【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" ]8 R0 Z6 W, V) J' e7 }  o) s5 A3 pThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
1 Q" X& C1 Q8 oI already loved you with all my heart
. P0 h' G: Z1 E2 C# @, q8 L( {" w% uWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 m0 x/ |% q' n0 @. t1 LI would probably know how you feel
% A% Q# [1 G% j/ }  sLove… just the word love
" m  v5 t) }- h5 Z7 _" f; ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ ?/ Q& k5 a  H( j) P3 gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
: N- q$ n4 Q; W3 e: XEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
, ]& O+ e0 @: z$ A& \# T, y$ |$ L; CWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 s) b; w4 S9 p0 o( X8 i+ EBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, v( K% Y* O8 v0 k- MCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- Y: J+ B6 j5 d' U+ r# g( ?Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
5 i, s* u0 N/ `- e<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
/ b* ?2 t& C* t( m5 V4 @<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
1 M- y/ `. o  u<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* [! i3 H+ b) Z& s9 O. O( L* ]  ?<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& M7 S* j( ?, j" Z* c<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; f. s$ q$ \/ [) \7 n: ]+ V  k<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 T3 B, z( z& g/ A1 u& H! D3 G<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& o- t6 C5 L* Y% v) F, w3 H! K<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 |& ]+ C$ y/ |7 h, I2 T/ Q1 \<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 m. y$ C, Q3 k% {4 e. _7 Z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
- O( _7 u1 i) M5 u  G<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% E! h$ e! ]' T+ @5 l<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: N" L/ x5 z& Z5 W3 s<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. A2 B+ i5 G. M9 r# W0 }<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 f1 A+ ]$ T; \! D<P>但我不会</P>
( U7 `; A+ h) y' y( J/ d% d7 A& ?<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
/ f* R! N3 s0 ~; X<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 o5 M' n) @5 Y9 F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; E9 A  y5 D3 m) p: a. ~8 f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 r/ M3 z$ S/ T8 m: ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. M! I/ q# h: B( Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ ]# N. T0 y% ?5 d8 p; M6 [0 ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ N6 ]4 n1 n* j( m" j5 v0 t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. Q5 [3 e0 w9 H' o<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ |3 _/ ]" w' z5 p" R<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" x: A, f. m& g6 t8 `2 [<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ t0 ], e/ i  S9 Q5 U4 O2 p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
# L+ h2 a( N& o* t<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 p7 H. Y( h3 l# r- `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! D5 ^- G* j$ k, F/ g" P8 N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- {# B% C5 O% l0 a! g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' }/ @) l0 @. U* |( }/ F- p! [" A$ r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& E, d5 \2 @4 o" _" @6 a  _# W( I<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
% h* J1 Z7 D- S$ h/ \5 G. h<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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! R" [% p( H) f! X4 }0 m这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. g! s  y& |0 H" h( ]- H% w- }<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>