【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* [* Q* w( p8 ]/ o# HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" q  J" p' \) zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 U- T+ l# `. G. }3 H0 D3 g% s/ }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 @) h0 C  b" a: w# r: ^+ ^Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! @  n  n) l6 M  a5 k, Y/ j9 oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 R& s1 f$ X2 L5 n/ a* y+ U8 j5 e( [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! G) H- ^% r6 z  Z  qCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 L7 i+ R' w) R6 z9 q( ?7 HI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 m+ ~2 s5 c3 x4 v$ _If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& K- l% J- @- T# z  I. Q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( C, S4 r! Y  G% U) {% \' c<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& l8 k2 y$ d8 q5 B! l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ t! q7 a/ l) Y# R# C4 K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 z- D3 Z1 s/ m# r1 y9 Y3 W/ h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 C3 X/ n7 ?$ l! I1 c$ D: w! A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 M, q$ Z) Z" F1 f2 M, h" V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 h* n2 b! S: K5 O% y- u3 Q4 U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 I2 ~9 S  J) ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# X4 n9 L/ r7 s8 ^4 ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 E- v# x5 W3 l% R; H2 O, w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( s" A* Z+ u! v$ k* j; H; L$ m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ b: v0 S# J# A0 ~; [! z0 y* {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& X' F* Q! u9 a2 G6 t. O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 r8 p: d( O; k* R9 J! ]# t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ L4 w0 A- D  K; i9 A; L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' w4 `# O# a7 N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' a" o: ^$ {* M" Y" @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ A4 _4 W1 l3 \, u1 H# V; [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) u. Q- L/ p8 k; V  J( k1 P0 |' g8 f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 a( m% Q  K# m, x7 e0 P, A8 ?# `: j<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" [  W- u: O& L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# |2 m& {! Y7 B9 T- ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& U2 ~1 J1 c; b9 u1 O6 C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  n$ e' X' J) ~4 L: w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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' H% X1 }4 H" g/ w; B& E: H& f: A我请你剖开它

; r5 \  Q1 ]/ h; m; V- l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>