【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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% t  g9 l: T' A; C我另将歌词附在此。
# H7 W7 U9 O8 {1 [/ ?# E5 `The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; h# Z$ }& U) }7 @& pThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
4 Y6 G2 q% W* C* g+ w. k- @We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
. f7 G4 N7 m$ D. b* N' cIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
: A% b- u' g: ~) c  MI want to confess that I love you,
. B4 |+ p: S: w' a* d/ f! V( DBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 V6 k5 _$ e' F* i1 E$ h$ vIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 |% r3 J6 A" w8 A5 {. [# ~Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
6 d* a# m, r/ @: b' dWhy is it so difficult to express?
/ y8 F  }) b' _" k6 Z9 qI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, ?9 B. s/ J, w5 b; c% ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 M% I4 e3 h( sIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 Q* n7 v' Y# [* YCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

- F: }( O! p- {0 g! U: y( o3 G% `  q[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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. [' ~6 N. ^0 D/ N" I; G: o<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; p' \/ J3 K  R& p* H4 ^<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( B2 y- O2 }5 y6 S; S) e<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 M  B. ]' H0 p( `* k; t: E+ P4 ^; c<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- x6 O; R4 B  W3 c<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ p2 ^- c5 H) s3 z5 Z' e/ N<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ Q/ l3 R7 F) Z/ G, Y( D<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& p: o% d5 c4 V/ y2 a<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" S  z8 H, S, V. X- W+ m<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 b2 c; y# `  W<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; |1 {: F$ o: c- N  {7 f  R! k<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 e) t/ Z6 q2 b* o' a<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! G+ a+ q3 p( [2 w<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ ]. y% z" y  R5 W<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ z0 P  D$ H2 v( _4 k<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; [/ ~" ~; I5 H3 ]( o2 a<P>但我不会</P>
  i% K- N" h1 L6 Y# C* k<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 z0 H, Y' t2 k8 M) _! f<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: i9 _2 n. p( O6 f5 _0 `8 z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 G! i7 n- \7 \$ k0 ^1 @<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& T8 i& }* v4 a4 t7 j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* M/ s4 E7 J* V6 H<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! d; L) v( O& p- l$ N# w<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
% [0 Z* e* v4 Z<P>但我不会 </P>
4 B7 v1 v1 y8 s. L$ `/ A0 {<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' D3 t" ]0 s9 {& x<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- }) P0 L3 t  N# ~  }<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ v$ f9 r5 m2 K<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 \3 x1 u, e2 }" @# z+ d  L<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 `3 c2 ]! ^! L$ R. |' H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 R; |. B' m5 W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 i  A9 @: t# c( x& F$ e- I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 @' p: B$ x; }, F0 t3 f$ @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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# d& Z  }3 X$ Y% `+ {) y 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

1 L' f3 G! `& A' }  C- G这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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/ }% A9 A- X! `/ ^/ m1 Z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>