【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
3 U3 f4 ~5 B8 ^2 F5 LThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, O( e) s! T0 Q* }  r* JThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
, D& U0 p9 u6 G3 o' nWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" _' k7 }$ \' ^1 h7 tI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
: B% @; U- a* |8 TWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
8 i5 I. S0 k( Y' zBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- }( X4 W8 Q$ m- E/ vIf today isn’t too late,
: p' D0 e/ o8 L7 `% wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; \' H1 ~( s% x: v5 k8 W$ B6 u0 hI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 {* S7 S' L/ w0 @) {Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
+ K) P& O* y: R, g1 x' sWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 |( r/ k2 [6 F' Q$ F, TIf today isn’t too late,
8 d! |" f3 J; A7 H6 HI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
' G! w; `7 [% ^! QEntrust my love within your heart
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3 V' H+ K+ K1 A9 Y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" F1 T! |# T$ C! V$ @$ Z9 y8 a7 g<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! v8 r0 C0 P( [( e7 u% m. v<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 x; c+ G  n+ H4 Q* d<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 U0 Z9 F; U7 i5 ?  u: n<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ r+ I: l0 P4 a/ c4 p<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: n  K5 V0 }2 D6 p: T& O, a<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  C7 A( ~- x9 z* m0 g3 @# K<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
$ i( b$ n  ]. @1 y+ ~<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* W. b: w+ S! G8 ?  A<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ F/ i3 E' t& y5 J4 n7 L- W; O<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 h- ~' z- I2 }, x. s' K<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* D. b! g/ G: ]) I- A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 J; l9 D- ?, o! t" U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, h1 o9 \2 Q7 b" d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 b2 u9 H/ z- Y" L$ k! K1 g( \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 C$ ?* m$ `8 @8 E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. U' |: E7 r# V9 }7 c% A<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 u" b+ `2 ~2 U! z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
  K' q7 ^. O/ _: A0 O, ^2 w<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! e) \7 \2 K# _<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* Y5 L7 l3 h! v( j# V# \<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
  l( E4 m4 b3 w  ~<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) I% L# }2 n6 N4 Z& I8 Y8 L* J* |& i<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ }4 q2 t4 h0 J" z& n* |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 `  z1 W+ b9 Z' J' P$ z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: [# Y3 v7 S. F/ H<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- \' u' A& V/ X6 G- _) I& v: m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 I: `9 k2 B+ h# o, S<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
3 M& I! X, W$ u$ @- y% }& E<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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" P, ~. V/ [* G  K! R2 O& l' Y 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

, e, r. a2 q9 i这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" G0 \* W2 W  {0 R# C( B<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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% j$ T* l" \1 k+ R/ A/ D' `& A# T<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>