【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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0 w  J6 O, h4 w+ C我另将歌词附在此。
& |9 }: m" D, r/ r2 P/ b. WThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
& b7 ?! u8 u4 g$ \7 K1 aI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
  ^, j" m9 O, T) oBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& H. ^9 l! h/ t" B4 Q; I+ }1 t7 fI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
# e* A0 z# v" QBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
3 V4 c  A+ v4 }6 J! N  KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 s, {; H( i( F% q* Y/ l4 l7 {1 jBut I never did
: L: W; k9 Y1 Q' M8 k/ k4 E2 Y8 gOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 m9 M8 y( n# r5 v) R; q9 LIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: \. u1 ~2 O' j# k( YI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 ^' q0 r; ^( g( q, x# v" e4 rCan I entrust it to you?
( W$ e( V1 E3 D) f9 l7 ^Entrust my love within your heart
# v) p" {9 M  g" aCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ Q' U0 a; S2 N<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
- `' P6 L0 D: a& [$ @) D* H* \4 x% H<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
. x, W" q/ v9 G& x, m<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) q' X! _  t+ @<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; J6 I, ^+ W1 N' m- E3 T<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 c6 ~8 J6 i  u) M  i6 T: ^+ U% V$ ]+ v<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* k6 }; n) e& [& ]<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: }+ l6 g* R: g3 }<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# [0 ^( Z& }) ^1 d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# o% x5 y( n; D) L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  @/ R* @0 t, _- o6 g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* {8 A: Q1 G$ c) V! ]6 S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 S$ l' S6 e0 B  X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 i2 J, F2 d& q6 u<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) {2 h/ y& l' }, T<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
. R+ C- E- q. b. Y- D<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, F* G8 r$ D! n. E1 ~! v<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ i" S! b' h# `1 l' {( T$ K) R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 Q: y2 p* n" ]7 h<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# }! Y/ o) ]2 ~5 o" x2 R- F/ [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 K# R& }+ N8 f4 ^% S2 B9 `<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ p: |7 K' l& t1 ~2 N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: g1 ^  z9 H9 G5 A  [! H1 b4 I& B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 @$ f: ^% R, t; b0 b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" B: J; T% b* v: k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( n( Y) \5 W& {" C" E) O) R4 a/ N+ w<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 V7 O: F2 q1 b这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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( R( D4 u; h) s4 i  ^, [<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>