【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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0 T5 P6 ~, C4 M) ?- r我另将歌词附在此。
6 r  G3 }9 V( X& o% G$ p8 \The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 X3 |0 P! ~. C  c7 U, |From the first moment we met,
+ ~3 S- n1 R5 f) k3 `I already loved you with all my heart
" r- h4 W. S! w4 a2 D  H  s. PWe meet and talk everyday,
3 j/ S+ [! G2 G$ i9 GBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 T, g: Z, s' N7 ^, L1 BI would probably know how you feel
4 l4 S) q: X4 d& }$ f1 H9 `& Q. CLove… just the word love
* |( ?( Y/ \" J- _( k; j6 }: B0 NWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 H" r& P) G& o7 lBut I never did
5 P  a/ N3 U  m" Z0 M; z9 F& lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' c  Y( \2 h6 D: yIf today isn’t too late,
! v  a: e- l9 t8 WI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* I% p4 ~$ K  a+ G5 s6 e- n% oI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ u$ I/ Q- L/ m9 iEntrust my love within your heart
- ]4 W6 X# V# b4 N3 cLove… just the word love
' y% o$ D7 I7 P* H4 m" M2 zWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- Z7 {. V% I/ N, }0 ?4 CBut I never did
+ Q' V& I+ O! \: eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
. }% v2 m: j7 m" h7 AEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
: {2 y$ J* e  t, Z  E: [Entrust my love within your heart

* ~% q1 b0 D" R+ J[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

: u3 N9 a" i' k- q' s<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 {. T& u% x7 ^7 y1 P<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& J! @4 g* ~; N. o<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
- {% }7 g! k/ M1 }<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
  P( y/ e  u3 u5 M9 U0 ?<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ o' S  b8 c* `! {6 h! q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, Z* f& H* |- v<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( s1 v- K' Q1 T, }<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% f* s4 p$ a) @: `1 {<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ O, X. F. e2 N" M" c<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
9 M$ f/ x' k8 y# n4 i5 m<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 e: i9 D% I% o0 B: J. _1 g<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; z( V+ R' F. T% O* h7 ?' q<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
, Z: ?8 b- Y7 L2 z- O<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* i  c6 @. D6 `& o* Z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" B" \4 s$ ?. |! q8 |' o9 k5 m<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ ]) ~3 Q; t1 X0 M0 t2 e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 ]8 c! Y5 L& E; j<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( F" y0 r- u* s/ |& M. Z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 C3 K3 F" \+ X/ x7 X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 v" t1 D3 g# U1 B<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
' h6 j7 }$ @) E<P>但我不会 </P>
9 r0 o" _& }2 C" A9 @0 m9 n  T2 }<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' s" }! X  C7 V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; _, a4 [0 W( h2 \$ d5 Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! y* s. ?3 F* M$ @6 w9 U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 h0 P6 o4 ?! q2 C+ M. K3 |: q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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' ^& s* [9 U/ j6 Z3 M9 [1 B& a  ]: C$ c这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! B2 R/ _  I1 h2 z<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- D* U; u! w, q  u: u1 P<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>