【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
' R6 Y- o, N2 _2 LThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 z' h4 K+ \# TThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
7 M% m& Y% e5 D1 zWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ b8 ~. t. {$ n) Q: p. s3 CBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 ^" z& }: m& o7 `+ KIf today isn’t too late,
) ~- d) ^# y) _+ f% j4 q  eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 c2 w4 o7 Y+ }" v3 \: JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 a6 t- O' Q- a. r- ?6 a8 M. J: _' eCan I entrust it to you?
% p% s: K+ h8 n8 U2 g! h6 rEntrust my love within your heart
! R) n5 {9 t( ]5 N2 }Love… just the word love
- k& Q. p. ~% T% v: eWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- r8 r% C& @# X" ^9 h, C& JBut I never did
$ j  j/ W4 I  ?# e: P0 b# e  tOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ K$ {1 e" ]4 |1 Y. c+ j4 EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: o6 n- r5 o; L5 hCan I entrust it to you?
1 R: s# V/ S4 a! H/ m$ WEntrust my love within your heart
  g$ [) G2 E- }: Q5 J5 @5 L8 S. C$ pCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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& T& C" Q& ]) z  X1 l<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& ]* r( K- T* h! s# A! p6 \1 v5 j5 l<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# Z) B6 Y6 L3 v. u, h. D<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! D) O: ^8 }. ?; }/ A3 X<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' t( g9 k3 I2 b<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; f1 F0 O) d& {# v<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
! {% O9 r8 C  e<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) V' H6 ~) C6 ]& K( V& e$ M<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
9 n' }: W  y; C<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% w4 s3 A1 P$ i- P+ F<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% G# B  S+ o0 @- h7 k. M<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
) d$ |; P6 z, G- S0 Q<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 Y! k- ^& \' r; o4 B1 p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" L8 H- Z: r0 w# M0 i& ?<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 B0 N2 E0 K  B6 R( }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 u; |3 G  L: s' c<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. w+ a( o/ w8 S* w2 h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% U7 n7 A( ]& g) y, O6 G. u<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 f6 c8 o* z5 s) m3 a<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 X% w0 D* ?# {4 H<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ {/ r$ W! t1 C<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
7 ]( x- \- r* r8 h<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ b/ n0 l: m: j7 ?) K$ ]<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
. X$ G$ k4 B( I7 f# ]. Z<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 l. |# k. Y# e6 O! i& F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 q  {2 V9 R3 w( i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 |% I$ a; a- m6 p<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

. \" R" I4 L2 K" O# Q3 X这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>