【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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3 N0 @4 I7 ^$ F- b0 t/ v" h$ y我另将歌词附在此。
" h- U' R) q+ `% P5 @The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
/ O9 Q2 s& Q* aWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 d/ x" R# u7 |) [% l, `) IIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: a% I1 Z- l& V9 p/ tI would probably know how you feel
4 z- Y1 c- a+ D* g% A8 n4 aLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
. q  ?8 j) K# eI want to confess that I love you,
" c1 Z: m( A! h  f  @But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 s2 C1 @2 i  A% G; pIf today isn’t too late,
, I/ r1 ], B# {) S% GI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  P8 |4 v/ G% ~( _1 gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: L; h) m% {. vCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 Z4 V2 c/ Z; r7 i4 KLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; y/ Y, K! E) y8 S% v! _I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
3 j# U- _' Y, b; t% WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
. v- E6 S1 p/ P9 `, eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 Q" o/ b9 }+ k" h2 m8 O6 ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ b) v- \% |5 N7 p" O7 LCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( n4 L6 W9 e/ @. f% E<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, r9 X$ G7 R( D  R<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. ^) l. g6 ^: |$ O7 }& d. B<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- v/ z2 ?5 e4 K+ }. N<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& Q. U0 A6 y! Q<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, h! m8 e  W% r5 [<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, D/ O6 g5 ?+ r8 M' r+ p6 n<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) x$ i3 f6 P; J) B1 s5 H<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ g; ]# i# n# s<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* Y( B2 u7 @7 Z1 @: |<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ c! w7 x8 r, A0 ?<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. a. A5 x* A/ l$ O5 n# S<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
( P0 O  U  z+ m9 L$ x1 Z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: c, ~8 x, U! s: [1 T4 U<P>但我不会</P>
; e4 x5 v- v4 C3 p% g2 O<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' D8 i' a1 r7 z- a  i& E; t+ \<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 j3 u  I8 d1 g$ U! l6 p<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# p4 e- x' f0 ^<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 ^% @* _! |+ ]  V9 @! ~- T% p/ p% M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- X6 y4 D6 {4 ]# j6 `<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) e4 W6 Q" m% u4 K9 ]<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 B! O, l/ N/ X3 O* e<P>Love… just the word love </P>
, ^: S, ]& r7 `& U3 b9 V7 V<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) M* f5 U+ S' r, O6 H<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ Y  _( V  k! [; i<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 _, A8 g9 J( `<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) l3 D+ `) Z5 S<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ e6 P& e+ ?8 q  a7 M<P>But I never did </P>
) [3 D( a. _% p4 R<P>但我不会 </P>
5 F. |2 ~* ?, Z& c<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) n% S9 b1 ]7 l( r9 S/ C6 g. D<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 @! t  |4 g, l<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# N. h0 g) Q( G5 `<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* J- C- A( Z' ]8 O- a9 y4 r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# t4 ?- Z3 N& d; `6 f7 I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& l2 D- C" N6 @- X! g  o4 X  E) U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ Z1 i( c; m1 ]- b<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" v$ E/ l! e9 r7 j) A& }# ~* G/ Y6 Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- R  j8 H. B' r& F6 t1 q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 ?* m2 T& Z+ Y) l2 O<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>