【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
. C5 S* p7 v) T) j) k$ PThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
' X% W" C! i( F$ V" Y" |! kWe meet and talk everyday,
% X# B2 R" S2 ]: N2 {* wBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
5 @0 w* t( H5 n" z/ m5 ]If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ D' u0 f, A3 R. b# dI would probably know how you feel
6 n8 S* F# i- o- Y0 u: Y$ lLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 R+ T7 p( f* FI want to confess that I love you,
$ O1 Q, D# Z9 l- MBut I never did
4 C4 L4 g6 n* J+ Q4 N; ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 o( ~9 w& l4 j3 JIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 L0 }1 l& V1 K% H5 ECan I entrust it to you?
# P; ?, i7 |; D; m$ w% yEntrust my love within your heart
& ]. ?8 t9 |4 W1 g! Z* {& _Love… just the word love
" b8 u4 S2 |. x7 Q! AWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: W+ U* [1 B, G. h, qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# t: _$ D# F3 v5 R& ^- ?+ v5 j) f9 S. rIf today isn’t too late,
2 X1 y$ e( C7 K1 II want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; B& J) m- |" O# RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- `* T% Q4 z# Y4 O( r6 m/ NCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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; \. R+ T% U0 x& i2 w[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

, x# z- d2 z/ g5 i- L<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  T5 f0 V9 z& e9 V( j<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* u0 c& k: b) R<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" M  G9 A7 k3 Z. u, ]  I<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ D1 k! g+ v! z5 Y+ D# ?<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% z8 n' q9 ?6 Z; \2 [<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, t1 f9 k$ C" P" ^  k, S# y" H<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 s0 _/ B7 s  o& M<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) Y0 z+ p- R3 r0 A- M<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 g5 K- ], J0 k7 o8 Y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* H: s+ B4 \8 {2 P/ T. e2 F# k/ x<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ f0 }/ X( ~2 M- K! |! q<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* P) O; g% G0 [<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 m* l- F/ p+ G  V0 a% ?; \! r$ b<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 C6 @* g' o- |6 c4 Z2 {, @# J. Z, N<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 L, S0 [* R. X% b# H% n<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 Q6 |7 O4 k( [7 ^& L! Q<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; h4 G5 |( f, G) b* V/ {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ N/ V; B4 |0 I, q% v/ d# Z. K% b<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' n8 N  }: r( h% O4 H( [* x) R<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 j& P$ x- e- ]9 u* }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# X9 Q: u; Z) n( o+ C5 m( K' {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 N. N9 |0 Y6 \0 y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) f+ ]; }' o- \% j, @<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 h+ y% {% R, ]6 t5 C+ W<P>But I never did </P>
5 \7 _+ M3 c" X( k<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ a8 N& |, d4 O  \: S, @# f<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ W/ a( Q' ^6 s  E/ r. d<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 d  l$ O1 m# R4 G  k. j<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 I! R8 S( S$ X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) O0 C5 [  R$ \* Y7 |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& w0 F7 d$ ?) o8 r+ l5 q, q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ _7 p" v" p, p* @* w5 i2 B0 b- T9 P7 j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" T( O- ^/ y7 b6 b  D& T6 B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) T' {8 y% J5 w: u& {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

2 ~/ W" q5 L2 E, F$ V5 p: l- J这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 I9 p# r) t# o( G* T: I1 q& }这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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# v8 j7 X$ R" {<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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