【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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/ r8 W6 S  B. Z- q+ L我另将歌词附在此。
' ^% F5 q  u) Z& W3 i! ]. SThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; M6 ~$ N1 B; tThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 r; B8 ~1 r# X, |2 ~7 ^, h1 ]! `From the first moment we met,
: G  l2 H0 d7 iI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
' `' W7 R% q0 ~+ rBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ X; K" A' r! [If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
& x+ [5 H5 \( X1 l' Q7 U# |+ A8 aWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ K8 A" x/ k6 b2 l/ W) uBut I never did
8 ?4 C  m! Z- G! a# ?One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: U( _! ?1 I, b+ o9 A# aIf today isn’t too late,
6 Q- B" V3 \$ Z9 D9 e  u1 N. k/ RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- U) {2 M/ y; ?. V" H  P; U5 @  IEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! P8 d4 r, E" X9 [2 K0 E+ z( o+ vI want to confess that I love you,
& l5 {. |9 H) N4 c; ^9 KBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 b9 a+ ?1 J# B6 X, zIf today isn’t too late,
2 }: w; B0 P5 I. n+ c/ NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 |7 r) r4 t: b; {) wI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
( [+ u$ m- F- K( nEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
1 l1 E- X1 X/ I: V" h2 S% R& pEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
7 U" u* K* t5 o0 A- E% o6 x<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ U5 b  W$ U6 t" b( K( v( v<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 H0 G* l$ N; n1 p) F, q* _' r<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
4 o% g: [% u+ \* ^* b7 s# y) i<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
8 J0 d5 I3 l- N; F( U2 R. E<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 j$ }" R" ?$ S. X<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 k/ Q  H' n$ N4 ?2 i9 C2 M<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) m8 A9 n- M: P7 L4 v/ K% P  m<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 X/ H4 [+ t3 S% a. c( Z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( l6 j2 r2 V6 p& ~# ?$ k' F<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ \- Y5 V. z3 g8 C<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 U+ G( V/ ~) a5 S  c2 u( E6 C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 T% X3 o* I: B0 P. _" d+ J+ G3 ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 Z  W, P( R! l+ Q* ^" e<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# c  g$ l8 c6 v5 G7 U+ i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 r$ L( m! g" ^$ e2 k3 ?1 e! j<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) u9 X7 y0 G& R7 X<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 k0 S& _" k. M. \( q) ~4 U<P>Love… just the word love </P>
4 @  k! [, @0 j: N& [9 _<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 m, N" t; I9 O$ F  h" G<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 i3 K3 E* a5 w4 u; M<P>But I never did </P>
$ D4 h8 n. O/ m<P>但我不会 </P>
6 N$ a, z; H# _+ y! r' A5 q$ U3 L0 K<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ B5 d" X) D# H) [. I& J<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! |2 @3 ~6 j9 ^  K3 _, s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( k) E" _: }* }) `* b7 N' G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  ~) ?$ W  U( K* K5 e# J% M5 r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. f' a5 z* I% o  f. d: m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 @: v0 s3 o0 ^! o# W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 c7 i' S, x3 n2 k' u. e6 x* N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ d# Z" s' |$ |# G; a' u6 U<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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6 Y# s. ~* `! r, Y7 w7 I这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>