【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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, ~! k2 t8 e" }我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 I: ]) Y7 ~" x0 M7 hFrom the first moment we met,
; H) j* \4 N& JI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  \2 j: L. ]  V4 ]; x; vIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( h/ k, O+ p0 y' {3 gI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 _. l( k: l9 M2 t& x& r- ZI want to confess that I love you,
. M  S! D) Y7 v6 n6 |& U. ^- tBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 b' ^" @" K: yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% E( y# t) H* N3 m7 h% @' hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 ?" |' B# y6 Q+ a5 |Can I entrust it to you?
$ c9 ~% b! r; ^! e4 dEntrust my love within your heart
) r! w4 T1 u& d( ^Love… just the word love
  y1 d) G" @' `) f9 j: ^) ?. IWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ @0 ^' ^& ?9 L, t3 JI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& ]! d3 j+ j1 QIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' o. G2 r( l4 [- tI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' ~2 l5 f7 @- C, dCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

/ ^4 b9 o; x) R( {<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( l& u7 n+ {# K, n7 ]/ L2 J<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; E/ Q7 _: V/ a- a. b9 o<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% |9 R8 c9 f$ h- t<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ Z( m6 M0 j1 J2 Q& O$ Q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ Z3 i( `) m) z% \" D; C<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( @4 H# ?3 a: C<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 z# U! S0 H( j" O6 a( O% b- ]3 |" ~<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ f. E; H# o9 @7 I& A# D<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
9 e8 q2 ^: x& }  {+ u<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 z1 ?1 S1 d/ {$ X( s9 ]<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
+ {  F. V3 I. D$ D& A, A<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ H; c4 C  N$ q" [6 x* G! F) R<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: e. w) g4 p, w% g% y8 ~<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ S! i, N. W+ s+ V1 _7 g. `% ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- X6 C4 \! D2 |' x4 Y/ a4 @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- N1 W' Z* q( ~8 B9 k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; Q+ F  F( \1 q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" j* ]& g$ k  @$ ^$ d% O- \<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 \% C+ S8 u1 S4 X0 b. g7 O<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
  g( _: \- i8 l5 p- F<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: K( D2 s( _5 o0 g1 f, l<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 j4 J+ `% g& {. p9 z# o- b<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 k: O6 r1 z1 c5 w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  Z4 ^( o/ p, n* M) {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) w3 J# R1 B" p<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# i) P; o1 `% }* U! H4 C& x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
. _, k5 A5 N- w4 d* e<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

( S0 `9 S3 M4 D( d这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ y6 W% H) e# M+ ]5 U& ~* i( }: K' t<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>