【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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. S4 p# x, I; w' R8 K/ @我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 Y0 u+ k: \- S) l& f8 {+ _9 m" JThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: }/ Z- u& v$ VFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
& g9 X+ ]# B' P+ m( H; }4 o$ hWe meet and talk everyday,
% a6 d  U: }/ DBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 T8 w( h2 K# i' A7 e. _3 NI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* O4 P" x. F6 ~1 C- NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 d( G, m, F* p/ P4 v9 i, u! HLove… just the word love
- }& L) q, M: ^4 MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
  q  H' |) U& y. @But I never did
5 u+ S0 X# o2 ~/ X% sOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  h( A+ Q2 k" n' bIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
+ J( G8 p. k" n/ II don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# J* v7 i8 E: b6 V2 o" _& PCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
! y* p3 J( \2 \; [" W. }- sCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

7 d$ ^# ~( f0 N[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

7 Q, l1 Q; }" y" V! c0 p( a* N<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
8 r0 W! g- X9 p# ]# |% z<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  A, d; G/ k: G) y! x- Y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) Q3 R/ O5 ]. [6 J, p! N2 w) o<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# d8 a8 P* _- O. s* v3 ]<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 T1 g4 o  o( P# m% P' h<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: Q4 q. S, {  {$ }' R  S( s<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' ~5 h  h/ e# d+ A  s5 h<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 D* C2 [, M% z/ w' Q% |" E: j<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% E- B6 i7 n# ]( x' s. l<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" W$ q8 w' m! l; s; Q4 C* j' I<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 \& f0 Y0 X$ e& g# z; |" e<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
7 O( L+ R9 U+ [" m<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 l4 P* l9 c7 c3 K<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, M/ |; a9 M$ B1 r<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  \4 v% P3 |. c7 ~7 [  c<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: t2 a3 X' w- T<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, r( V: t. ?) M/ I& I5 d% |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ v( k8 J2 d( ]8 [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" A9 q! e5 d5 o* c3 v$ U<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! U/ h0 `, T8 P5 e7 r, \4 [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% m; D2 |# x8 @( H( y# a<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: ~2 |- n% `1 n( S+ M; J<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# {$ L/ Z3 i3 |& t4 {<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, Z0 u; p! P" C8 c. F; }1 C3 A<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! N4 R" h* ~8 x' m' l  U5 i<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) B( b( l/ O3 I; G0 p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 A* K2 q2 T7 Z% D" i<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ V# \; y; ]& c& N, `" Y, n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% P" ?, z' A$ q$ M* w. X, p3 |5 G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& M+ @, _  M% w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, d& ~- K( l" F. B<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  G: u& V) F7 Q  o9 X<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

1 P7 J, [$ t2 k' G 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

! y; q9 T! E' u2 J  w1 s$ F; _这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- k; w$ f2 l# A7 q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>