【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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6 D7 \9 V# R+ g我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 |- }6 t+ F# k$ ?If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
# a2 t1 x5 [# C' XLove… just the word love
% L5 p! @* c, C. Q8 Q- cWhy is it so difficult to express?
' K0 J! s/ C, d3 @I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 {8 _* q7 v. F( b# A  A$ ]8 QOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& T6 Q9 K+ t& n* T$ I& Y. M$ J2 F( OIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 D: C: I7 N5 ]& A# ECan I entrust it to you?
# S" a  U1 j; VEntrust my love within your heart
$ }% U  }) z. J2 ^; p) W+ E- ]Love… just the word love
0 U1 U, J- f  `3 L- N% xWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 f9 V: A1 [% g/ A! n+ V% ]. _' uIf today isn’t too late,
0 ~) E4 @! P  l5 x1 T, a4 BI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 }# P( z, y% u# OCan I entrust it to you?
2 J6 e$ b* L1 W5 VEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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( ^) t9 W5 Z8 T9 K, [- \9 n<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 ~. U3 A5 I6 Q. I8 y- q<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 r) N/ F8 ?/ d9 h% {6 @! [8 W<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 R8 B; v5 K) ?<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- K$ H1 D0 Y$ \<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( ^6 W+ r1 K- I( f4 U% ~<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 u' k" F5 F3 |  ?* p0 r<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ N* j) t8 l) S* j: `5 [0 U. c<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 n; C: d' N7 J<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( P' }& Z: R/ z1 l( }% q/ p<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
, g8 B& n$ [* F* @' ~/ O<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ Y' g- T* O% m9 J( Z6 o<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% Q  r% P. i- R! M6 k0 U<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ @' a4 B8 Q: W0 z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; L" g5 d$ O% L; @& o" x3 r<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 f6 p* B: d8 @$ k! d5 T<P>但我不会</P>
# F. T/ l2 h, f' o0 R5 p$ r<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ `9 H% w  E# L9 T) l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 L5 G/ W% i  C( s! Q+ S/ w! v$ L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: A. ?5 h7 C' ~) [! |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 b, O6 \& d7 v. @% b! V$ E<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' f0 V, X) R1 T<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
( z. L$ f8 i' R( P( c- e<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 @9 r' W; j- S- T  b2 A, O<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 b% ]9 w3 x6 w2 M' O<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% n, |! m) N0 c( q% z* f<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
8 x  K+ `8 p' E; \<P>但我不会 </P>
1 x% }) y% Z" ^0 I3 D<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 R) S" J& P. o  D0 C" f# {/ V9 t. c<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 C4 ^- H0 T) k- l<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ _+ C/ Z! x8 o% ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 U; p7 Y' l# E6 y7 x<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 h4 h1 h* }- p- K<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, i% D& w( B& ?5 K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ u, ~/ u1 c( Y  W8 J  S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# s6 _* h( J: \  J' N<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ I! q: G( M9 i/ X; H 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 s9 h7 Y5 n$ @% F8 S& I这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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: F5 r' O- Y* Q& v<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>