【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- j2 j( ]5 p7 \$ _& aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% j2 b2 S* u: P! qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 E) D: M* N& c6 H0 U  _With the moon kissing it every night
1 O. y; d( X8 u" ^6 N# kSeeing the sky content with its love
2 G5 G  V& I) }' _' ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  M4 R$ [: P( m, X4 o4 a2 BYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! J2 Z& |5 U: B. N; j- J0 B4 \3 ?" MI really want to know just how much you love me
( w9 X1 s# i$ f4 v, FI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 e: _0 o3 r9 N$ x1 E" |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, q/ C) K& B2 e. q8 e) JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& t+ O0 z2 @& y' k! lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
: t9 }2 e: @& _2 x3 Z% hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* p- S" }! v7 [  G8 bWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( O& ], e$ r7 L0 a" m4 ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; J% U( k. u( ?' v8 }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* S, c% i# V- x" ~$ y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' d9 t9 A: G2 s- x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# r! b- O$ H- _. [' v) \; K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( h1 v5 H& r; S( l: f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 q  g+ Z7 l, z0 l3 G8 c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 p8 x/ q! Q! Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 g) r7 w  H1 m; k. d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% j; q! w5 m$ J/ v: b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# K, F2 C9 X* v2 T* ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 Y2 a% F/ O- h. t* [! q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) [. J/ A- t! X- |/ [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ R4 U0 E1 u! K# V0 p# K" W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 K( R4 T* Q: A; M5 ~  F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# y  _! L7 `) F4 B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 ]7 Z" P1 d8 M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! X* X" Z4 s) W6 X; v- Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' G5 k' d% Y! x3 \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ T. V: g6 W3 B1 a$ g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 {5 _  C0 J/ R  T: H3 L8 V  k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 l  b2 q2 p- z1 B' J7 V( n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: F6 \4 d5 ^; ?2 ?; q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% a0 i9 O3 t6 A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' M3 k1 x7 O2 _" n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 q, [( r+ a8 H7 ~; {* C# N, x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) m+ p& B8 j' L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% M8 X: R6 G6 P9 s% Y  E; ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 M  x! v; B3 n; w! T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 C& @" ]. i# K: S7 V8 y3 J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 N  s: Y! v5 @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>