【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
4 ?: N1 ?0 s1 a9 O6 ], PThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ `! G; Z3 X0 x' CFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
3 g  O" m9 B8 ~8 f, y- u' XWe meet and talk everyday,
! S- d/ n: }# i0 H8 ^3 j( fBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ M8 V( X7 a3 M5 `, P* XI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
$ ?* J3 F* \" W1 y/ nWhy is it so difficult to express?
' S/ I7 F1 ?$ y: M7 a, cI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, h  c) z4 p' [7 J9 o# TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 g5 o& Z, M6 S5 ZIf today isn’t too late,
% c, D& J: V! R  z+ }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 u6 e6 @  s2 e0 ]0 m- f% nLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ `$ C% M5 u$ W* K- p% rIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. y, H* Q$ G( C4 g: J$ Y; gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ l+ A" {+ R) L; Q' v! w- u5 ~; t* lEntrust my love within your heart
" P6 ?8 ]8 E. z6 z2 OCan I entrust it to you?
7 z) J; v1 e/ m6 CEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) V( V5 Y. |% Z# ]1 \<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& y$ i( X2 _5 ^, V4 R<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, t7 r" K0 o5 P& m, B2 V& Q9 F<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) d# T. O8 a5 l/ d) }" i<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' B3 X2 E9 U5 G& d/ ?4 j. H  D<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
# R) I$ N4 l5 F6 Q$ a<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: v. G% d8 X) B; l5 C) z<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
! ]( u$ |$ ?$ l<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ x9 L: [# a" F4 N7 [% L<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 h1 w! e* E) Z6 D1 u9 d<P>我想说我爱你</P>
% z/ }/ Q1 j' A7 m& }2 w; d<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
# @( _: k% l7 P<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) U! _2 }# w4 F: Q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# M3 p# }, e/ |* y/ z$ @0 U( q& h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 i6 }0 q2 d. s" T4 M8 l% U<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
& c+ ?8 X) A! k* _$ A+ M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! T  Q- u' d9 U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 @& [" w  K* P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% n* T2 D- ^. F; j  _. z3 J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% ?- t2 @7 j* X0 o/ p<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
; e, K5 L9 `$ p9 t- C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  {, x: O4 m# K/ E# e<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 o. t# s9 z' D7 C<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
0 E9 f5 }# g6 B+ q$ w<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# H0 l* ?) k( K0 B$ }" A! r<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 H, U" n6 e6 o% U/ c<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' p5 i5 R7 c$ w% o& m4 p3 T2 R<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ ?/ ~4 W, O* p  ]0 _, A2 G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 z* d' }/ s* _8 x3 K. U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, y4 _4 n: z. G8 l* I; {<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- f) `+ ~5 U7 r3 U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 L7 ^, D# K1 ^) o1 f1 _- h# i! ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 x# Y5 d/ U7 E6 Q2 J+ \( S, I<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ ]# Z8 f8 V3 A7 _3 i  b; C+ d& g; {<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

- M8 s6 d. ~* F+ f4 \7 ] 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

3 j: n" Y, D% n9 g这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' S) E& K+ o6 ?# B4 c9 z<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>