【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 t& o6 e% H4 I歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 F7 C# ^9 F/ x+ p* @8 \: vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 w" [0 q9 W, W* RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' Z* ~% L0 p8 F) MThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ g! `: q. ]" `3 t1 x" HWith the moon kissing it every night
, \' R% D& c* TSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ U" R7 n$ Y: {# }% rYou needn’t fear anything
1 X" E$ }2 U9 u; Z/ z" zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 N! @$ P( R; a" o" kEvery other word you utter is love
) ?8 y3 t9 R( ]7 ]I really want to know just how much you love me
8 v) j# f$ z$ [- ]" Y" g2 e! CI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ W8 q+ v6 l* |( p' q/ T0 `I want so much to see inside your heart
6 o$ d2 F4 E% K. |+ C; u7 W2 s+ O; pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% u6 p7 U* G+ }4 BI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 g8 v) u( n+ i7 r6 k$ y% v" O3 \4 aWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
- ], R+ ~; X) d  h' ZIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 m. p. A% Z2 Z: [+ ]6 b# yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% o$ [" K% j6 x2 h$ L$ P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: v$ h4 P/ p0 S8 A) @) T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' `4 N4 V* L& [) }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% a' h2 U6 D$ `- \6 F2 m$ w$ M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 h3 u! Y+ Q/ {0 [. z+ H5 J& U* s+ H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 g4 K  C; F; f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 b; }" X; L- a' X0 ?8 b/ c  E# x$ t: m% A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ U1 e/ z) ~+ x% Q+ m. V2 _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& z8 I3 j  _  K- }: n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" C1 N7 p6 k, Z/ X% ?: u8 s<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. C2 i2 B# N& p! \" i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: g5 S/ P; j+ u- j<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) i7 r% V- F5 F+ {/ s0 J# q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 u* x( B/ g8 c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 i+ ]- ?8 L0 r9 G# d1 i9 z, z7 A& {. T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' q  B3 i8 C) N' s# H) r9 H& W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 a- K' S* ~5 F. t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 N7 M' l' E6 {' Q! M* `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  {( N* ^7 _2 R1 d! Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! @, f) m* s3 [" e9 T. O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 c; C1 b7 j' D4 U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 I! A4 w6 b! ]1 n6 V0 g# B9 @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& U& d7 b( t0 X0 L0 W: Y4 Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 q3 ]/ D( f' f3 d" _1 v<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ r$ k$ q& K  U6 M2 F6 E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% P8 n. }8 x( d- Q& c<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 j/ d) d6 I6 ~& v3 H' L  u5 ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 y& v6 @" w; x1 n( C. ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  e0 V% e9 y# m* i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' u4 o% @# X$ B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 e$ a8 J; d% l1 [! X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ h9 v& a1 @+ t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# T: @6 q, T* n! O9 k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

& Z) g4 h; `, u* i" ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>