【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! t7 ]0 Z) E8 i. m! n% MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 a1 m# s; K3 V! @4 iYou needn’t fear anything
4 w9 R" k2 `" pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 H$ X6 z6 L4 mNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 O0 }2 ]* y# F3 \8 wThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# U' F" g, T0 `I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: O# F( t* z) s) S* m3 _8 G/ gWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  M- h& s- I1 k3 |0 E$ aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, c6 m' j* `+ ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- S# N( u. r0 j; ~8 v! `# o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) i7 L, k. k# c* Q' Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 C: u. O0 }! \, f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% }( h1 V; [; A# O6 X<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ }6 L8 l  y$ q) f' K, _( \/ v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ ?$ r6 M" |8 a* U. ]7 B7 o8 u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# X4 |/ R3 E7 n& D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  o, B; ^' P+ x0 [& \4 |- I7 l$ S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, e, R0 [6 c8 m- R: K% o) n7 U) w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 Y7 u2 t  h# u0 H+ g% W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 ^. V% m, `: M6 n( W<P>你无需担心</P>
  U& A' E- C# J. \& ]" Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  F! B, @5 ~5 v3 w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" Z: D! g# U0 G( y5 E7 E6 {5 }5 \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" \1 {* ]" t. `; }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, ~5 Z- C. s; a) s- p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 s3 q( n1 c2 Q0 K6 }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& p+ u$ L9 _# a: X# }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, _- U$ w  A5 R, F$ u# U1 c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" f# I3 u, I8 I$ B& b3 ?* r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* a# I3 `3 q" Z) n& ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) t! b, c9 _  t8 J& i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' C. [8 J- s1 r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 t- W0 B* g+ Y* r# H1 w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 B& W0 K) g1 L7 S% y4 A我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>