【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 M2 l: w; o- [- d歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ n3 U" a2 q  B( I+ W' ^+ \0 D8 }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 Z6 p0 E. u$ w5 V7 S/ KThe sky is happy down to its soul
  O: a- F' s' k- l, S6 D$ e5 nWith the moon kissing it every night
- g$ t0 x% f& T' n0 f$ C0 U4 iSeeing the sky content with its love
# N9 q1 D9 M, w$ h) SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" S7 Q) D0 a  M( a5 GYou needn’t fear anything
  A6 P- _0 k7 s- {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" S$ r9 s3 t9 L: w# ~! l) DI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& b8 h2 q/ L, R3 c/ q: Q4 k- a, \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 P3 {0 C5 ]" R2 EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% ~' J& X1 m! v: E# K. M) IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% ]* J2 \% X5 z5 l9 s" a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 E) d) r" ^! b4 r8 q2 v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 B. G9 d; [  N) ~& |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( j. d7 Q3 m" W( b<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* ~4 A4 s* E1 {$ G7 V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 V: m% G, @/ }. R9 k( S+ F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  x+ _4 m1 Y  ]7 H6 {7 p4 Y' P2 u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% K' ?  C$ \/ J$ ], F8 f# ?<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 A! X; h6 C" j$ R7 Z! f7 F/ d5 z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 {) {# ~9 m" Y% i" {( V, p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; ?( L& y- ]! X9 \) C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% |2 C/ j5 F# Q' a" e% N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; b# [( }/ [# x& r; t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
* y0 U8 N; a; _7 Z$ `( a<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! s) o' \: W# ]3 Q  E2 H$ S5 r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 m% l5 b" A- r6 @7 m3 E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 _. G( ^# ^+ z3 T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ V0 I. X4 K+ v4 u$ J8 g+ i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 P, q6 S! Q4 F# Y: _8 ~& Q<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 [  f/ \! c" D+ H8 n" O! B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) I# T& a: C' a4 s7 q' u  ]<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; b! @# ]* I% ?/ Z  q( M: P) X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# `( f* C+ W5 Q" P& _; ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( \( w" a* r" s/ W& {) G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, ~8 L  E+ l$ o. x2 W% y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 r" O3 K8 ?, }: D* ~, P& v5 C+ W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 w1 U8 Q* Q+ A6 N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( X. X2 W, {2 ^, ]' U+ N1 [我请你剖开它

4 L4 t, w1 y! F  @; l, X+ ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 [( f+ Y6 C/ b% Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>