【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
' V+ _8 F/ |% B8 i$ V! B  dThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 @2 S2 y3 H  w$ X* @$ n( ]That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, B- `  z- j* `% }! xFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
- O+ t; J- B0 u8 wWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
( Q% j, ]8 m4 {% p* kIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
8 j6 l) L( v8 q4 Y8 o" B) p0 rLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) m) k  f; x& c# k' c; X3 T/ W: aBut I never did
) V5 d4 c# U: I  L2 \0 vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 H' v5 m3 @6 G1 l9 [If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ ?( ]8 ~% L5 v. D# _. ^0 {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% T! `3 ~. G: I, fCan I entrust it to you?
" {$ ^- n6 |* }Entrust my love within your heart
8 e8 Q) @& @2 U5 T! M/ z) RLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
- E% E4 L$ X. q; X2 C* Q7 _I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' d: J* {" @/ Z3 x" u/ COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" M) I& }8 J) E0 \, mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 Y4 q9 i% w$ Q) d' R. o8 iCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
+ Q) j( R+ o! e8 uEntrust my love within your heart

6 c& {4 c/ r) J[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ ~8 v2 Z4 F% K# h- l* H: Y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, j" R! v7 V) ~, s4 c" u<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 l# l# s6 L* i7 m+ Z7 C% o4 ^2 E6 A<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 {4 t8 H0 N3 y/ q4 @<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ V# m5 D  F+ m0 r2 x<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ V8 Z1 t# N1 m! i$ F6 L# t<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; Y9 y; r% \& p, {. H, B<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- j6 Q  G$ J) r% ^<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# W! V9 g8 l- _. @<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 T8 m! a  y7 i9 ~5 I: Q7 [4 w1 D<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ D: b5 C% R' O/ w$ A<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' p( Q# m; i& _( [9 t8 J. x8 o<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 M  b7 [- m% a) l- {3 [3 G<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% x! Z5 V4 x3 z+ a0 ]( }2 N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' H3 [+ F- _- t9 R2 O) q2 _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  O6 T8 S& R/ C5 X3 U<P>Love… just the word love </P>
' J7 a* G- n9 j! v* s5 `9 Z, E3 B<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* n* U" g! x: U1 e+ [<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
. a0 \) N4 l$ t9 b  s<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
6 X* ^9 W9 {* t5 j<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 H. ]" i& P6 _4 u+ G<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ \2 F7 @, I4 D6 S. D) y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! K5 l, ?( ^( T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 d+ A& A1 y1 C: a9 d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* K' s4 D: `& @) _4 l# k, H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ L9 }$ G* P. T% ^6 X: D0 I& B3 e这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>