【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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) b4 q2 C% y# {( u% W# i我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
6 ?! ?  Q; |5 [% p' fI already loved you with all my heart
- \1 w3 G5 w- U- X. j. x' {" AWe meet and talk everyday,
7 S+ v; u, Q" S3 v+ G3 dBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
4 f( W0 [; R( X3 i* Y$ M/ {5 B# F+ tLove… just the word love
* m5 T! O& _6 o# b/ k( WWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 V. o) F5 w) T: G# w' {# VI want to confess that I love you,
8 m+ L# k* ]& RBut I never did
! {, @5 }8 N: Q5 \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' g: o: h8 H* Y% aIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, ]9 c6 n% k0 ~7 h+ _5 bI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ o" U$ D3 a% J  B7 b% tEntrust my love within your heart
5 b9 w) n0 Z/ Y% k! U4 l/ T, @Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! {) ^6 J- |; pI want to confess that I love you,
; S9 l7 L* T9 D! _9 ZBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( ?4 Q" j* W) u0 @2 L, wIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% ^$ B/ n" e1 w( e3 O! G) \Can I entrust it to you?
/ `7 h, G  z5 }- H/ yEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
7 F$ L2 e+ a! Q. @; ?- C3 s+ mEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

# n0 z6 w8 x: ]* u& u9 _$ o<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
- t; F( I; W, p, a0 k  V" P<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' E% I2 [8 b5 H0 y8 I<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
/ G; V% d7 M$ F% ^5 T1 x/ E5 A9 q<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: R& m9 |1 M' q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ f5 z; ]  _; |! ?+ ~- C<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 b' V+ w  E+ h9 Z8 W<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' j0 p3 g. @0 f1 p$ J( c<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% Z. L" G: X4 ]( l5 `8 D<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ E$ v! D% L/ e0 s1 u<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 j4 N: ?1 b1 m: h: W<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 b2 B+ [" U" `7 c$ K<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 s. t& q0 R5 l<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
) }" r' n" D+ o! c5 P# a<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 G3 a: O. V( K$ ]8 r1 E7 c<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 L2 M6 I2 W& T+ }. [<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 U5 K7 A2 R) C. s: l3 U! a4 p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 b5 f2 g  f+ K1 o5 [( D1 D/ L<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ _) f+ \* y5 M. w1 b! J  _- R<P>Love… just the word love </P>
6 e6 F3 u. ?; N3 d4 v) M, ]<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 ]$ h; y4 q& @3 [! q+ \<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) Y; Y* D& v$ D) Q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  e- _! B9 ^+ q7 F9 |* d. l( X# p2 E1 d<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
+ k, h( W7 o2 r3 m( A/ D. M<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ |" c& Q! p- E<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 P! l+ M  v( u+ U8 H  G! _. A9 {1 y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 n1 W7 c, {; i2 L- y: c<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  L1 O* w; k$ m0 k- }. Q# x( h! \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ f& S; y$ o1 H- q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ d7 X7 b# H8 e/ T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 {4 x, b2 }9 r) v4 B. K- j) Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
& O+ N! \3 C9 ]7 {/ C<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
) ~2 [5 H) D6 {0 ^* I2 K<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
+ r9 U: K' L5 E' r/ F) p
! v! D' L* o$ f) j# l( s, _& |这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

: @. p8 o% v4 o" k这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 ~$ r( w0 G7 B. b6 r& Q  f<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* U$ H/ x2 g* l9 A3 i% M; a; H<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>