【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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6 ~# B2 I- R4 d7 T+ s+ U( I0 W我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" H2 s& Q9 P+ Y, `That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- }7 S4 u2 _% I2 Z5 O' WFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
1 {1 S6 X; h( S7 M5 e, _7 ABut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 y2 h6 \3 u: c7 e% rIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
4 @% d# q8 [" {4 `$ B; rWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
3 f! t/ J1 k# l" t/ tBut I never did
4 U. X2 j* a( X! {. ^! R6 p+ Z  ?% T3 }One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( k3 j! Q$ M6 b* bIf today isn’t too late,
. x8 ]$ G% @2 h# R9 z. XI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 x1 s" n* x3 j/ j: NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) v+ [& e; i# ~; a- ~2 k! a- C' zEntrust my love within your heart
. d  \9 R3 J) i4 D; D2 W' C" LLove… just the word love
$ E* R0 t4 y. ^! @Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! ?  m) @- ~% ~( BBut I never did
3 N  A  k( _2 p# e* jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% V, g- k: Z2 F+ T$ o% FI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 T% v, e4 ~! Z/ y" T; lCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

2 g* t% U9 K; d+ k% u<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. U  U) g3 z% g2 Z6 W<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
$ p+ B6 [' m( G& K0 o<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& M. |) E+ e* Q<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) X4 u2 p- O4 y# P$ b6 Y7 Y' r<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ }9 I" X9 B! G  _<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, M- E6 m% d4 r4 D' G<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 y( {/ {  M' Y" z$ y* t, O<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 a' |1 A% ~% F, [<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
& K3 p  T6 W8 @/ ]! E<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 D; l8 p* z. B) v0 ]% u<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* W9 t2 V: n+ O5 E<P>但我不会</P>
1 Q( Q- i* w, i/ R% ]<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 H: ~3 y2 L+ k6 N" a<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ f- ?% x) k! j7 s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 x/ ?' G/ |- _' s: Z; ^<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, I2 C3 U3 e4 y  s* p1 N<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 l/ N4 M( x4 `1 G* u9 o5 p; K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: p% d( `6 z( F/ m) }- H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& L6 d! A) r  y. @! o4 A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  P0 E; ~* A( d/ c- _" {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
) g  v  u8 ~8 Y) u8 Z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
2 `2 g( O. r: q  j' b6 e2 U<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ y6 i; y; C4 U$ D<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- o) r( t8 a# ~2 l) K; h: w<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 K/ `2 b0 x8 ~* @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ r' z: b0 M2 Q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 C/ z# ?; V8 p6 c% N: g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# s; Q& m# e9 Y' v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: o( v  p( R4 a( b- ~0 ]<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 L" t, \& ~4 [1 L1 X, W( t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 ]: v: O4 n& z, g3 r* l<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

6 n% G9 f4 c; |$ c 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

7 f* N* L" ~& g2 `这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>