【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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9 i. D5 D* J# v1 \! U' \我另将歌词附在此。
9 K9 _! v5 q# p: EThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
( c$ }' z+ y" e& B0 h; BWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  i1 x6 n5 C& b7 |If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
3 M' K& d! V. V0 v/ G! ]; o: M8 BWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ |$ ~* R3 W, _1 f2 r; B4 }But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! K& R4 x) M' f( U7 `! tIf today isn’t too late,
4 D6 _7 C0 o' J/ J, ]" mI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% v3 B$ D1 i) G+ M! ^1 |Can I entrust it to you?
* n# {5 ^7 c  I6 P. h, u! \  uEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) ^  B( v$ b  ]But I never did
5 l0 Q; t' D# C/ W0 K& Q: qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* M  s/ x3 A8 @. h8 ^Entrust my love within your heart
% Y* J2 V/ H2 l+ m/ l3 g7 N( B' sCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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& p- |1 e/ W+ K( D[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
5 y' b1 t* C9 `2 S: U2 U<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; q6 W! ?* L" @3 _% v, }3 S<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 p8 `, T& p1 s' h<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: ?  h3 s" y2 w& F* [: f<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ H- t  V" I: @+ N; C1 L* ^<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ H, h$ {, W. g0 i<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: ]' y' f0 U: ?3 I& K/ |# O<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' Y" N+ O: X  |: L. f6 x<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; \  O5 }6 o4 Q2 g' ]+ Z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# b0 I1 m+ D+ W* _+ M4 A5 Z6 m: I<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 Z# i' w7 ]. t: f6 u" @' d# d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ S; j2 M- W  ^2 W/ H- }/ J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) v9 @& x/ a$ b, m- O/ G8 }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* i; m' _8 D0 V8 L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ b" Q+ I* y: l6 v3 I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ U6 o6 o: B! x# j1 g7 w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) Q' p6 A/ S, c! k9 B<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; d  j+ K; k" q; f5 W0 [<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
# S5 @! ^5 x* N) ]% z6 ~<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 J- E0 q# L& \7 e" J0 G/ w<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
" H2 c# l9 V6 B+ D, L4 ?<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 {% y4 g( j) G+ @0 m5 v8 ~3 l<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ l- T. b8 K, B/ I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 _" v* s9 Q% v: n+ z5 w1 N9 z2 |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ Q; I) C" d& n. b# G( ^4 H  C- [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  `" ~0 e9 W0 C  p/ G! m3 f<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
; o) r. H0 _% p<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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* B% _' p1 A2 x& _3 y9 Z7 Y1 s& f这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>