【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 E7 t. {" b7 G  E9 c: a' ZThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 d6 Z6 x9 X% mFrom the first moment we met,
, M, g+ n" G$ k' e' r, aI already loved you with all my heart
! k: z# I, m' DWe meet and talk everyday,
5 d0 A/ y7 R& w# ]But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
, c1 \5 N5 t1 kIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 A4 [* ]2 r  GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) J7 b2 C- |$ i* S  kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* Z8 t9 D) X  R' ^- rEntrust my love within your heart
3 B6 V4 v, f, D6 K; B" nLove… just the word love
' T, R7 x1 n& p# P7 `' {Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; {1 C7 ?6 A" R: y; H6 |6 \9 {2 [, @! h: JBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 ^+ M( G/ g) q: |2 c7 z7 i9 qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& T; s1 F8 c' ]) Y- P+ i1 b+ qI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 }! S& W. O& e( n9 G& PCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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. A# L0 h( f: m7 k( l/ o<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" [3 P( E3 \0 Q# Y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
7 w# J8 y, v- h+ y7 Q<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
+ J, E9 @8 x- c6 _$ \2 e<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 k# p) N( m6 E9 A7 M; Z$ H<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. N8 x8 t- A6 ?2 x3 ~. E<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. _0 d; [3 p  }<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) O  y  r( d+ p% M<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# d+ G7 i/ V4 i1 z. @6 j& L<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  k- d, i( a; N% r: V6 \) o- \% o<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
, W7 ?( K9 y* r7 {<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
6 _* Z$ R; c% E& b& C<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% U6 M$ G' s: y+ ^2 w( {<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" G* T- @7 t& _$ y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* g! {4 R& u4 ~' W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ g0 w, k# s% ^5 y9 T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' E! G3 @( v* Q& W" ~' u% ~<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 y( }. j% ~) B4 V- T1 t( G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 ^; F) g8 l7 I& V; q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& P' r6 Z. q# S& d# g<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# z+ j% R% G3 j/ Z<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
! ~! D! t# o% `, X- C3 @<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! L# W6 d# _+ {3 }<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ K- G) h. H+ N) j0 }( t! i<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 c  s3 F, _8 T* g5 h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% s) l1 M" O1 W+ ]% I0 m0 @( m4 j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; B% G$ E8 o; y! e5 ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 \! @4 W  G, q4 k! [4 ~+ ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  e4 f, y/ q" q: O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 f& L- N3 u7 g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; F5 Z# f4 M: [2 F; x  f( `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
$ t4 j! m8 C' U9 ?* p<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

6 ]4 d6 |4 `7 Z: r2 M% Z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>