【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& F4 b0 j! k% FThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
& y' p7 m9 r3 r" q; u% QBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 t& Q4 Y( ^/ m3 hIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
8 K9 G7 \* f+ T9 i: c( x; |9 \Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 p/ i, ]& ^) L/ y& J0 MOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
5 R4 m& o# R% t$ ]8 i9 L- m  lEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
. E- q* g- t7 vI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 l  O3 u6 m5 V' S: ?. f+ r6 {- {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* ~5 Q: ]' O9 L8 |Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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) N& O' c3 G! E9 O; `: G. m[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. ~+ c* B! B: K8 A9 J$ M2 S) ~<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% J& l. ?$ |' G6 `8 @. T8 X<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
/ z4 _8 \6 z+ [# T  x1 w<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 `$ O% Z' _5 q  j6 l3 y2 n9 J<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ q6 {7 {# J+ f% e6 |" S4 P<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 ~: h% Z0 _& h: M<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
0 b3 U& R9 A+ R<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( W6 ^, a- z) P# ~) m" A9 B+ R<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* ~- Y' X$ v/ {( `, U) M<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ D5 ^. \& G2 W- m, [( @% [8 P5 ~<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  e) [# B2 D8 G7 S<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, @7 x2 G& c  D; p# B<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' A4 ~/ r3 s) T; n/ M$ m<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! o! M, p: U, k( w+ V% m( ^<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
. E- Y& ]! q( j<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ h- C1 S* ^$ I0 J5 N4 g2 {6 J<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: F( ?4 t6 o" F; A<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
$ r" a% }1 ^$ A3 A# q" K<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 X& X! d: q9 G# y) `8 ^* j<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ e/ s- ]+ }( ?( [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: W# p/ F! j/ @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, H  e! q; a& K<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 C7 `$ Z" b" b+ q  C% I7 Z4 }" g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 f' B# u) Q, ~+ f( \  S" M" B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 v& |: F3 k, Q' e+ {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 d( I" Q  V5 o7 q$ p( N6 A1 d<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 J( p3 y; Y8 U6 ?<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 O% d8 ?8 n1 D$ N! v4 D9 z+ a<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. e8 T: L1 {% M; ]" g4 x! g" g2 P<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ }8 _( H% ~9 R<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* b9 y* j$ T: {0 B/ k<P>But I never did </P>
+ k  x) D* |+ L3 B<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
1 H4 M: \7 H! J1 I: j, i! j- j<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  C  t+ R4 q* p6 Z  t<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 f" g1 h- c4 V, Q0 L0 ]0 p9 i# N<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 ^$ P, N) V( ]" v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' b% ]: }7 r8 u8 A<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: [3 v" u; ~4 t: q' S6 [" b<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  A* F6 E, a  ?5 C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: T: l0 S+ p$ C+ z, j- d) m# Z, {0 |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 g+ W" Z' H3 n: Q* n6 y8 q% z) G( Y4 w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 _$ {2 ^) O% O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

6 y/ W# r9 o- M这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

8 W  W* S/ O8 W6 F4 p3 s! e1 e# ?+ q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>