【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
/ g* T4 }; `- ?The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
5 S! Q+ N8 |0 l' T: `3 X3 CI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ T+ {# {1 u" F: e+ K% GI would probably know how you feel
9 I+ h% P  O+ _  a4 ~! ~& _; RLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
5 T( V# X* E) FBut I never did
3 ]6 ^4 ]3 b: S  EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ d5 z8 z* {2 I3 d1 R4 q! }$ M2 xIf today isn’t too late,
6 o3 h8 P7 V" r1 w5 ^I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! W5 N4 A6 F9 v5 y6 eCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" X. _" S+ Y+ ^8 H' ELove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# _7 B& B. T( z4 T0 eIf today isn’t too late,
8 x6 T" I6 A  e% vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# W' V9 i8 S0 k2 x" H# eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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' g) k" K. G% I! [' x$ L<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" k, Z* ?  B* U; t: z& a3 k1 T<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
" _, }$ t) {1 ]- m' W- {  C<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 E5 y( Q3 ^5 i<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% o  H4 ?2 F: r* S* r& Z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" t5 K. ]0 m* a# F- n2 l- M6 i+ G<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- U9 D. I  ]7 X, Z& A<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( q' n9 i  i2 O8 l  w& d8 u<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
- o( V' k* y3 @<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& D' k- K  K  N+ u<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
/ l) @* F" U' Y% E<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
: C) u  U* ^/ V/ l) }<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
7 i, A; l  ]5 u/ |* R8 j<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ k/ q! [! o7 P8 i1 i<P>我想说我爱你</P>
9 J6 b8 Q% v6 O3 d9 C+ E<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' p# q1 V0 c9 S<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 E& x- H% y! @( [( b) T<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 Q* q5 w4 G' X2 @5 q" x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 H) Z! S7 W  ?) M. j  i<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- A4 U& V' c2 |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 \' j7 k; A% k7 e2 W0 k<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 `7 d9 s) f1 @2 v<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
4 Q0 P. i4 d5 }8 r<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" {, O# |8 F% w" D$ d: a<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
# h6 J* N7 n7 ~- @, W1 D<P>But I never did </P>
3 \4 D6 A, ~, W$ d<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 T* w8 x  b9 i# ?- x<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
: y6 x- c' E3 V7 f5 D% j2 m- a0 ?( m<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: r5 \) M9 j. m% X$ w& q1 t* ~! E<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 j+ ?( T0 D! Q6 D: v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 N: \. A2 d8 @# E4 V' T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 y6 i! V  ~' e( K1 L) X+ e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 X! t8 E1 {% \1 J; N<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# h/ L; q% r/ _# s<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' |" M% y' L! \; }4 M" k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" T0 U# N  C- L  V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
" [; I6 b5 S6 X4 U2 @<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

# `0 r# T( d/ t2 T5 l 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 g1 B& t, {' q0 o/ _7 K<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>