【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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2 E8 k+ S+ I4 F& A1 Y7 e9 [我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
/ I1 [- \) i# ^' b, |From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
+ T' u, d5 h7 B, ^9 A/ AWe meet and talk everyday,
5 V  G# O; M) ]& ~But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& H% O' D0 T0 ]$ ?I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 ?: \; R% t+ P) EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* l- u/ G* ]# l) C& i5 aI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# f8 N# H$ d2 V9 Q5 b$ hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 [9 w! M' J: `' f  E; LCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
/ v4 O$ b) U" tWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) ?7 o, @, R2 g) vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ `0 ~  o2 R/ hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
. t* r! J( b( u% }' J4 [% uEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- d/ o$ ~, m, i$ C$ }) d# w- \9 X<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  C0 y) z/ J& w5 F4 o+ j8 V<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  e  t8 V$ X9 L, |/ t<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
( f$ o1 X5 B2 b<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. D0 q8 l! d, d2 g$ p: r+ q<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- u! p; j! {) x' o. r$ B, m: c<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( D. X, m; A0 z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ Z  e+ S# M0 T( C  u+ P$ ]<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; O" c4 m1 B* I0 d3 i1 r6 O6 v<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
% c  D. e1 k7 |) \- i3 M<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, n# s+ Y1 b. ^6 b2 P<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ z$ h4 _3 L% i$ X2 u, N<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. \  S( ~5 J$ |* y' S1 w<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, u4 _4 Y* [& r  S$ `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- Z7 T* T7 u( y) _7 t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% j* v8 x; N0 Z( _2 S5 ~2 ]<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% F6 W% v# F2 o<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
) a; t9 `6 \+ e% `8 d' Y! W<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) \' D& K- v" [  u  ~0 o<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! l3 R5 i' {$ ]2 @5 i<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. [) V! e( l2 N3 X# [0 O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 a. g( \( \! m/ q2 c' [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 t7 D0 s) `  Y6 J3 r5 W' d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 \* @( @4 O  Z" r0 @8 ]6 `( E7 ]<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 U$ B( _' p- j3 i: T: e; _<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ J3 n3 S( ^7 }<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>