【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& f, m% S% I9 g) h  NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% s/ n& v/ g6 }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 Z) ?8 B: I7 Z8 \Seeing the sky content with its love
) K) h  w/ `% C" `/ [* D/ \. VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 i' H: M7 H6 i! |  ~+ YEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ s* O! X; L$ {3 hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% ]1 R2 _7 N$ d1 A4 K- J4 wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! b' q1 ]% b' Y* SI’m still filled with fear
2 U7 I5 n, P+ T1 m; ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- X) D% V1 Z, UI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: g; q# C& ~* R4 eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' y5 A7 F; s! `: x! BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( n: r1 F7 T1 V+ m* _1 ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ L5 b( I8 T4 d1 m' w' d8 e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 j/ `, y! K7 y( }' ]4 C+ Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ U! D) d8 F2 `: `6 v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* U0 s. `0 n, R9 z. S- K# F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ S7 b9 z9 J  i3 K1 |5 [% T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! S1 b4 h/ L/ a  f8 k  j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 \3 c/ M* i, t. R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 s) e, X5 T9 _* K) n$ |) s3 m) i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) w' Q; i; l* l/ @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) T+ V' [3 d. v<P>你无需担心</P>
1 C9 F+ [- }$ N7 z' U& A% ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ D/ s+ v) {7 l$ Z- d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 ]2 q% `; V  z& U. x7 [8 w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 {1 y3 x2 M$ ]- u# B) F, z! r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ r% ~, v4 f& O' H  F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 A* j/ h* K) @<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ M' ^$ C# c) \, s5 @: J1 J4 |4 n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 L. y2 `- d% |7 h2 g5 j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  b) L3 }: i. _0 @  {( f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* c. p7 X0 ^4 D( m2 [5 |* H' |+ P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 u9 u; a6 Y- f0 [, w<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 ^2 U, O7 i! \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% V+ Y7 F+ c2 Z# q, B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  |# E/ z4 ~1 B6 A  M6 q( w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! d: Y) }1 W/ F. O# r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' k. R7 t# N$ B5 J# S! t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( S% n- y+ Q' x2 b- H* q: {5 A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ n* q7 [1 t/ s/ P/ \6 M4 t0 e: C4 C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& g) r7 l' @, l' p% h4 D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ @/ E$ o1 _8 s, J' ]: t/ c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% y; E5 I+ r  a5 j9 H$ I% I: x, }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# o) R6 t2 ~* D0 G" T/ n我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! T5 ^7 P6 W+ X+ p, m0 d# w1 P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>