【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
# S2 g  B6 @+ g6 F$ F1 bThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
. W) E1 C; l: M& d0 M6 _But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' _' i; r; `( {* _! Z3 x: n  bIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 j0 S6 ~9 U* _4 ~I would probably know how you feel
; U+ ?  C8 {% \, m( ZLove… just the word love
6 H. D+ a+ [( V( T( m$ U" SWhy is it so difficult to express?
6 z7 k5 b1 o+ D0 K. E' {I want to confess that I love you,
1 N+ V( v6 z& i1 N9 q4 ^/ P2 O  ~( NBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* m7 k' K6 m9 z5 D$ r& eIf today isn’t too late,
2 y4 C% ~! w. y; d) t- tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
9 J1 x7 Z; n. W0 c$ g: p' BLove… just the word love
/ B1 }$ }+ H8 |* AWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. Z. b* k5 Z1 q& V& f) nBut I never did
. P/ [4 H% n! _- `One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 g" t" E4 f- O+ g' N/ VIf today isn’t too late,
! Z" G& `6 P8 }  p# ^/ ~- i# dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! X) W1 D, G, L" [2 {8 a  PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
. V  {- _) c& }1 rEntrust my love within your heart
( x6 c8 n+ k% {  e3 Q7 UCan I entrust it to you?
  i7 X+ B& U: `+ {$ L$ h, ^+ a0 kEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
7 O, q7 O+ a$ _5 p5 m: E<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 h7 O2 B' B% N% b* p* |+ v<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 y7 T2 i/ O3 s( f% {/ y, |<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 _  w0 J" O' f- }' e' `<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
# f  T% ]5 C3 m& v<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
- S2 t$ p  \/ D<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) ^9 W, k% P4 M<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
. N0 `) @$ C; ?. E7 e<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 S: {/ ~8 U4 _4 W( Y  k* r5 x$ U<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; s0 Q/ d& T, M<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 y: d+ d, Y. A" C! ?+ i3 ]/ j. V6 [! U+ i<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( o5 e0 N, I3 i9 g! O' Y- H5 g<P>但我不会</P>
) h+ c- R( {' P$ o2 s7 Y( F<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ }5 n" o, q: k3 ~1 v<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! z9 z' }2 q8 N<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
" K* e, C, ~# y6 }' ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ k/ Y5 p* D% y; L! D& J/ H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( ?5 R8 c/ ^2 ]% j/ W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: k8 {/ D0 N; t: P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  \7 _8 z$ ?/ w  |7 V: H<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ ]8 R+ G# }' M<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
/ ~) F. e* x8 ]) c<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
# O6 u* O* U- W<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  \8 M. x% f, K2 c<P>But I never did </P>
# m% x: ~. [( F0 w! n# q  s<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  r/ Q* n1 o: E" Z  T. c<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 d2 y8 N8 D+ C7 R4 z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% E' J6 k. |. s8 Y% i8 ?<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) A, I$ L: p: v! r% c' ?7 U/ I0 Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 v0 a5 w- W2 r+ I 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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( o* |; f& [6 l* j. n& d这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) \* R+ Q, p7 ?- p+ _<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 @9 |- m- D1 V. a<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>