【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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/ `* q% a! u+ n我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
1 z2 R; R0 _) M8 F3 S0 o( xFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
0 p6 h0 ^" J% _But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 ~' {) X9 I, ]$ i* U+ k) KI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
" A; f+ T5 L; KWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 R" }; K' H+ a# j8 X) F$ f. AOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
& P* }; b% f  m) \! mI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! L6 j$ O/ Q2 HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; {3 J' L1 ^$ O( t1 ]Can I entrust it to you?
9 n) N9 c- L: d/ I1 E' d) A/ kEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
+ |  O2 n" H% FWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 O8 ?6 d" U3 }- J' K4 k( n9 `7 iI want to confess that I love you,
, P% J% D* P0 W. d, N& }But I never did
/ L7 Z' Q/ a$ L# _One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) E$ B6 T3 c% T7 ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' ]' k) C2 B5 e+ X: N! _0 a  HCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 f+ C/ _% [6 m& q* l" n+ `Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

3 U6 R% M7 }  k# Y$ P' B1 p1 H[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

/ ?  K7 \+ k/ u4 R6 @<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
5 h( f) S1 _* G# o/ Y- L5 }<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! k  K% e, f% c" ?# c<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
2 m. F$ T, C# a; K<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
- j% H8 s  b' J* w<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: S, h. V, x4 [0 e<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 p4 V$ |8 Y3 \1 G4 V$ |9 M<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: R* E& ]& e9 |<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" P4 ?7 }  n0 H, Q+ \<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
( N% U  n' u2 g  p0 T, u<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 V( J$ J0 {$ d0 C<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 }* t" @: b* n6 ~5 B, r8 b5 s<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
& x6 e$ L  r8 O0 o/ I' I<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ L& ~9 d5 u( |: h4 ]<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ U6 b! K; q% L1 e2 z6 b- A/ L! p<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' }! |8 x5 y# t2 x! D: }  _<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 B. J/ P/ J1 J/ Z0 d+ b& ~/ _/ Y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, R7 v8 H  y$ w+ o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ Y; x7 V# m0 y4 s3 q& a, k" ^! v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( E8 q$ ^$ |. I* s3 y! j. Q! s<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 g% b2 F. L* `8 r* ]<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 q, y4 u! R( C3 z/ d7 @<P>But I never did </P>
* p; V5 _: k+ x<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) S& Z' w5 d% E7 I! L& [! a5 X: F<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: `, ?9 m, k6 w" \7 e; P<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ {, N/ C3 F! P. S<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 _3 |0 @2 f" ^' D# E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ ^& D+ S0 }8 V$ t1 j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 e' x- U6 ^! b; a' r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! M# m3 \0 }% D<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  e, ~6 p. a7 k2 w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" P, ]  V+ A+ Z! H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
. g/ R1 O5 K& m8 d9 o1 _7 x  ~<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

, K7 x! I( n; e% Y1 e% {: p+ Y! B 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

2 x  y. u% z; H: d% ~4 W  S这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>