【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
7 _; I7 Y0 ?! J& pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  f8 g8 d7 A- A' v7 ~. w9 FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( h% }% J% ^: xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% H, y  W  R! R5 C$ f7 I) JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, m& L, b& a. M6 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
. O( ?2 V9 G' sWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 k3 S: u: ~2 TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 O2 R/ u9 W- m+ WEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) \! K, @7 n, C1 ^I love you I love you with all my heart
- V# q3 R/ j1 Z* E# Z) R5 eNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: m' y) C' M$ L+ `7 n8 f) }9 }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. x' _) e; \& f- }1 jI want so much to see inside your heart
; O$ h1 h9 P+ bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( }/ u* I7 f3 v9 i3 v) p4 U8 _I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 u( L0 g, a1 m. n4 P) b9 nI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 ~# E+ {% L7 m2 p* ~/ g' b8 U$ @# [# MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 c& j/ g- l2 c. k1 C8 T3 E0 R: U9 p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" i0 b  q( j- F, h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; P( ]$ T. ^  K! A+ F6 x; g& n( i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ d: F+ i  @& j1 u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 }) N5 T* b3 y! s/ x  P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 q# e' T, B: G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( H/ Q) V9 T% [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 e+ r% b# }9 l8 K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# r. o- G, ?: f1 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& _& y; R2 k* M/ t( s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# x0 C$ I. B( f6 ?* t+ P" J<P>你无需担心</P>
, D* H$ @% ~& Y- m) s% H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ g$ Q9 d) ^0 ]! N# Z! G<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# g" v; ]) y6 M1 _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; x& r# Y# G4 K, G" U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" N9 e# N4 `- b! [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' W/ Q' g( W4 O  c9 k* L6 }1 ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 F! ~& b' z( M<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% K4 d1 }* W& V9 @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ o5 |- }, e' f1 O4 L7 Z% h5 D4 X  f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 e! f7 R, o- q* h( D# n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; l$ F: ?  q# F% ]5 S0 ~& z! X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 I! I' I, u/ M1 C+ x6 S/ O  T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" J0 T3 G0 W0 B3 `' D+ ^8 }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 o' o1 z! Z( D( C7 P' a<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 V9 o# q5 f/ P" R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 m  Y0 z" F# I  v6 }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 P6 u7 o" p, j, M* Q) i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 C# `9 Z6 ?: Z3 S" c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 H  N- l, W% X* _, |2 T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; l5 a# ]$ U; T4 W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* A0 q& ^6 ~9 y" M7 A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" X  M2 R; [  k% [$ j# ~<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 ?& g' s$ c. L9 f# l; [8 P1 t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' l' ?5 C  Q  N$ Z. I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>