【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 x8 Y  _- f* L& v; u, tFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
3 r, a9 w9 b  n* V9 RBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
! W- y% Z/ E" N6 e+ l! gLove… just the word love
8 f2 e- |$ R3 a  t# l0 yWhy is it so difficult to express?
# ?+ [; _9 J# D. d0 N0 u2 z4 kI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
+ b! @; W7 h  |, e' }One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- p% e6 H6 S4 Z9 ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 o  u" P; M" [6 x5 q* KI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: k8 n% ]9 t+ K! vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 X7 U2 c$ {8 M# b/ S' pIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& K  B: T+ k8 l% lCan I entrust it to you?
) E& E" v( _! ]) ]$ BEntrust my love within your heart
' |: C) o. A6 v( t+ g  E$ TCan I entrust it to you?
1 J" p1 h, j; t4 oEntrust my love within your heart
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4 F) o$ ]' T5 X1 }9 H( g[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
6 t' ?/ b3 z. ^% n<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 x2 H# W! t) d9 f0 n<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 r4 e: |: M; F" D6 g; |<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ M& H) |. N5 K5 m7 g* Y6 F<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
- Y+ B* u9 U5 O" L% J<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, w* H2 A6 Y9 [) h8 Y8 r6 d* R) i0 G<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; ~$ a/ {8 @& f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ E+ D9 w$ m4 O0 f1 @. e4 P<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 z7 u! j9 @; s/ d8 M/ H, f; M<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ O: f) S( f' O. p; ?<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 k2 `+ K' ?  J4 G- q" k<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
; B; K7 x( U3 T; A<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, Y! w3 i7 q8 N+ R7 R4 y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 F' g' D9 O& W3 U9 t# R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ c9 F4 N( c2 m* o* W7 b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( U( s6 p8 Z3 L4 q" J<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& i8 }) @8 B4 Q. L5 S/ V<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
% l6 Q4 h2 J; a- U- A<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% w9 r" v, r' f7 I<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( B& n# K. n) d8 R1 p9 \0 K8 |) S<P>But I never did </P>
" u: s6 C" g6 f; z# P( T2 _9 l<P>但我不会 </P>
' ~, |9 Y$ M+ p4 R+ h<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 k- I9 K% Q0 r' Z% q% ~1 D+ U<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ `! Q% Y( b" J) T, B0 H7 L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# a) D: b( j7 d& ^2 |$ Z, Q3 l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 A, ?4 F7 e2 z4 f+ K<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% p5 O4 Z% D: j! w4 M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 [, n2 s$ h& Q2 x. P$ S* E# k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ i; Q  c8 \' G* v! c( n- Y. [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 c9 X$ z: n: j2 W  p: Y; }<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 u- ^% S& q, v; d<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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1 n0 p) t9 O6 F; H. G; q/ h  Y* e这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>