& ~3 H<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ L' L7 P' k# d& ^# u$ ^" d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 c3 U. A9 r4 y% i<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) q8 ^# K) e; O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ @: ^' M% R0 _/ J. i  `. o<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* y. j2 q, V* }<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
' h( t4 B- S+ V- R: P/ N<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 G6 _) J7 n5 V/ i$ F' i<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 u, s/ _" r9 m) d* m4 U6 _<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: p! s8 f, N0 O, f* h! q! n7 I<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) K1 K+ Q9 ^4 d7 g, ?7 H' ]  Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
' v0 _' O+ M/ ]+ v' S<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 a( ~3 p! r) |% Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' f% Q7 V3 k2 T1 \<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- n" V0 w2 V- A7 y. q- k3 O& D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, }9 B! K$ K9 L0 G3 h/ A/ _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ S/ Q) M& J' }5 B9 }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ y! ~, `5 r( U3 `' A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ }$ z$ u6 W" J+ r<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 P# m9 d$ _* e* [! r! z9 m 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 I/ F0 @! ^0 E; R这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- u$ ]: |4 ?9 z  u- ?2 C' I<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>