【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ b( r9 k: y) A8 u- \8 l5 `From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
# J  X: E1 A# i6 }7 Q1 y/ YBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) o+ @" c' i* ?, \: u0 a- rI would probably know how you feel
8 X! I9 s$ h4 GLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 x$ s- ]0 l) t* d+ B% YBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, h6 b, z0 _( U0 P7 j, L# @0 R! H* MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, f. p2 o$ e" i$ mEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( ~9 a. Z( @+ V! U' O9 \I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& p, m9 Q3 D) B5 OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' P% f: k) O, w, ^2 hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  S9 |# G( N8 S/ ]9 OCan I entrust it to you?
! D; E2 v9 V8 vEntrust my love within your heart
, k) N5 v2 o. A% z3 jCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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- y( U% M$ J  r& k[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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: v: f+ J) T% A<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
9 f" ?/ c, s' Z9 T7 y9 w6 o<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
) d# Y7 C' {* h/ `6 f# F( u; }<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* N% I% F- i- `$ x' t3 f) Y; C/ w9 [<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) W' l, }/ }/ c4 P% X<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' s: @, C/ A7 S, f: C+ a<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 K3 A& l" M) q) L+ {8 g' D( W<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  n$ u2 x- k& d3 ~6 q3 D! q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 ]3 o! y6 _& x" {0 ]2 ]<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( p, H5 B: B9 N' G4 C2 q, R<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) [& s* A* Y6 `, @* N% _8 i<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 v& `& D. B: `+ w<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ f3 y5 {. ^4 t<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 D, b% H8 A; r+ L$ x& C# D<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 e+ S5 `- m/ I, [, R/ C<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 a/ j: B" a/ y) x4 O" X<P>但我不会</P>
/ c$ G5 Q2 B) F% R5 F( ^/ V+ E# i  P8 \<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 k! X( d/ A+ W  b1 t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 x! H0 [6 f* E5 a* k: }! d( S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 `( h, k5 y0 w! r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ \7 G0 W: A! I<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 Y  B7 r( c. ?* [" b# d# \: @- Q<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 O" f) P8 Z0 N- P<P>But I never did </P>
. f$ y% Z" }8 K<P>但我不会 </P>
# E1 g, {5 U" l# E% B$ J<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& ]4 w+ L, D: o) _( b* R& z<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: q+ E1 J9 A" f" K1 k& [+ U" d( P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
, K6 L% o: d8 U0 h" }<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, s* }% W) d6 t% g! |# g8 _9 u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# M$ p, e6 r+ _# [) m, t% K<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: n: T4 @* q" Y- E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 B% f9 r# U6 m; ]8 x; y# u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 X/ o( r! X  b& H<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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+ v- K( R* g* ]( @0 D 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: t8 @) {5 D: ?, }. r2 ?<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>