【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
: X7 Q7 h% V: W: ^0 f. hThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
$ d2 Y5 T6 o7 v& _4 SThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: ?+ u3 T7 S4 Y7 rFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
8 H8 w) [# }* t: GBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% \, H# v5 l& M. s6 S, [* S! k( wIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% }$ I$ g, w2 II would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 x) x8 z* {4 CI want to confess that I love you,
' m& Z# X6 S0 _# g& T* ~, r8 HBut I never did
' b7 K: f" @& h; ]6 D# kOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 H; u* A, E. z( a' s' GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ S5 w1 d$ V- F1 m6 D) ZLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 V* r6 C( i1 wI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 \3 R, b- k3 Y6 T, UIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 S5 U& {/ R8 `5 O7 E& L) y) mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 ]9 C) E( o: |' p$ O& PCan I entrust it to you?
) p+ M) `8 S- a/ N' `Entrust my love within your heart
2 E) |/ ~- o4 f1 _6 V4 _" QCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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/ b# A* x! ]8 \) k6 S6 n* G<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* Y1 {" P! H  M) D+ C- ~<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 P- L: b" ^& I! x. s9 w<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" i) ]$ k! c2 Q3 o& E- h% o<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
8 D" {# g# X% P7 \1 Z& r<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 [3 ?/ ~) A4 m5 X<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 y2 _! y; v0 G% F8 Y. [3 `8 n* f<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
- n+ z) b& l  b. a1 e2 F<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 h, t" v" h9 v<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* {/ A0 E; l; I: r) b( K! `2 @<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 r: {9 Y& j9 a6 o<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 N" I1 ?2 Z" ]' [5 }; d<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 J0 K5 I) o) A& y6 x5 s<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: I5 o" w6 Z* P! D<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* U. x' D) t# I$ q# m<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 V3 h: m' q" x5 z/ ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 m: n8 a, \( i1 e. ]& X9 S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) X- Z+ M( R2 `' c<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
& m/ M$ |) n) X9 A9 n4 o# w) h<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% K. z" O( V# [1 r<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. f9 |6 P" a( \: _1 A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' l; l$ g* S3 G+ Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ j  r  G/ {/ k: m* @. _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% O! J; i1 {6 G, K<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, S9 j+ K7 N# L0 \  q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( j5 I! j3 x6 t; J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ B! m# K/ C" ^% V! l/ p% R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 ^* O: n! y( M: ?( }) k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 w( ~* f' g+ L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 I+ Z# {+ ?1 t# H<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
& p( F1 u2 C. m9 T7 S<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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: K5 C( j: o$ y! @+ v$ b0 G这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>