【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
7 e: g' [' L( B2 P. ^I already loved you with all my heart
; X6 K7 H- \  F& b. M2 tWe meet and talk everyday,
. u3 y- r- X* t* r# i0 vBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 z% @# c2 x. ~8 I+ G, BI would probably know how you feel
3 F/ d" f$ N6 G1 ]/ tLove… just the word love
1 n& ]3 L) ]( m; JWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ |& M1 ], M& d9 R3 C' Y7 ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) A6 a+ d# q* c% {If today isn’t too late,
2 G( Y$ I& S5 M. YI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 C# k6 Z! W5 S& C2 WCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 Z! c, T2 j9 n% _Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 \* w' z" {9 X& M! E! pI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& D: ]6 h3 d6 o( e7 AOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ s- ~/ T$ F" E( `1 O3 {If today isn’t too late,
2 J8 w6 Z& D% Q" E% d+ B4 PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 W' ~1 }. l6 P$ B2 qCan I entrust it to you?
" g& U/ R% d1 ^  r0 NEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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  d& T0 `5 X9 U# w! |0 }<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! n+ x* h+ @4 N) X<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) Y! G' `" V3 F. a7 c6 m<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 i6 F# |( L8 A% D; P3 e<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 r. B( z5 j, \/ s7 w' |( w8 ?5 C<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( a: ]1 I& Z+ a* O4 z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 A5 @9 B6 Z7 W3 U& w( h<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 D! [4 U* \6 a/ B  h' z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 U) M/ W- j; |<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% j' h4 _* a2 E5 U! M<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" @! {% I# E) r9 ^( z& q6 i8 Q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
% E$ o; e  K) E4 {" e<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
5 r7 a; G- {6 Z, E<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: i2 K' ]) N7 k<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 j$ W' A6 O" A7 J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# @8 w2 d( K% U% ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& d8 B. v4 w1 J/ d0 o- o7 y8 A<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
8 D$ q1 I3 }5 h# Z9 H  C( h, D<P>但我不会 </P>
6 P$ ~% S% y) b4 g<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
7 @/ v8 O! t6 p7 c) A9 B$ ^& f<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 l8 E8 l: W- Q7 Q  `+ V<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 a6 j  T$ r( z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* ?: H$ y8 T: G4 e( w* o' r& D<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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$ r4 b5 X, M0 I. O& _& e5 G1 `- x% A这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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4 P) d5 Y0 w0 j0 _& r6 e<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>