【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 [; S7 ]( E+ d% OThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
9 h0 Y  ^5 B7 v( q! lI already loved you with all my heart
2 Z+ W/ z; N" Z* O" c' bWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' x; e6 m+ @+ l; DIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' b6 m: }: ^+ b6 Z) R8 ?I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
% T4 s& a- F- @# n% TWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; I0 ]% W6 A+ j4 fBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 \  h9 V: G+ ^5 Z' |4 c* zCan I entrust it to you?
: ?) i8 }; h4 Z' SEntrust my love within your heart
' z+ ]+ ^9 j& B) S0 P$ J& x( X+ `Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
8 i. u1 X2 Z# c& k7 NBut I never did
- h5 E$ P. J8 y- \- x3 k: z5 vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" t( j& p/ ^4 h/ }5 rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( O: `& A" ~- i6 p' h4 z; A" [Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. u7 X' F4 e# d' j, r8 L& e6 }2 u<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 |2 ?5 I! \7 x/ Z7 J# L<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( _8 K2 Q+ y; Z6 |% J<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
# d: H7 y) C3 G<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" }) K7 Y9 m8 W6 L5 d3 g6 k<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, S: }; z8 j$ |% _/ a<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. G$ [/ J; T  _5 a( {) p5 Q! i<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
8 S7 f: x$ I2 v  y- a3 _<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: i9 ~- S; T- O<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 Z$ x, T( i, J! `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
% w& M# Q% E1 J' `7 O% Q<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 e5 O4 f6 n6 [3 N% `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 x8 {4 e& r# [& U( S3 B2 C7 Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 Q- p& h) c2 b, n<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: f! `6 @% v6 e8 A0 \5 e# c4 O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% C+ p; h( O0 H% _* Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 U0 X1 @0 I( ^3 o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' A  ^7 ~- P! E2 ]* R<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! Q4 o) V. l( ?9 H5 k<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
- T3 d- q* q9 d/ _2 g4 t3 D<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& `5 ]" X% v6 B$ [$ Z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- D! x/ v" U* g4 [<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* e5 P0 F0 j! |, n<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ P6 k3 f6 I. s; v" r1 M( j5 B! U  b<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 V; d$ ^, Q! a# V1 s4 P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* q  @" t# A" [0 I<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, D$ o0 r# @! o+ d# g3 M' ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& x* \! r1 _% ?. `- }<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  W% @+ L- {6 Y1 N# H' _- V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. i+ R/ |  @0 w/ _: u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

: t1 Y0 k0 p. K* [这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

# }8 ], I$ @6 B; U这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 }- y+ ?' n8 T) |4 m<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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' w: D, X, N9 `! e2 D3 Z# [<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>