【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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+ M5 U- w- @5 K) L& K8 k0 a我另将歌词附在此。
+ b+ @/ f* [' Z8 x0 {* q  [) L; iThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; [, g2 ~4 k) B7 I+ kThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" e+ s" I9 V% K1 A) I2 k5 _( yFrom the first moment we met,
- F% [7 S1 [( W; y" `+ gI already loved you with all my heart
! M! b* B9 R, r: J2 dWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
- I2 L& D) B7 N( d; Q3 BLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" ]7 K) m8 G5 ^0 `6 b9 M# HI want to confess that I love you,
8 a% b# U& A5 N7 p7 FBut I never did
% Y8 `7 H+ O  u# J. x! f5 oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- p# L* ]" A& i, @If today isn’t too late,
& X- X) k. z1 F( k5 `I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- `  u0 C$ N6 S* Z" GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ q0 }* f9 k+ c' wCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
& j  F& H  I8 r( J1 `9 gLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* J7 r# p7 ^, ~! y& |4 R4 pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) ~( X, Y6 Z/ e! iI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. B1 j* j) T6 C& {& X8 FCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, ]! j* m2 ?8 V' |Can I entrust it to you?
1 ^9 A% q8 w  L# m# H% J2 K) C' eEntrust my love within your heart

8 @1 @2 s( C* S( u9 p1 ~  W1 c/ w[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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4 w* c9 D! `1 f9 C# [<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- ^/ S9 j/ d% e( n: _<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& s1 H2 G+ G7 T5 A( s! m<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& o5 }5 K7 F4 g<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 ]2 r: K/ `) ?% m4 _+ N7 X" P/ _- e<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- @; M2 N) U! r4 R8 E: D2 M: L<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ d; c  D) `# `( M: w<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 D" g1 f/ f! ]<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
. E9 U* y! ~! U, H6 x; N5 ~- x& {<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 [; R. U$ f9 |+ R9 L<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: ]9 x2 I( B3 i9 m  p<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* \  V  O6 T; \' g7 Q6 [4 N5 A<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 t) _4 K. m8 H) w( O9 H5 a<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% ~, {  [. h1 `# Z. z% z# Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( R( Y0 H8 t/ Q. E8 O<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* B: X' Z: z( @8 G# e! B1 N7 b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ Q% i5 c+ i) G8 [1 v( ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 R% N* c) S9 k! D6 G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ m# z% m2 s1 m/ P# j<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. x* W+ C/ a' Z. Q; Q( D( t<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ D& w3 g7 _# e1 Q8 X% R<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
5 }2 j0 Y, L! n& V9 g  ~% r# g<P>但我不会 </P>
+ F* o$ J7 W! [4 y! C5 a1 X( j<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 t3 [) j& |. x* ], s& ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ K  `1 N4 l" l. y) J6 [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. Q9 f5 ?) F/ c, T9 |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ h& `' K5 T$ @5 ^# d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! S  f9 F4 _9 k' S! \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 e0 C- |, ~. I7 s' G* |<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 a# B8 u% S) T) T# H# s 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>