【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
# k+ G" I; f3 J0 g0 R! r# X. h8 H  `I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 G" P" z! H. q$ W; b1 bI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) @9 B  e, c. q7 E7 N) oIf today isn’t too late,
' z) s9 {' C$ Z. }/ ~* Q; kI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ ]+ W! J! v4 X; x- F- I* w3 II don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# R1 j, \1 }( a' R$ jCan I entrust it to you?
" b9 X9 p* ]1 H1 e# O: q, f2 F( oEntrust my love within your heart
# L( [0 H+ }$ r, H& @( H+ SLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 ^$ C7 k1 h$ _. P" }I want to confess that I love you,
% o2 ], D, I1 |0 x5 u& N: zBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& y# J: v' U9 n3 @, O0 UCan I entrust it to you?
' H" g# V9 [5 u, A9 Q/ IEntrust my love within your heart
6 L$ t9 @% |1 ^. O8 \; p# @Can I entrust it to you?
7 Z# Y. |4 y, O9 w$ E" ?+ }Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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$ |; b2 W7 D& |9 r<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& J3 b4 O* o  P3 t7 t9 z<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 q: B& I: w' ^4 l+ O<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; p7 w& V6 e0 K0 g; U! o, H, y( b1 {<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: c$ U' B/ C6 T$ |<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! I& n, I- B( A, j7 k& Z' d9 \<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% s5 {8 D  m9 j( B- Q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 b. Y7 k$ J0 k8 K<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 o5 E( I/ ]" D$ y* h5 G0 H5 Z; w9 V<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 {; G! s5 a8 h- {# U<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, {1 _! R: l# v<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 v8 `. F$ W9 b6 L  N<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ [; E* Z$ A; q- T( s8 [$ _9 o<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- b3 I' I$ A& Y) m<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
1 v; T. B$ k8 i6 W<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: {. h* z  j$ T  L5 M' T+ l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 Q( j+ j: {, ~/ K% u. H<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  D4 r* [7 u) S; A" x# s4 f& \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 W" C7 v. O5 ]' [9 x. X' H9 k<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: @* T3 V5 M' A: ^3 g$ m: I# l0 G5 L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 X$ ?2 M! N; g6 V$ N4 n( x5 b2 I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. q* f; `" C' B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" C, I: F6 A4 R' d3 `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
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  L9 \- _- `' X; x<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
* J, v2 q: z  M  H* H<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- {9 |. Z* v# K8 w' b& R<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: H4 [8 ?/ G. I$ r2 y  F4 w<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ W3 x/ ?, Y, a2 [<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" p6 x2 J/ W3 Z' F2 m<P>But I never did </P>
6 x; P) P) B: J5 _: I2 d; _<P>但我不会 </P>
* P( h" T$ ^" R% j: Y8 {<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ I" R) T- n' ^( t+ H) K<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 ]5 Z5 y3 p  j' J) f) l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 v& ~0 L) i" _+ n: [) p( E<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" \# }; N/ e' X: _: r5 s4 L<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: }$ b- |) n. L<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* i" r5 T- g* F6 u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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$ x8 @5 u, R$ S$ N9 b) d5 t& n 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

2 s; O2 C* @" v这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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. T  v7 x) S# A  L6 g" R这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* g+ _; \& D  I5 j<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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