【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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# w# T5 A) c% ?, ^7 s" ]我另将歌词附在此。
) i5 I* `/ Y  ^The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 U( Z+ p, i) i0 M$ u9 ^, XThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
/ d' W; c0 J* l1 A) H8 LI already loved you with all my heart
4 {* \- ~8 j5 e- I; mWe meet and talk everyday,
4 g  h' C, `3 H& y  H& hBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' P- D" i9 B! T5 i3 y/ EBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% I$ n! g2 Q2 U$ z) c6 j+ VIf today isn’t too late,
1 ~" {& H: F6 b6 YI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) r# n4 K5 J9 z+ s1 y2 E3 I; Z6 PLove… just the word love
" N: X5 p( _  G# `/ }Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- K' {! }8 V2 [& F0 x/ n) xIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 T' ~- v" \- mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 r8 d6 a# X, O& _! [( _$ uCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
  t8 U* r6 _5 k: REntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 Z/ l+ \/ Q: M$ A0 u9 a3 I( @5 s<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! p0 C1 D2 L% D2 p  S: }<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" e0 G/ E+ p5 C9 Z$ w# q: J<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, r0 g7 o) }& G7 q: }8 V/ i, f" A# b<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
* Y- ?+ K3 a+ J0 Y4 K' F4 v<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  {: L: G/ V2 N2 N0 J' |. G/ b<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 Y% D4 Y4 c  O3 k1 y, M7 L# b<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; ?# C7 O9 V4 `/ J<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ N) a( r: p9 H9 e) |<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 W, K3 p  d+ g5 j' X5 N1 B<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
, ?) M" K) S& s/ [; x<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 p2 x; k0 J5 q$ i2 ]* r8 y<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 U8 `  A4 G! ^- _<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 M$ X& }% E) Z! D<P>但我不会</P>
- p& l) V$ A  Y2 k<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  L  t. ?, d! ?2 N$ o% J# N<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- u7 K! \9 Z+ d' g: l9 c4 q! J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' ?2 {1 o  Y1 f+ W: e5 ~<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 j3 e- d/ w7 L+ ?. V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 U" |. _% {1 X( F# P3 C! o) y' g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 Y4 c7 j% x5 N$ }0 L/ r<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, S3 N+ a6 B; j* i) ]7 ]; s<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- c1 v# R( X2 w+ z7 W5 S<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, i& g& |" T: |: L! o<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
- F9 I# h+ ~9 U3 m3 V1 O/ ?<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ y3 r, e9 P0 i5 [: N; m. K6 v: G<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) \. O8 T. l4 C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ R2 C7 {1 w2 O<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ k9 m3 t3 H5 S/ e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) Z2 S$ z( y+ c3 v<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
. I4 _6 k% ~& Q; a, @# E) m<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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+ ]8 m& S( A! I# B+ l3 w; E这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 M% \1 X# Y8 [9 |/ M2 i) |/ X这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 i0 Z# i4 O9 z% [% p<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>